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Haven't read the novel, but all of the Pokemon ff I have encountered were from pêdøs who transmigrate into body's of 15+ yr olds. So for having a young mc (Ash is 10) have 5*. Also, DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL
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If everything is considered you have an impeccable writing skill. I love fanfic story like this. Not too overly dark (if the author considering a dark arc is alright please just not too much). but there's some grammar mistake sometimes.
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A interesting pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Es pokemon asi que toma tus 5 estrellas 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Me gusta mucho , quiero másssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss ssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss
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Tanks for the chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏿👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐🖐
Pokemon fan fic 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Haven't read the novel, but all of the Pokemon ff I have encountered were from pêdøs who transmigrate into body's of 15+ yr olds. So for having a young mc (Ash is 10) have 5*. Also, DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL DAWN BEST GIRL
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If everything is considered you have an impeccable writing skill. I love fanfic story like this. Not too overly dark (if the author considering a dark arc is alright please just not too much). but there's some grammar mistake sometimes.
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SUPER⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐❕❕❕❕❕❕
A interesting pokemon fanfic. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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