/ Anime & Comics / TDG: The Reincarnation Of A Normal Person
摘要
A normal person that was struck by lightning by 'God' was reincarnated into 'Tales of Demons and Gods'.
Pretty simple, right? Rightttt????
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[Note: I do not own TDG, neither do i own the art used in the profile pic and i had it saved somewhere on my computer, if it's yours just contact me and i will remove it if you don't want me to use it]
[Also, English isn't my first language but you won't have to translate English to English here! Most of you know what i mean by that lol]
[P.S: This is my first work so if you can leave any suggestions on what you all want or what i can improve, please do
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Grat job overall Love the story just pLease dont drop beacuse mose good books dRop for no reason at all so keEp up the Hard work.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
only 5 chapters up for this review, it has a good start and has potential to go far, just hope that the author will update regularly at a decent speed
Great job overall, Love the story, just please don't drop it.so Thank you for the Hard work.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Great job overall, Love the story, just please don't drop it.so Thank you for the Hard work.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Great job overall, Love the story, just please don't drop it.so Thank you for the Hard work.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 Great job overall, Love the story, just please don't drop it.so Thank you for the Hard work.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
Happened in the first timeline meaning nie li isnt reincarnated and its good,his "cheat" powers are knowing every language and some minor powers,we still have to see if he got other cheats very recommended
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I have read till chapter 10 and I can say confidently that this story if continued like this for at least 40-50 chapters, will be one of the best fanfics of TDG.
I like the way it goes and to be honest with just the chapters it has, it's already a much better TDG fan-fic than some of the ones I read.
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Very well done by the author, shame that it seems to be dropped. Anyways, the only issue one might have with this story is that it is leaning towards harem. Other than that, everything about it is pretty solid. Writing quality and Character Development are both great as far as I could tell. Story Development started getting a bit slow for me personally due to the whole 'Ancient Dragon City' arc but it seems to mostly be there just to awaken some sort of dragon bloodline or something in the MC so I see that it might be a necessary evil. World background is pretty good, though I can't tell if the author just doesn't know what soul force levels are equivalent to ranks or if he DOES know and is simply creating his own numbers for the physical power of fighters. It is pretty confusing really and I see many people have commented on it but that was basically the only major issue I noticed. Story didn't seem very interesting at first but it does have some interesting and unique ideas, like the prison training arc for getting a normal person accustomed to killing. That was new for me in TDG fics. Also, author did an AMAZING job with how he explained the personality change after transmigrating into a 13 year old (I plan on personally using this idea myself in my writing now since it is very good). Overall, it was a pretty good read, if a bit short. 4.6*
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cool though there's quite a plothole on the last chapter, how come the dragon trial is not known when it has been ransacked already many times and im sure there are not the only one with a dragon soul form
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卷 1
- 1 Chapter 1 - Arrival 3 years ago
- 2 Chapter 2 - Soul Form 3 years ago
- 3 Chapter 3 - Ye Ziyun 3 years ago
- 4 Chapter 4 - Father-In-La.....Ye Zong 3 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5 - School 3 years ago
- 6 Chapter 6 - Teacher Shengong 3 years ago
- 7 Chapter 7 - First Kill 3 years ago
- 8 Chapter 8 - Curing Xiao Ning'er 3 years ago
- 9 Chapter 9 - Officially Becoming A Demon Spiritualist 3 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10 - Busted 3 years ago
- 11 Chapter 11 - Prison 3 years ago
- 12 Chapter 12 - Fighting Prisoners 3 years ago
- 13 Chapter 13 - Fighting a Silver Ranked Fighter 3 years ago
- 14 Chapter 14 - Planning 3 years ago
- 15 Chapter 15 - The Tiny World's Jeff Bezos 3 years ago
- 16 Chapter 16 - What can you do to me? 3 years ago
- 17 Chapter 17 - Shen Xiu 3 years ago
- 18 Chapter 18 - Shen Fei 3 years ago
- 19 Chapter 19 - Pharmacy 3 years ago
- 20 Chapter 20 - Selling Purple Mist Grass 3 years ago
- 21 Chapter 21 - Cultivation 3 years ago
- 22 Chapter 22 - Ancient Dragon City 3 years ago
- 23 Chapter 23 - Trial 3 years ago
Like the characters also the premise of original time line is cool idea. Like that he is going to create his own path. Cheats are good but let's hope for some surprises.