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the mc is a villain and i love it njnhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhuiiiiiiiibananacx ttttttttttttttrc
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This is how monsters should be, MC is a real monster This is how monsters should be, MC is a real monster This is how monsters should be, MC is a real monster
great fanfic... I hope you make it multiverse travel so that it has more than 500 chapters includes animes, comics, novels, movies. DONT DROP IT
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揭示劇透Ótima História. Protagonista manipulador e inteligente, viajem por mundos novos. Ótima análise das peculiaridades. Ótimo meio pra ser visto como um Herói por seus filhas!!
Meu narutinhoooo! 😭😭😭😭 eu estava inventando um monte de enredos legais na minha cabeça e o autor-kun o mata! Você não pode dar esperança e a pisotear implacavelmente em seguida assim, meu coração não aguenta!
Gostei muito da história, a mudança de mundo foi bem feita, gosto com ele está planejando das sombras eu desejo de dominar todas as outras pessoas. É assim que o protagonista deve ser nunca se sujeitar a nada sempre querer ter o controle de tudo e comandar todos.
Good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So far so good. I didn't expect to find such a gem on this site. I have nothing else to say because I barely started to read this fanfic, but it is a very interesting one where you can actually imagine the dark side of characters, a totally different point of view.
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VERY GOOD .... MUST READ Nice work by author ❤️❤️😍😍😍❤️😍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
Author did everything right with this fanfic. Almost no plot hole. Grammar and vocabulary are [img=recommend]. MC is the best thing in this story. MC focus on gaining power and not through the system dispite having one. MC is also ruthless and intelligent. All in all this is a well written story. Keep on good work Author.
everything about this fanfic is perfect. Story telling is fast paced and focus on the main point, not dragging out with useless training arc that full of useless stuff that we already know or useless stuff in the og story that contribute nothing new to the fanfic. The MC is like the omega chad that doesn't think with his d**k which is super welcome. Plot holes are kept to minimum. Grammar and vocabulary are also very good with rarely any typo mystake. All in all a very well written story with a lot of care and love from author.
So I didn't read much but seems similar to blackening Naruto or something , that was the novel , the concept is same except in there mc was alive and got into Naruto head in here he is inside as a souls will give a try and see if it gets any more good
Great you should read
Very good and short but good quality.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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This is the best novel that i have ever read. The plot and the plan of mc make me more love this novel. I hope this novel can continue and won"t drop in the future cause its rlly good (me who to lazy to type and copied another comment)
I'm totally a random fan so don't mind me. I just wanted to rate this amazing piece of art 5/5. Everything is cool. Even author is super sexy. I even donated him some money on patrëon.com/OverlordN You should too. It is money well spent. Totally readable stuff and author isn't stupid so he learnt his mistakes from the previous novel and wrote something even better.
Writing Quality 2 Stability of Updates 2 Story Development 1 Character Design 1 World Background 1
worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark. worst fanfic with the tag villain and dark.
Fake high rating from b0.ts, author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments. author deletiing real comments.
the mc is a villain and i love it njnhhhhhhhhhjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhuiiiiiiiibananacx ttttttttttttttrc
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This is how monsters should be, MC is a real monster This is how monsters should be, MC is a real monster This is how monsters should be, MC is a real monster
great fanfic... I hope you make it multiverse travel so that it has more than 500 chapters includes animes, comics, novels, movies. DONT DROP IT
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揭示劇透Ótima História. Protagonista manipulador e inteligente, viajem por mundos novos. Ótima análise das peculiaridades. Ótimo meio pra ser visto como um Herói por seus filhas!!
Meu narutinhoooo! 😭😭😭😭 eu estava inventando um monte de enredos legais na minha cabeça e o autor-kun o mata! Você não pode dar esperança e a pisotear implacavelmente em seguida assim, meu coração não aguenta!
Gostei muito da história, a mudança de mundo foi bem feita, gosto com ele está planejando das sombras eu desejo de dominar todas as outras pessoas. É assim que o protagonista deve ser nunca se sujeitar a nada sempre querer ter o controle de tudo e comandar todos.
Good novel [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
So far so good. I didn't expect to find such a gem on this site. I have nothing else to say because I barely started to read this fanfic, but it is a very interesting one where you can actually imagine the dark side of characters, a totally different point of view.
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good novel lollolololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololololol
VERY GOOD .... MUST READ Nice work by author ❤️❤️😍😍😍❤️😍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭
Author did everything right with this fanfic. Almost no plot hole. Grammar and vocabulary are [img=recommend]. MC is the best thing in this story. MC focus on gaining power and not through the system dispite having one. MC is also ruthless and intelligent. All in all this is a well written story. Keep on good work Author.
everything about this fanfic is perfect. Story telling is fast paced and focus on the main point, not dragging out with useless training arc that full of useless stuff that we already know or useless stuff in the og story that contribute nothing new to the fanfic. The MC is like the omega chad that doesn't think with his d**k which is super welcome. Plot holes are kept to minimum. Grammar and vocabulary are also very good with rarely any typo mystake. All in all a very well written story with a lot of care and love from author.
So I didn't read much but seems similar to blackening Naruto or something , that was the novel , the concept is same except in there mc was alive and got into Naruto head in here he is inside as a souls will give a try and see if it gets any more good
Great you should read
Very good and short but good quality.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Sangat baik ............. ............ .. . . ............. ... . . . . . .............. ............ .. . . ............. ... . . . . . .
This is the best novel that i have ever read. The plot and the plan of mc make me more love this novel. I hope this novel can continue and won"t drop in the future cause its rlly good (me who to lazy to type and copied another comment)
I'm totally a random fan so don't mind me. I just wanted to rate this amazing piece of art 5/5. Everything is cool. Even author is super sexy. I even donated him some money on patrëon.com/OverlordN You should too. It is money well spent. Totally readable stuff and author isn't stupid so he learnt his mistakes from the previous novel and wrote something even better.