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Honestly? Worth a read. I have minor issues with the quality, misused words, mistyped words, etc. Seriously, it's VIALS not VEILS. And walking through 'veins' is very different to walking through 'vines'. But if you can get past those minor hurdles? Decent story.
I like your book I love the way the worlds feel alive more random words until it lets me post this review that i put so much time and effor
I love all of Dao of gay novel's because he has amazing sumt scenes, great storys, amazing characters, and a very strong imagination also the mc is gay so just read the book and fall in love like I did. thanks and have a nice day/night
Just gonna review it in 5.0 because why not even tho I still haven't read this yet also because I love author's work 乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ╮(＾▽＾)╭( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Shameless Author review as always! I have some plans for this novel, things like Godhood, Wars, Exploration, and maybe, just maybe, universe travel- Or accidental world crossover. However, there will be only 1 ML in this fic of mine (Fic because i'll take some elemetns of other forms of media, such as Monster Hunter because yes.), unlike my Son of the Night one. Have fun reading this- Or not, it's not my fauly if you don't.
Great story! Really enjoying it so far, and though I'm not sure if the story will continue past where it currently is would still recommend to anyone looking for something to pass the time.
Honestly? Worth a read. I have minor issues with the quality, misused words, mistyped words, etc. Seriously, it's VIALS not VEILS. And walking through 'veins' is very different to walking through 'vines'. But if you can get past those minor hurdles? Decent story.
I like your book I love the way the worlds feel alive more random words until it lets me post this review that i put so much time and effor
I love all of Dao of gay novel's because he has amazing sumt scenes, great storys, amazing characters, and a very strong imagination also the mc is gay so just read the book and fall in love like I did. thanks and have a nice day/night
Just gonna review it in 5.0 because why not even tho I still haven't read this yet also because I love author's work 乁[ ◕ ᴥ ◕ ]ㄏ╮(＾▽＾)╭( ꈍᴗꈍ)
Shameless Author review as always! I have some plans for this novel, things like Godhood, Wars, Exploration, and maybe, just maybe, universe travel- Or accidental world crossover. However, there will be only 1 ML in this fic of mine (Fic because i'll take some elemetns of other forms of media, such as Monster Hunter because yes.), unlike my Son of the Night one. Have fun reading this- Or not, it's not my fauly if you don't.
Great story! Really enjoying it so far, and though I'm not sure if the story will continue past where it currently is would still recommend to anyone looking for something to pass the time.