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More chapters , More chapters , More chapters , when is going to be new chapters ? It is dropped ? Story is very good :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))).
I really like the story. It would be better if you start to make more chapters the characters also good. It is dropped or not there is not chapters one month?
Al principio fue buena luego se convirtió en una basura un fan-fic con gran potencial desperdiciado 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
A história é boa só a estabilidade dos capítulos que caiu muito________________________________________________________________________________
You lost me at "due to systemic reasons". Didn't even try to read it. From there, I already knew it's going to be the same thing as what 95% of the fanfics are in this site. The main driver of the plot will be the system, which I think is just an excuse to an author's lack of creativity...................................
Mc's Reason why he has a Dragon Martial Spirit is that he is chinese from Earth and not that maybe becouse his father to has Dragon Martial Spirit. 1 Star becouse of the Trash Nationalism Potential
It’s a good story but unrealistic, who in the right mind would go a join the place that the MC of all people will destroy…guy talking about waking the mc by taking his first story ring away like tang don’t have the strongest plot armor on this world 🤔🤦♂️ It’s like the mc and author of this story don’t understand that unless tang somehow die there’s no way the actual story will change.. this is a good story I just can’t exactly associate with it, I like evil or semi evil mc’s but this guy isn’t even that but somehow decided to join one of the most evil places in this world that’s why it’s unrealistic
揭示劇透
so far so great~ the stories backdrop is the DD1 continent so you can't really go wrong there. our mc is just the right amount of confident and quick thinking which is another plus. nothing ruins a story like a dummy mc and qin mo ain't that. in only 35 chapters we have a clear view of what's going on, a growing cast of new characters that don't harm the story and adds a bit of flavor, and the meticulously well done translations makes the read nothing less than enjoyable. THIS IS COPY AND PASTE SINCE I COULDN'T BE ARSED TO WRITE MY OWN REVIEW THIS IS COPY AND PASTE OF A COPY AND PASTE SINCE I COULDN'T BE ARSED TO WRITE MY OWN REVIEW
someone has the link to the original, i can't find it............................................................................... .......................................................................
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#five star way tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
Moar updates man you are making ma cry waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Thus far, the writing quality of this novel, its stability of updates, story development and character design are phenomenal. The Mc also has a System that makes MC work hard to become stronger, all to finally surpass Tang San and protect his cute senior sister, mature Master and equally lovable Qian Renxue!!!
揭示劇透
so far so great~ the stories backdrop is the DD1 continent so you can't really go wrong there. our mc is just the right amount of confident and quick thinking which is another plus. nothing ruins a story like a dummy mc and qin mo ain't that. in only 35 chapters we have a clear view of what's going on, a growing cast of new characters that don't harm the story and adds a bit of flavor, and the meticulously well done translations makes the read nothing less than enjoyable. THIS IS COPY AND PASTE SINCE I COULDN'T BE ARSED TO WRITE MY OWN REVIEW
so far so great~ the stories backdrop is the DD1 continent so you can't really go wrong there. our mc is just the right amount of confident and quick thinking which is another plus. nothing ruins a story like a dummy mc and qin mo ain't that. in only 35 chapters we have a clear view of what's going on, a growing cast of new characters that don't harm the story and adds a bit of flavor, and the meticulously well done translations makes the read nothing less than enjoyable. shout outs to AllHeavenThearch for picking this one up, and we'll continue to look forward to the next chaptuuurrr~
So far everything is great! I will hunt you to the ends of the earth if you drop this! MC becomes Spirit Hall's enemy, that's a relatively new concept, can't wait for MOAR Chapters!
only read to chapter 10 but its interesting so keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Drop it and I’ll punch you real hard! Remember this. Also I need more Wordcount. Even more. That should be enough. It still needs to be more. It is enough.
Do you guys know of other fanfic where mc joins the spirit hall and is against tang san and his master If you can send a link please I am looking for it
it looks promising and the translation and grammar is great but this is a Chinese dd fanfic so I dont have alot of fate for future chapters so I must ask is the mc a simp mc that will become a licking dog to the FL or will he joins shrek and becomes there babysitter or will he take everything away for tang san and be a villain I have to know so I can continue reading with a good conscience but other than that its good
So far I’m enjoying it Yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes
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Thus far, the writing quality of this novel, its stability of updates, story development and character design are phenomenal. There is no System to fall back on and it seems that the MC must work to achieve his goals which is quite different from the current novels on the market.
I the shameless Translator claim 5 Stars for my translation, writing quality, redundancy, stability of updates (daily updates), flow of sentences as well as grammar and punctuation.
More chapters , More chapters , More chapters , when is going to be new chapters ? It is dropped ? Story is very good :)))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))).
I really like the story. It would be better if you start to make more chapters the characters also good. It is dropped or not there is not chapters one month?
Al principio fue buena luego se convirtió en una basura un fan-fic con gran potencial desperdiciado 💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩💩
A história é boa só a estabilidade dos capítulos que caiu muito________________________________________________________________________________
You lost me at "due to systemic reasons". Didn't even try to read it. From there, I already knew it's going to be the same thing as what 95% of the fanfics are in this site. The main driver of the plot will be the system, which I think is just an excuse to an author's lack of creativity...................................
Mc's Reason why he has a Dragon Martial Spirit is that he is chinese from Earth and not that maybe becouse his father to has Dragon Martial Spirit. 1 Star becouse of the Trash Nationalism Potential
It’s a good story but unrealistic, who in the right mind would go a join the place that the MC of all people will destroy…guy talking about waking the mc by taking his first story ring away like tang don’t have the strongest plot armor on this world 🤔🤦♂️ It’s like the mc and author of this story don’t understand that unless tang somehow die there’s no way the actual story will change.. this is a good story I just can’t exactly associate with it, I like evil or semi evil mc’s but this guy isn’t even that but somehow decided to join one of the most evil places in this world that’s why it’s unrealistic
揭示劇透 so far so great~ the stories backdrop is the DD1 continent so you can't really go wrong there. our mc is just the right amount of confident and quick thinking which is another plus. nothing ruins a story like a dummy mc and qin mo ain't that. in only 35 chapters we have a clear view of what's going on, a growing cast of new characters that don't harm the story and adds a bit of flavor, and the meticulously well done translations makes the read nothing less than enjoyable. THIS IS COPY AND PASTE SINCE I COULDN'T BE ARSED TO WRITE MY OWN REVIEW THIS IS COPY AND PASTE OF A COPY AND PASTE SINCE I COULDN'T BE ARSED TO WRITE MY OWN REVIEW
someone has the link to the original, i can't find it............................................................................... .......................................................................
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#five star way tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good
Moar updates man you are making ma cry waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Thus far, the writing quality of this novel, its stability of updates, story development and character design are phenomenal. The Mc also has a System that makes MC work hard to become stronger, all to finally surpass Tang San and protect his cute senior sister, mature Master and equally lovable Qian Renxue!!!
揭示劇透 so far so great~ the stories backdrop is the DD1 continent so you can't really go wrong there. our mc is just the right amount of confident and quick thinking which is another plus. nothing ruins a story like a dummy mc and qin mo ain't that. in only 35 chapters we have a clear view of what's going on, a growing cast of new characters that don't harm the story and adds a bit of flavor, and the meticulously well done translations makes the read nothing less than enjoyable. THIS IS COPY AND PASTE SINCE I COULDN'T BE ARSED TO WRITE MY OWN REVIEW
so far so great~ the stories backdrop is the DD1 continent so you can't really go wrong there. our mc is just the right amount of confident and quick thinking which is another plus. nothing ruins a story like a dummy mc and qin mo ain't that. in only 35 chapters we have a clear view of what's going on, a growing cast of new characters that don't harm the story and adds a bit of flavor, and the meticulously well done translations makes the read nothing less than enjoyable. shout outs to AllHeavenThearch for picking this one up, and we'll continue to look forward to the next chaptuuurrr~
So far everything is great! I will hunt you to the ends of the earth if you drop this! MC becomes Spirit Hall's enemy, that's a relatively new concept, can't wait for MOAR Chapters!
only read to chapter 10 but its interesting so keep up the good work. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Drop it and I’ll punch you real hard! Remember this. Also I need more Wordcount. Even more. That should be enough. It still needs to be more. It is enough.
Do you guys know of other fanfic where mc joins the spirit hall and is against tang san and his master If you can send a link please I am looking for it
it looks promising and the translation and grammar is great but this is a Chinese dd fanfic so I dont have alot of fate for future chapters so I must ask is the mc a simp mc that will become a licking dog to the FL or will he joins shrek and becomes there babysitter or will he take everything away for tang san and be a villain I have to know so I can continue reading with a good conscience but other than that its good
So far I’m enjoying it Yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yup yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes yes I yes yup yup yes
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Thus far, the writing quality of this novel, its stability of updates, story development and character design are phenomenal. There is no System to fall back on and it seems that the MC must work to achieve his goals which is quite different from the current novels on the market.
I the shameless Translator claim 5 Stars for my translation, writing quality, redundancy, stability of updates (daily updates), flow of sentences as well as grammar and punctuation.
Dropped?????