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good story please dont stop you havent posted in 16 days and its worrying . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . .
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First of all I have to thank the author for this fan-fic, it’s amazing I enjoyed reading it, and really hope yiu don’t drop this because its amazing and I had fun reading this can’t wait for more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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It's a cool idea and it would be really fun to read but it is cringy af. I tried skipping past that but it kept having cringe lines. Sorry not for me.
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Buena historia, me gusta estoy ansioso por más capítulos. En cuanto a Scott me gustaría que no lo vuelvas una persona irracional y que Stiles aparezca un poco más, ese personaje es un poco gracioso en la serie de televisión
'' uhh '' acenando a cabeça olhando para uma obra prima John Wick lhe da 5 estrelas '' isso e muito bom , esta aprovado''
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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pretty good story. hope people finds this nove, so far the story is pretty nice. The main character is not OP and is yaking time to learn his power.
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Ya know, man… I can deal with a certain level of cringe, and I personally think my tolerance is pretty high for it, but this… this is terrible
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good story please dont stop you havent posted in 16 days and its worrying . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . .. . . . . . . . .
Great story please dont drop. . . .. .. . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . .. . . . .. . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . .. . ...... . . .. ..
First of all I have to thank the author for this fan-fic, it’s amazing I enjoyed reading it, and really hope yiu don’t drop this because its amazing and I had fun reading this can’t wait for more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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It's a cool idea and it would be really fun to read but it is cringy af. I tried skipping past that but it kept having cringe lines. Sorry not for me.
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Buena historia, me gusta estoy ansioso por más capítulos. En cuanto a Scott me gustaría que no lo vuelvas una persona irracional y que Stiles aparezca un poco más, ese personaje es un poco gracioso en la serie de televisión
'' uhh '' acenando a cabeça olhando para uma obra prima John Wick lhe da 5 estrelas '' isso e muito bom , esta aprovado''
I like the story ....................................................................................................................................
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Moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
pretty good story. hope people finds this nove, so far the story is pretty nice. The main character is not OP and is yaking time to learn his power.
mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas mas
Ya know, man… I can deal with a certain level of cringe, and I personally think my tolerance is pretty high for it, but this… this is terrible