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Author if you want to colonize Australia you need to develop it as most of the land is barren and desert. So when you reach that arc you need to start large scale water, canal, lake and infrastructure projects to sustain a large population.
Bhai protect the dodo bird that is going to get extinct. .........................,.,,.,.............,.........................
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This is a very good novel . it details all the things necessary for understanding and story development updates are always on way .A very good writer
one of the best novel I ever read i appreciate the content that writer write. i hope that author will be posted the chapter more than now so all the people in India can enjoy the glory of the Indian.
thanks for the 1st Bhartiya kingdom building novel I read after reading hundreds of Chinese versions. I am currently at chapter 610+ Story is very well written with extensive research on most of the topics...Author has improved very well through novel and our civilization spirit has been understood by the Author. the only flaw I would say is that after conquering northern part of the country a few chapters describing how development is promoted there was expected by many...which was not given....and northern states are like neglected. Rest everything is to my liking and I would give a 5 star for this novel.
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I am Writing this review at chapter 162. I'm not Asian but African, West African to be precise and I could not help the tear that formed in my eyes when reading this. I so much love my country and heritage, but Colonization wiped out everything there is to know about us. It is even to the Extent that we see our original Gods as Demons and fervently Worship the Christian God. It is appalling and disgusting in and of itself. If I could find information about our past, I too would have loved to Write something like this, Hence my immense appreciation for this book.
Please can you make a seperate auxiliary chapter for all the illustrations and maps you upload instead of in comment section of chapter . Would be really convenient . Thanks for the novel❤️❤️
Glad to know someone took initiative to write fanfiction genre on Indian history Writing quality is good And every characters background and there POV is explained throughly waiting for next update
I hope vijay occupy all of this , also oil regions. This is a good story I like it, I hope he can possibly make both American continents into multiples small countries,not like USA, cananda , Brazil, Argentina, mexico, they have potential to be superpower and pose threat.
Warning! this is a story for only indians. it started well until chapter 150 where the author started being biased on all other religions calling it man made, he goes to the length that he even put the Mc rewrite The quran and the bible. shrug i mean did he takes all Muslims and christian to have low iq that they will accept a book founded in a cave and started believing that it is the real one because it is written in the same language as that religions and suddenly all the world started believing it, the mc even started executing (murdering)the old Muslims just for the old one to be forgotten,if not a tyrant then what( even the prisoners and withnesses where murdered to clear all evidence.). and the thing about dharmic islam and christian make it worse that why i said this is a novel only for indians. if the holy books where easily tempered with then many emperor in the world would have put their names in the book as prophets or something.
揭示劇透
Great novel, 👏👏 Here are ideas you can consider for the future, 1) India should guarantee Tibet's independence so that there is a buffer state between future China and India. 2)The country you are planning for Jews should be the current day Israel including Sinai Peninsula so that you can at least indirectly control future Suez canal to guarantee access to Mediterranean sea. 3) For above mentioned reason India should also control Socotra island and have naval presence in Red sea. 4) India should control or guarantee independence of Hawaii island to limit future US interference in East asia(if US will exist in this timeline that is) 5) If India continues it's vendetta against Britain and it's friendship with Spain then India should guarantee full control of Gibralter to Spain to guarantee access to Atlantic.
Good overall…recommend to read at least free chapters and you will definitely love it
nice story and plots. Although a bit of harem would be appreciated, just saying.
Author you should also consider situation about china ..... because until 1720 Tibet was not part of Qing Dynasty. Bharat should either absorb Tibet or at least guarantee independence to them/ defence pact so that there will be buffer between two nations. In present day china often use dams built on brahmaputra river to blackmail/threaten north eastern states with floods.
this book is so good P.S I have been giving 3 power stones daily for a now 🐧
Imma be fr I didn’t even read one chapter or even the summary just the title alone tells me this novel is straight ass so it is what it is🙂
Author if you want to colonize Australia you need to develop it as most of the land is barren and desert. So when you reach that arc you need to start large scale water, canal, lake and infrastructure projects to sustain a large population.
Bhai protect the dodo bird that is going to get extinct. .........................,.,,.,.............,.........................
goodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgoodgood
Amazing 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
Very good story 😁👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏🎉👍👍👍🎉🎉🎉🎉👍🎉👍🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍🎉👍🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍🎉👍🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍🎉👍🎉🎉🎉🎉👍👍👍👍🎉🎉👍👍🎉🎉👍👍🎉🎉🎉👍👍
This is a very good novel . it details all the things necessary for understanding and story development updates are always on way .A very good writer
one of the best novel I ever read i appreciate the content that writer write. i hope that author will be posted the chapter more than now so all the people in India can enjoy the glory of the Indian.
thanks for the 1st Bhartiya kingdom building novel I read after reading hundreds of Chinese versions. I am currently at chapter 610+ Story is very well written with extensive research on most of the topics...Author has improved very well through novel and our civilization spirit has been understood by the Author. the only flaw I would say is that after conquering northern part of the country a few chapters describing how development is promoted there was expected by many...which was not given....and northern states are like neglected. Rest everything is to my liking and I would give a 5 star for this novel.
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I am Writing this review at chapter 162. I'm not Asian but African, West African to be precise and I could not help the tear that formed in my eyes when reading this. I so much love my country and heritage, but Colonization wiped out everything there is to know about us. It is even to the Extent that we see our original Gods as Demons and fervently Worship the Christian God. It is appalling and disgusting in and of itself. If I could find information about our past, I too would have loved to Write something like this, Hence my immense appreciation for this book.
Please can you make a seperate auxiliary chapter for all the illustrations and maps you upload instead of in comment section of chapter . Would be really convenient . Thanks for the novel❤️❤️
Glad to know someone took initiative to write fanfiction genre on Indian history Writing quality is good And every characters background and there POV is explained throughly waiting for next update
I hope vijay occupy all of this , also oil regions. This is a good story I like it, I hope he can possibly make both American continents into multiples small countries,not like USA, cananda , Brazil, Argentina, mexico, they have potential to be superpower and pose threat.
Warning! this is a story for only indians. it started well until chapter 150 where the author started being biased on all other religions calling it man made, he goes to the length that he even put the Mc rewrite The quran and the bible. shrug i mean did he takes all Muslims and christian to have low iq that they will accept a book founded in a cave and started believing that it is the real one because it is written in the same language as that religions and suddenly all the world started believing it, the mc even started executing (murdering)the old Muslims just for the old one to be forgotten,if not a tyrant then what( even the prisoners and withnesses where murdered to clear all evidence.). and the thing about dharmic islam and christian make it worse that why i said this is a novel only for indians. if the holy books where easily tempered with then many emperor in the world would have put their names in the book as prophets or something.
揭示劇透 Great novel, 👏👏 Here are ideas you can consider for the future, 1) India should guarantee Tibet's independence so that there is a buffer state between future China and India. 2)The country you are planning for Jews should be the current day Israel including Sinai Peninsula so that you can at least indirectly control future Suez canal to guarantee access to Mediterranean sea. 3) For above mentioned reason India should also control Socotra island and have naval presence in Red sea. 4) India should control or guarantee independence of Hawaii island to limit future US interference in East asia(if US will exist in this timeline that is) 5) If India continues it's vendetta against Britain and it's friendship with Spain then India should guarantee full control of Gibralter to Spain to guarantee access to Atlantic.
Good overall…recommend to read at least free chapters and you will definitely love it
nice story and plots. Although a bit of harem would be appreciated, just saying.
Author you should also consider situation about china ..... because until 1720 Tibet was not part of Qing Dynasty. Bharat should either absorb Tibet or at least guarantee independence to them/ defence pact so that there will be buffer between two nations. In present day china often use dams built on brahmaputra river to blackmail/threaten north eastern states with floods.
this book is so good P.S I have been giving 3 power stones daily for a now 🐧
Imma be fr I didn’t even read one chapter or even the summary just the title alone tells me this novel is straight ass so it is what it is🙂