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if you are reading this comment this comment is cursed your parents will die within five years to undo this curse you need to copy this sorry y'all,You can't underestimate the random people curse.
I usually appear for reposted fics for a crusade, but you my good sir have ethics, not to mention attempting to bring light to this dark dreary place called webnovel. Good on you my good sir
Yo, where's the chapter for today? - Overall the story is nice, been having 18+ scenes in the later chapters though, not that I hate it, just wanting to quench this odd sense of looking forward only to be greeted with it. As I said, not that I hate it, it's pretty good so far, and those scenes can be just avoided.
Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchísimas gracias tus capítulos son los mejores
This was great. long chapters Good flow And over all good I went in knowing nothing of worm world now I know lots and with the DC characters added in make it more fun to read and easier to learn the story. in general I was a big fan and hope it get updated more {GOOD STUFF}
The best book(in my opinion) that I’ve Ever read from shiro and will be the best book. Anyone know a theme that would fit my man Midas? Lol.
Reviewed at chapter 19. I think this fanfiction is an amazing piece. The characters are believable and it feels natural. Its surprisingly good. If anyone has something similar where the author weites with such detail, please tell me.
This book is bloody incredible! King Midas is developed beautifully throughout the story so far and despite villain and faction/group building stories never really having been my kind of books I am hooked on this. There are very few grammer mistakes and whilst it is only updated about once a week the chapters are more than long enough to make up for it unlike other weekly updated books. I've never even read worm and yet I still understand the dynamics behind the factions and characters in this. I'd highly reccomend this to anyone who enjoys villain faction building stories and even those who don't.
Another harem collector with lemons, i wouldnt have wasted my time on this story if this was stated in the descriptions. The system does alot for the mc, the world is a mash of multiple fics like DC, MHA and Worm so its really hard to get an understanding of the world. Its written well but the mc is what I call a half baked villain/evil mc, hes most definitely is not neutral evil because he wont do whatever it takes for his goals even tho he says he will. If you like harems and lemons tho this fic will probably tick all your boxes, for me i dont want to read about a lusty mc chasing skirts all day, its pitiful.
This is gold if you want to refresh yourself from the trashy fics You can go to Archive of our own to see the latest chaps. Last time I checked is has 21 chaps
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If you're reading this, I RECOMMEND you to read this novel. it's a good read. -Love how smart the MC is. -Love the story. The pace is not fast or slow its just right. So far that's all I can say. I RECOMMEND YOU TO READ THIS NOVEL.
Me da paja escribir en ingles así que no lo voy hacer. No hay mucho que decir, otra buena historia de The Dark Wolf Shiro de temática gamer. Buen MC y las interacciones con el resto de personajes no son tan vacías como suelen ser en la mayoría de fanfics por lo que es un punto a favor
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揭示劇透 I've been reading this since the start, and for me to not even review this greatness just hurts. So here you go~ you deserve the 5 stars.
"Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~" - Me, 2021, Sleepy
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Loved the fanfic, but after 19th chapter author seem to have started to focus on other fic. i believe this is one of his best work. Anyway i hope he repost it.
Been reading this one at QQ. Up to chapter 17 there. Awesome fanfic. Too few Worm fanfics in this wedsite, what a shame.
A tanuki made a mistake and almost started a crusade. Good thing you asked permission. Space space space space space space space space space space space.
Story is good... and is part of a larger continuity. But it's not for everyone. Protag is villainous and not stupid. But power ramping is a thing.
this is honestly one of shiros best works. he even has another guild of gamers book out now this one with his first female mc called raven who also happens to be a vampire succubus 😭😂
Author original: [img=exp]The dark wolf shiro [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
estubo chido, muy entretenido, recomendable estubo chido, muy entretenido, recomendable estubo chido, muy entretenido, recomendable estubo chido, muy entretenido, recomendable estubo chido, muy entretenido, recomendable estubo chido, muy entretenido, recomendable
if you are reading this comment this comment is cursed your parents will die within five years to undo this curse you need to copy this sorry y'all,You can't underestimate the random people curse.
I usually appear for reposted fics for a crusade, but you my good sir have ethics, not to mention attempting to bring light to this dark dreary place called webnovel. Good on you my good sir
Yo, where's the chapter for today? - Overall the story is nice, been having 18+ scenes in the later chapters though, not that I hate it, just wanting to quench this odd sense of looking forward only to be greeted with it. As I said, not that I hate it, it's pretty good so far, and those scenes can be just avoided.
Muy buena bro pero si la subes mas seguido seria grandísimo pero esta bien muchas gracias por los cap que subiste antes muchísimas gracias tus capítulos son los mejores
This was great. long chapters Good flow And over all good I went in knowing nothing of worm world now I know lots and with the DC characters added in make it more fun to read and easier to learn the story. in general I was a big fan and hope it get updated more {GOOD STUFF}
The best book(in my opinion) that I’ve Ever read from shiro and will be the best book. Anyone know a theme that would fit my man Midas? Lol.
Reviewed at chapter 19. I think this fanfiction is an amazing piece. The characters are believable and it feels natural. Its surprisingly good. If anyone has something similar where the author weites with such detail, please tell me.
This book is bloody incredible! King Midas is developed beautifully throughout the story so far and despite villain and faction/group building stories never really having been my kind of books I am hooked on this. There are very few grammer mistakes and whilst it is only updated about once a week the chapters are more than long enough to make up for it unlike other weekly updated books. I've never even read worm and yet I still understand the dynamics behind the factions and characters in this. I'd highly reccomend this to anyone who enjoys villain faction building stories and even those who don't.
Another harem collector with lemons, i wouldnt have wasted my time on this story if this was stated in the descriptions. The system does alot for the mc, the world is a mash of multiple fics like DC, MHA and Worm so its really hard to get an understanding of the world. Its written well but the mc is what I call a half baked villain/evil mc, hes most definitely is not neutral evil because he wont do whatever it takes for his goals even tho he says he will. If you like harems and lemons tho this fic will probably tick all your boxes, for me i dont want to read about a lusty mc chasing skirts all day, its pitiful.
This is gold if you want to refresh yourself from the trashy fics You can go to Archive of our own to see the latest chaps. Last time I checked is has 21 chaps
Great author. 🙏 [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
If you're reading this, I RECOMMEND you to read this novel. it's a good read. -Love how smart the MC is. -Love the story. The pace is not fast or slow its just right. So far that's all I can say. I RECOMMEND YOU TO READ THIS NOVEL.
Me da paja escribir en ingles así que no lo voy hacer. No hay mucho que decir, otra buena historia de The Dark Wolf Shiro de temática gamer. Buen MC y las interacciones con el resto de personajes no son tan vacías como suelen ser en la mayoría de fanfics por lo que es un punto a favor
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揭示劇透 I've been reading this since the start, and for me to not even review this greatness just hurts. So here you go~ you deserve the 5 stars.
"Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~ Noice~" - Me, 2021, Sleepy
Gracias por la historia, autor. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Loved the fanfic, but after 19th chapter author seem to have started to focus on other fic. i believe this is one of his best work. Anyway i hope he repost it.
Been reading this one at QQ. Up to chapter 17 there. Awesome fanfic. Too few Worm fanfics in this wedsite, what a shame.
A tanuki made a mistake and almost started a crusade. Good thing you asked permission. Space space space space space space space space space space space.
Story is good... and is part of a larger continuity. But it's not for everyone. Protag is villainous and not stupid. But power ramping is a thing.
this is honestly one of shiros best works. he even has another guild of gamers book out now this one with his first female mc called raven who also happens to be a vampire succubus 😭😂
Author original: [img=exp]The dark wolf shiro [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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for those of you saying I stole this story here's the proof i got permission