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Recommended. MC is OP and Smart. MC goes to Dark Continent to achieve Eternal Life {kind of}. Not that much interactions with main Anime characters even though he is the twin of Illumi Zoldyck.
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A somewhat good fanfiction novel in the HxH AU. I kinda enjoyed this story at the beginning since the plot was interesting, but somewhere along the way it started deteriorating and I lost interest and stopped reading after chapter 90... The grammar is without too much problems which is something I consider a must when reading... All in all I recommend this to anyone who likes this gender.
An excellent hunter x hunter fanfiction. The hatsu are incredibly well done too. So many authors just take it as if just any conditions will suffice when creating a hatsu and that they can abuse loopholes. To me, nen doesn't work like that, so well done.
gets very similar to a chinese cultivation novel really quickly. not something i think many people would expect going into a hxh fic so just point that out. MC is wayyy to strong, like "i cant wait until i cant just point to a star and destroy it instantly" strong. his abilities are spastically strong for the world he is in, to the point theres not really a point reading anymore. its like if Madara Uchiha was in a slice of life novel. pretty fun in the beginning tho, i stopped after ch 40
Hi, I will try to write an objective review, not like crazy fan madly praising author or hateful troll. This novel starts out great with amazing concept and smart MC and it stay that way for around 100 chapters but in the later half of the novel author change his wiritng style completely. Everything become too wordy and unnecessarily complicated. Even the most basic action from MC which should take one sentence will take entire chapter to explain. Author will start with the scenic view, the philosophy behind his action, how it'll affect everything else, why other think about that action, random trivia etc... I tried to skim but onces entires chapters started revolving around a single thought or action of MC, I had to drop it. Its impossible to find the real cannon sentences among the sea of fillers.
I most enjoyed the chapters from the dark continent exploration arc. I didn't expect myself to enjoy any 'interpretation' not put together by Togashi. Aaand I've achieved the neccecary word count to post a review. Cheers
I really like this fanfic, especially when the MC don't fall in love or not a simp, and just chases Immortality. I also really like his personality, I don't know if I'm weird for liking his personality.
The fanfic is pretty good and the abilities are very unique and but personally the ending is pretty meh and the quality dropped near the end and it could be better
I truly enjoyed this story to the fullest extent. Thank you Author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Me gustó, y me gustaría que hicieras otra historia, o al menos la continuación de esta, con el mismo personaje pero en un mundo diferente.
best hxh fanfic ever.... it's smooth and feels great reading but the final ending seems rushed out??? I guess it's because we don't know much about dark continent.....
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Awesome novel with an MC intelligent, cunning and powerful. We have great fights and the author really well explored the world of HxH.
great book ***************************************************************************************************************************************************
Best hxh fanfic I have ever read, great story through and through without any bad moments. Just a fanfic focused on becoming stronger while also expanding on and creating its own lore to the hxh world which has yet to even come close to explaining as much as this novel did on its own world. Love the works of this author, hope he continues to write more <3
Incredible novel, MC is very intelligent, cunning and very powerful, great fights and the author really well explored the new challenges of HxH.
A great read. One of the best ff I’ve ever read well thought out and executed to perfect. One of the only HxH ff that actually used Nen in the right way. He didn’t get in the way of the plot and still was able to get powerful. Aside from krapika side story. He got OP but he trained to get to his power. Didn’t get a ROB to give him power or anything.
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Perfect ending to the series and everything was amazing, although I will miss this I will come back to reread it more! Hope you make more of these fan-fictions and maybe you're own novel for me to read!
A good read. Really satisfied the itch for new fanfiction. If you want a relatively simple path to omnipotence, read it and weep. [img=recommend]
How far could I tend to go? To just describe how much of a fascinating masterpiece this art is truly is. I am not that of a big fan of hxh because it was always seen as childish in my eyes, when I was six years old. I always wished to find a truly neutral mc that only thinks about benefits in a fanfic, just like revered inestintly where the mc is the most perfect mc any cultured fellow will search for. I advice u to read the first 20 ch. trust me! u will not regret it,
Can some please someone please tell me what are his hatsus are. ??????????????????? 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹😀🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹☺️🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹☺️☺️
mm there were plenty of grammatical errors so I'll give 4 stars for writing quality but that aside it was a great fanfic and I really enjoyed reading it story development kept me interested character design was simple but efficient updating stability I don't really know about as the books already finished by the time I started reading but didn't really see any complaints in the chapter comments and for world background it's hxh for the most part but their are some interesting twists and turns about it that's interesting
This is everything I want from a hunter x hunter fanfiction. Masterfully done mate. I admire how you have written this in such a way that the power-progressing is interesting.
To be honest, this is one of the really good fanfictions i have read, from the character of the mc to his abilities and the way it evolved, to the theories and research and everything between. even though it doesn’t have all the things that I personally love in a fanfic, it’s one best i have read so far. I also hate the fact that it ended this fast because i really love to see more of it, especially what happens in the world, or the reaction of people and the Mc’s family and the development, etc. Anyway, Thank you Author for writing something that I really enjoyed reading, and i hope that you write more of your fantastic stories.
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揭示劇透 Recommended. MC is OP and Smart. MC goes to Dark Continent to achieve Eternal Life {kind of}. Not that much interactions with main Anime characters even though he is the twin of Illumi Zoldyck.
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A somewhat good fanfiction novel in the HxH AU. I kinda enjoyed this story at the beginning since the plot was interesting, but somewhere along the way it started deteriorating and I lost interest and stopped reading after chapter 90... The grammar is without too much problems which is something I consider a must when reading... All in all I recommend this to anyone who likes this gender.
An excellent hunter x hunter fanfiction. The hatsu are incredibly well done too. So many authors just take it as if just any conditions will suffice when creating a hatsu and that they can abuse loopholes. To me, nen doesn't work like that, so well done.
gets very similar to a chinese cultivation novel really quickly. not something i think many people would expect going into a hxh fic so just point that out. MC is wayyy to strong, like "i cant wait until i cant just point to a star and destroy it instantly" strong. his abilities are spastically strong for the world he is in, to the point theres not really a point reading anymore. its like if Madara Uchiha was in a slice of life novel. pretty fun in the beginning tho, i stopped after ch 40
Hi, I will try to write an objective review, not like crazy fan madly praising author or hateful troll. This novel starts out great with amazing concept and smart MC and it stay that way for around 100 chapters but in the later half of the novel author change his wiritng style completely. Everything become too wordy and unnecessarily complicated. Even the most basic action from MC which should take one sentence will take entire chapter to explain. Author will start with the scenic view, the philosophy behind his action, how it'll affect everything else, why other think about that action, random trivia etc... I tried to skim but onces entires chapters started revolving around a single thought or action of MC, I had to drop it. Its impossible to find the real cannon sentences among the sea of fillers.
I most enjoyed the chapters from the dark continent exploration arc. I didn't expect myself to enjoy any 'interpretation' not put together by Togashi. Aaand I've achieved the neccecary word count to post a review. Cheers
I really like this fanfic, especially when the MC don't fall in love or not a simp, and just chases Immortality. I also really like his personality, I don't know if I'm weird for liking his personality.
The fanfic is pretty good and the abilities are very unique and but personally the ending is pretty meh and the quality dropped near the end and it could be better
I truly enjoyed this story to the fullest extent. Thank you Author [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Me gustó, y me gustaría que hicieras otra historia, o al menos la continuación de esta, con el mismo personaje pero en un mundo diferente.
best hxh fanfic ever.... it's smooth and feels great reading but the final ending seems rushed out??? I guess it's because we don't know much about dark continent.....
揭示劇透 Awesome novel with an MC intelligent, cunning and powerful. We have great fights and the author really well explored the world of HxH.
great book ***************************************************************************************************************************************************
Best hxh fanfic I have ever read, great story through and through without any bad moments. Just a fanfic focused on becoming stronger while also expanding on and creating its own lore to the hxh world which has yet to even come close to explaining as much as this novel did on its own world. Love the works of this author, hope he continues to write more <3
Incredible novel, MC is very intelligent, cunning and very powerful, great fights and the author really well explored the new challenges of HxH.
A great read. One of the best ff I’ve ever read well thought out and executed to perfect. One of the only HxH ff that actually used Nen in the right way. He didn’t get in the way of the plot and still was able to get powerful. Aside from krapika side story. He got OP but he trained to get to his power. Didn’t get a ROB to give him power or anything.
揭示劇透 Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!! Amazing!!!
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Perfect ending to the series and everything was amazing, although I will miss this I will come back to reread it more! Hope you make more of these fan-fictions and maybe you're own novel for me to read!
A good read. Really satisfied the itch for new fanfiction. If you want a relatively simple path to omnipotence, read it and weep. [img=recommend]
How far could I tend to go? To just describe how much of a fascinating masterpiece this art is truly is. I am not that of a big fan of hxh because it was always seen as childish in my eyes, when I was six years old. I always wished to find a truly neutral mc that only thinks about benefits in a fanfic, just like revered inestintly where the mc is the most perfect mc any cultured fellow will search for. I advice u to read the first 20 ch. trust me! u will not regret it,
Can some please someone please tell me what are his hatsus are. ??????????????????? 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹 🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹😀🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹☺️🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹🥹☺️☺️
mm there were plenty of grammatical errors so I'll give 4 stars for writing quality but that aside it was a great fanfic and I really enjoyed reading it story development kept me interested character design was simple but efficient updating stability I don't really know about as the books already finished by the time I started reading but didn't really see any complaints in the chapter comments and for world background it's hxh for the most part but their are some interesting twists and turns about it that's interesting
This is everything I want from a hunter x hunter fanfiction. Masterfully done mate. I admire how you have written this in such a way that the power-progressing is interesting.
To be honest, this is one of the really good fanfictions i have read, from the character of the mc to his abilities and the way it evolved, to the theories and research and everything between. even though it doesn’t have all the things that I personally love in a fanfic, it’s one best i have read so far. I also hate the fact that it ended this fast because i really love to see more of it, especially what happens in the world, or the reaction of people and the Mc’s family and the development, etc. Anyway, Thank you Author for writing something that I really enjoyed reading, and i hope that you write more of your fantastic stories.
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