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i watched every chapter of this and this awesome the mc is really evil everything is good i love it so much i hope one day there will be a new chapter
Hmmm 😏 nah this is a fanfic novel where the main character is evil and i like that.💗💗💗💗💗💖💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💖💖
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i love the book it gets to the point and does not nerf him for a stupid reason have not seen new chaps yet but i love the story at chap 7 out of 14 when im writing this review
it's really good I haven't found many Villains mc in mha fanfics. just don't drop it and update more. thx zzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxzzxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Это просто идеал, очень надеюсь что автор не потеряет планку и будет писать также хорошо. Мне нравится MC, он просто лучший. Да и Лун набрал неплохих.
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I always like fanfic with the mc possessing demonic powers or vampire powers and this is one of them. I also caught up with the other mha fanfic as well and currently looking for more
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Good story, I've been searching for a while, finally found it. Keep up the good work author! I will keep on voting daily. Interesting story, dont drop please.
I read till Chapter 7(there are no more at the moment) and i really enjoy the idea of an Demon in MHA. There are some grammar error's here and there but the writing style is superior to most Fan_Fics out there.
i havent even read this how the f are you gonna make my boy a master martial artist.. over 30 mastered martial arts and you make him kokushibou and not akaza?
awesome fanfic hope he updates it has awesome character design and the story is developing really good
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Best new villain fic that Ive seen being written. MC is not evil to just be evil. Hes not completly mad and only wants chaos and suffering. So this fic gets 5 stars for me all around.
Great story I think you should keep writing and this story has a lot of potential….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
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i watched every chapter of this and this awesome the mc is really evil everything is good i love it so much i hope one day there will be a new chapter
Hmmm 😏 nah this is a fanfic novel where the main character is evil and i like that.💗💗💗💗💗💖💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💖💖
love the story so far can we get more ,,..................... periods to fill up the word limit................................................
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i love the book it gets to the point and does not nerf him for a stupid reason have not seen new chaps yet but i love the story at chap 7 out of 14 when im writing this review
it's really good I haven't found many Villains mc in mha fanfics. just don't drop it and update more. thx zzzzzzzzzxxxxxxxxxxxxzzxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Это просто идеал, очень надеюсь что автор не потеряет планку и будет писать также хорошо. Мне нравится MC, он просто лучший. Да и Лун набрал неплохих.
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▪︎Writing Quality.............☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎Story Development.....☆☆○○○ - to be honest... its getting boring. their's not much "story" in this ff. ▪︎Character Design........☆☆○○○ - he's more like a crazy drug addict. ▪︎Updating Stability........☆☆☆☆○ ▪︎World Background.......☆☆○○○ - I don't know if this is still about mha anymore.
揭示劇透 I always like fanfic with the mc possessing demonic powers or vampire powers and this is one of them. I also caught up with the other mha fanfic as well and currently looking for more
Villain MC is the best 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Good story, I've been searching for a while, finally found it. Keep up the good work author! I will keep on voting daily. Interesting story, dont drop please.
I read till Chapter 7(there are no more at the moment) and i really enjoy the idea of an Demon in MHA. There are some grammar error's here and there but the writing style is superior to most Fan_Fics out there.
i havent even read this how the f are you gonna make my boy a master martial artist.. over 30 mastered martial arts and you make him kokushibou and not akaza?
awesome fanfic hope he updates it has awesome character design and the story is developing really good
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Best new villain fic that Ive seen being written. MC is not evil to just be evil. Hes not completly mad and only wants chaos and suffering. So this fic gets 5 stars for me all around.
Great story I think you should keep writing and this story has a lot of potential….,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
I love [img=recommend] (it would be a whim of mind control to avoid betrayal) Will Mc stay solo or will he have a woman ?
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