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I have a question. Does the MC get stronger or upgrades his power later in the novel? .
this is a really great book hope your goin to keep going with it because we need to know how and if he at least finds the daughter of the president witch is also his woman lol
This novek is so funny and amazing the author is a genius and includes so many side notes and other things not in normal novels that make this so much funnier!
Welp..NGL the First 250 Chapters are great.. The Plot and story is going well untill this Esmeralda thing come into play... Sorry Author but I feel like the Arc Quality drops drastically when MC got abducted by this disgusting Vice president.. It's great but meh.. This really ruins my mood... Goodluck
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This story is beautiful, I'm still at the start of the story but i love the concept and unique world. Good to see a different approach on the abilities it change from the typical getting an ability out of nowhere keep it up author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Okay! As the author, I will give this one-star review because I want to. 🤡🤡🤡🤡 Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! 😈😈👿👿😈
Author asked for one and imma give him/her one But just with the other reviews alone, this novel doesn’t seem to be that good . Wwwwwwwwwwww…………..///////———-;;;;;;;;::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;(((;;((;,,??????????,
why is this in the "Realistic" Genre? A harem isn't very realistic at all . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I usually don't review novels that I don't like and just ignore them, but since the synopsis is literally asking for 1 star reviews, here it is.
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MCs characters keeps going downhill. One of the worst harems easily and well ruined it at the ra$e out of nowhere along with the stupid justifications.
This one Is a gem. Usually storys get super boring or drag them selves after 1 volume. Here we have interesting and different characters with nice plot and plot. Mc is not a … that Acts dense or run away from Action with girls.
The novel is good should read it but its ruin when yuna got introduce its just ruin the novel. Grammarly Good World Building Good Charachter Development good
the mc will become stronger or not? ................. ................................... ................................... ..................
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100 chapters Sigh* This as far i can go. I enjoyed this novel mainly bec of the wholesome parts 😏. But the mc is nothing special he is mainly used as a boy toy and most of the time helping his girls sort out ther problems all in name of love🤷🏼♂️ There was a little bit of character development but at the same time it wasnt enough for that many chapters he just didnt change that much.. It does get frustrasting reading about how the mc has nothing going on for him as you read on. Yes Unfortunatly the MC is all talk half of the time mainly when it about to his life. Granted he had his moments but he does not make reasonable goals and it feels like he has barely no ambitions to improve his Situation. Basically he does not take any practical steps so far. Tbf He does often go to the library? But finds Little answers that will help with explaining his power. Tho it just ends up his girlfreinds find all answers for him. To me the MC is just useless id rather read a novel about his girlfriend lol. At the end of the day he does not have his prioritys right as he is all over the place with his emotions. But hey this just i what think✌️ Good luck
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this novel is not for everyone... first author unnecessary comments, annoying.. mc character is not likable, he thinks he is the problem of everything too much, which many readers don't like it... and other things which I am not going to write...
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?
I have a question. Does the MC get stronger or upgrades his power later in the novel? .
this is a really great book hope your goin to keep going with it because we need to know how and if he at least finds the daughter of the president witch is also his woman lol
This novek is so funny and amazing the author is a genius and includes so many side notes and other things not in normal novels that make this so much funnier!
Welp..NGL the First 250 Chapters are great.. The Plot and story is going well untill this Esmeralda thing come into play... Sorry Author but I feel like the Arc Quality drops drastically when MC got abducted by this disgusting Vice president.. It's great but meh.. This really ruins my mood... Goodluck
揭示劇透 This story is beautiful, I'm still at the start of the story but i love the concept and unique world. Good to see a different approach on the abilities it change from the typical getting an ability out of nowhere keep it up author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Okay! As the author, I will give this one-star review because I want to. 🤡🤡🤡🤡 Let's gooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!!! 😈😈👿👿😈
Author asked for one and imma give him/her one But just with the other reviews alone, this novel doesn’t seem to be that good . Wwwwwwwwwwww…………..///////———-;;;;;;;;::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;(((;;((;,,??????????,
why is this in the "Realistic" Genre? A harem isn't very realistic at all . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
I usually don't review novels that I don't like and just ignore them, but since the synopsis is literally asking for 1 star reviews, here it is.
yfsurytykyirrt7yytiiltte67tys469ifczjuftettuuuouuttu0ioypipuoipiopiuoiyffjhkgjtjihjhjgtufdfuygwtcffbh right choice fudthe5ry8iruhe5t8yi7jw6i8ui
MCs characters keeps going downhill. One of the worst harems easily and well ruined it at the ra$e out of nowhere along with the stupid justifications.
This one Is a gem. Usually storys get super boring or drag them selves after 1 volume. Here we have interesting and different characters with nice plot and plot. Mc is not a … that Acts dense or run away from Action with girls.
The novel is good should read it but its ruin when yuna got introduce its just ruin the novel. Grammarly Good World Building Good Charachter Development good
the mc will become stronger or not? ................. ................................... ................................... ..................
Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.
揭示劇透 100 chapters Sigh* This as far i can go. I enjoyed this novel mainly bec of the wholesome parts 😏. But the mc is nothing special he is mainly used as a boy toy and most of the time helping his girls sort out ther problems all in name of love🤷🏼♂️ There was a little bit of character development but at the same time it wasnt enough for that many chapters he just didnt change that much.. It does get frustrasting reading about how the mc has nothing going on for him as you read on. Yes Unfortunatly the MC is all talk half of the time mainly when it about to his life. Granted he had his moments but he does not make reasonable goals and it feels like he has barely no ambitions to improve his Situation. Basically he does not take any practical steps so far. Tbf He does often go to the library? But finds Little answers that will help with explaining his power. Tho it just ends up his girlfreinds find all answers for him. To me the MC is just useless id rather read a novel about his girlfriend lol. At the end of the day he does not have his prioritys right as he is all over the place with his emotions. But hey this just i what think✌️ Good luck
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this novel is not for everyone... first author unnecessary comments, annoying.. mc character is not likable, he thinks he is the problem of everything too much, which many readers don't like it... and other things which I am not going to write...
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Wow nice book, good talent and you deserve more reader's and reviews, I will like to share some tips to boost your book performance, Are you open to that ?