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I'm thinking of dropping this. tbh I loved it but after reading till chapter 185 I have changed my POV. MC becoming more and more like Demon , making contact with Demon. if this gets interesting let me know guys
I read this story two times now, and each time, i found myself very impressed with everything about it. some might say, the story is good, but it's lacking compared to other more unique stories... and they might have a point. yet, i myself think that a story is how it makes you feel. and this one didn't disappoint. highly recommend. thank you to the author for this, and for the inspiration for my own writing.
Such a good novel, been reading it since chapter 11 dropped. I’m so happy that it’s getting a adaptation, hope advent ending will be even better entrail
Author can explain girls with such vivid (and disgusting) language, but every new location or item is just like "woah you can't believe what it's like" You're right. I can't believe or even imagine what any of this stuff is like. You keep forgetting the part of writing where you describe things. Such consistently lazy writing getting such high reviews is laughable. The story is interesting enough to keep going, but out of blue prevision of female characters, inconsistencies is logic and setting, and the overall lack of story layering is so disappointing. Writers should show not tell. All this writer ever does is tell. It's so exhausting to get into.
Just finished this book and well... that was one hell of a ride, huh? This book was really stunning. I think the start was definitely slow, but it was necessary for the book to become what it is and it is so incredibly worth it. I think we can really take away from this book that 'effort never betrays you' and 'the taste of demoness ain't bad'
The best thing I have ever read till date . Although it was my first, but it's not the 1st one I ended , cause I can't , I felt like if this novel comes to an end , so will my life... You all feel same way about some novel or anime or maybe manga or so... For me , it was first Naruto and then , when I read ' THE AUTHOR'S POV ' I was done for , like how can I give you 1 star after all that you *H*L* . What is it , you think you can't write , you can't convey your story to others that they will just give you a star and leave ಥ‿ಥ ಥ‿ಥ. LISTEN TO ME , ENTRAIL_JI , YOU ARE THE BEET ONE OUT THERE TO PROVIDE A RANK 1 EVEN AFTER ITS COMPLETED AND WHILE BEING YOUR 1ST ART . YOU ARE INSPIRING, YOU ARE KNOWLEDGEABLE ABOUT THE WORDS YOU USE , YOU HAVE GREAT KNOWLEDGE OF LITRATURE AND MOST OF ALL... YOU ARE... THE GOAT... THE GOATED ONE... AM A GUY... AND STILL... AM IN LOVE FOR THE VERY 1ST TIME AND WITH 2 PEOPLE... REN AND YOU... MANNN , HOW COME THIS BE YOUR 1ST ART.. YOU HAVE CAPTIVATED MY❤️ { ALSO , I DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR DISCORD IS , CAN SOMEONE TELL ME... PLEASE }
the info dump is STRONG in this one to the point it's off-putting. i have tried to ignore it and move on, but then comes the next hurdle that's the "MC" who is way too obnoxious for me to even like him or his developments. the written execution is so bad
Ngl i really wanted to see Melissa Hall and the MC become a couple :c i've read too many novels with the same type love interest as Amanda. oh the pain
My only problem with the story are the info dumpings. Heard this got better after Chapter 50 or something like that so I'm a bit excited to finish this novel
well first of all i want to ask will mc keep on hiding or being low-key like i got no problem with being low-key but u know mc is like low-low-key he act like weakest even though he is not at least be in mid rank its's not that i want him to be in high rank or anywhere near it, i just don't want him to be at bottom jut be decent, u know what I'm trying to say, i don't know if you understand that sorry cause english is not my first language, I like this novel i am good with it, it's just that i got little problem with MC's personality like my belittle himself if it is for storys's plot to interact as much as possible then bro his existence itself should effect story, he had already change the plot a little and changing a little bit more can't hurt more, if he scared or overthinking cause of the end of story which is not written i think which should not be a problem cause even if it is not written he knows the way story is going and how it is going to end or how it may end plus his existence itself should effect the story in a good way he just need to be aware of main plot to not effect them or change them, As for other things in novel i am good with it i like the way it is going I'm chill with it thank you Author for the story. [not minding infodumping and other thing cause author said he will improve them from 40 chapter ]
Hello! I'm enjoying this story so much and recommended it to my friend. I know you won't see this message but I wanted to appreciate you as this story is amazing. From the way the main character goes through character development, the world-building is also good. Thank you so much for creating this masterpiece!
the development and world building was one of the best I've read , the past story and mystery was also very good, my favourite was about Kevin's past and the development was also phenomenal the entire story is just a good 10/10
Story begins with a lot of info dumb, but gets way better later on, truly a good piece
The only problem i have with this novel is that the author doesn't mention which rank people are at(example: like a ranked person going against a ranked person is blah blah *here it should've been something like a F rank person can't beat a D rank one* this occurs so often it starts getting annoying because it keeps dirsupting your immersion in the story)
It is superb, I also wanna write novel about fantasy-like-games because that makes my creativity goes up. thanks for the stories hope I can contact you or maybe asking some question about how to start write novel?? Hope I can get reply☺
I am writing my review even before I finish it. It is a masterpiece in the truest sense of the word. I love all the characters and I hope that the ending will be satisfactory, good and happy. I am at the beginning of the fourth volume now. I hope I do not forget to write my review as well when I finish it 😍😍💛.I also hope to see more drawings of the characters because I couldn't see much even after searching for a long time 😔
Wow, I have finished the novel right now. Well, It was wonderfull. Indeed, It is in my favorite novels. Excelent work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌
I fell in love with this story when it released , and I will love it to the end of time. Everything falls into place so well, and all the emotions remain as strong as I felt them the first time reading through . This is truly a masterpiece.
As someone who has only read the manhwa version of The Novel's Extra(which at this time is not complete), I can't exactly say how much of a ripoff of that this is. I can certainly see many familiar elements. But I also see many of its own unique things. So I'll just review it as its own thing. One thing that sets this novel apart from other stories with a system is that the system is not very gamey. Most of the progression is very incremental, and none of the characters have a ton of skills and abilities to use in battle. In fact, the stripped-down nature of things actually works to the story's benefit since it allows the story to focus more on what happens in the story rather than LitRPG progression. I also like the skills. They can't level up and have defined ranks, but even a low-level G rank skill can still be useful at the highest of ranks. All in all, I'd definitely recommend checking it out.
I came back again after two years and redrew Ren😼❤️🔥 Unfortunately, I got busy and did not finish the novel. Yesterday, I read 100 chapters from the beginning, and I literally enjoyed it very much and was excited as if I had not read it in years.🫠🫠🫠
I'm thinking of dropping this. tbh I loved it but after reading till chapter 185 I have changed my POV. MC becoming more and more like Demon , making contact with Demon. if this gets interesting let me know guys
I read this story two times now, and each time, i found myself very impressed with everything about it. some might say, the story is good, but it's lacking compared to other more unique stories... and they might have a point. yet, i myself think that a story is how it makes you feel. and this one didn't disappoint. highly recommend. thank you to the author for this, and for the inspiration for my own writing.
Such a good novel, been reading it since chapter 11 dropped. I’m so happy that it’s getting a adaptation, hope advent ending will be even better entrail
Author can explain girls with such vivid (and disgusting) language, but every new location or item is just like "woah you can't believe what it's like" You're right. I can't believe or even imagine what any of this stuff is like. You keep forgetting the part of writing where you describe things. Such consistently lazy writing getting such high reviews is laughable. The story is interesting enough to keep going, but out of blue prevision of female characters, inconsistencies is logic and setting, and the overall lack of story layering is so disappointing. Writers should show not tell. All this writer ever does is tell. It's so exhausting to get into.
Just finished this book and well... that was one hell of a ride, huh? This book was really stunning. I think the start was definitely slow, but it was necessary for the book to become what it is and it is so incredibly worth it. I think we can really take away from this book that 'effort never betrays you' and 'the taste of demoness ain't bad'
The best thing I have ever read till date . Although it was my first, but it's not the 1st one I ended , cause I can't , I felt like if this novel comes to an end , so will my life... You all feel same way about some novel or anime or maybe manga or so... For me , it was first Naruto and then , when I read ' THE AUTHOR'S POV ' I was done for , like how can I give you 1 star after all that you *H*L* . What is it , you think you can't write , you can't convey your story to others that they will just give you a star and leave ಥ‿ಥ ಥ‿ಥ. LISTEN TO ME , ENTRAIL_JI , YOU ARE THE BEET ONE OUT THERE TO PROVIDE A RANK 1 EVEN AFTER ITS COMPLETED AND WHILE BEING YOUR 1ST ART . YOU ARE INSPIRING, YOU ARE KNOWLEDGEABLE ABOUT THE WORDS YOU USE , YOU HAVE GREAT KNOWLEDGE OF LITRATURE AND MOST OF ALL... YOU ARE... THE GOAT... THE GOATED ONE... AM A GUY... AND STILL... AM IN LOVE FOR THE VERY 1ST TIME AND WITH 2 PEOPLE... REN AND YOU... MANNN , HOW COME THIS BE YOUR 1ST ART.. YOU HAVE CAPTIVATED MY❤️ { ALSO , I DONT KNOW WHAT YOUR DISCORD IS , CAN SOMEONE TELL ME... PLEASE }
the info dump is STRONG in this one to the point it's off-putting. i have tried to ignore it and move on, but then comes the next hurdle that's the "MC" who is way too obnoxious for me to even like him or his developments. the written execution is so bad
Ngl i really wanted to see Melissa Hall and the MC become a couple :c i've read too many novels with the same type love interest as Amanda. oh the pain
My only problem with the story are the info dumpings. Heard this got better after Chapter 50 or something like that so I'm a bit excited to finish this novel
well first of all i want to ask will mc keep on hiding or being low-key like i got no problem with being low-key but u know mc is like low-low-key he act like weakest even though he is not at least be in mid rank its's not that i want him to be in high rank or anywhere near it, i just don't want him to be at bottom jut be decent, u know what I'm trying to say, i don't know if you understand that sorry cause english is not my first language, I like this novel i am good with it, it's just that i got little problem with MC's personality like my belittle himself if it is for storys's plot to interact as much as possible then bro his existence itself should effect story, he had already change the plot a little and changing a little bit more can't hurt more, if he scared or overthinking cause of the end of story which is not written i think which should not be a problem cause even if it is not written he knows the way story is going and how it is going to end or how it may end plus his existence itself should effect the story in a good way he just need to be aware of main plot to not effect them or change them, As for other things in novel i am good with it i like the way it is going I'm chill with it thank you Author for the story. [not minding infodumping and other thing cause author said he will improve them from 40 chapter ]
Hello! I'm enjoying this story so much and recommended it to my friend. I know you won't see this message but I wanted to appreciate you as this story is amazing. From the way the main character goes through character development, the world-building is also good. Thank you so much for creating this masterpiece!
the development and world building was one of the best I've read , the past story and mystery was also very good, my favourite was about Kevin's past and the development was also phenomenal the entire story is just a good 10/10
Story begins with a lot of info dumb, but gets way better later on, truly a good piece
The only problem i have with this novel is that the author doesn't mention which rank people are at(example: like a ranked person going against a ranked person is blah blah *here it should've been something like a F rank person can't beat a D rank one* this occurs so often it starts getting annoying because it keeps dirsupting your immersion in the story)
It is superb, I also wanna write novel about fantasy-like-games because that makes my creativity goes up. thanks for the stories hope I can contact you or maybe asking some question about how to start write novel?? Hope I can get reply☺
I am writing my review even before I finish it. It is a masterpiece in the truest sense of the word. I love all the characters and I hope that the ending will be satisfactory, good and happy. I am at the beginning of the fourth volume now. I hope I do not forget to write my review as well when I finish it 😍😍💛.I also hope to see more drawings of the characters because I couldn't see much even after searching for a long time 😔
Wow, I have finished the novel right now. Well, It was wonderfull. Indeed, It is in my favorite novels. Excelent work. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌
I fell in love with this story when it released , and I will love it to the end of time. Everything falls into place so well, and all the emotions remain as strong as I felt them the first time reading through . This is truly a masterpiece.
As someone who has only read the manhwa version of The Novel's Extra(which at this time is not complete), I can't exactly say how much of a ripoff of that this is. I can certainly see many familiar elements. But I also see many of its own unique things. So I'll just review it as its own thing. One thing that sets this novel apart from other stories with a system is that the system is not very gamey. Most of the progression is very incremental, and none of the characters have a ton of skills and abilities to use in battle. In fact, the stripped-down nature of things actually works to the story's benefit since it allows the story to focus more on what happens in the story rather than LitRPG progression. I also like the skills. They can't level up and have defined ranks, but even a low-level G rank skill can still be useful at the highest of ranks. All in all, I'd definitely recommend checking it out.
I came back again after two years and redrew Ren😼❤️🔥 Unfortunately, I got busy and did not finish the novel. Yesterday, I read 100 chapters from the beginning, and I literally enjoyed it very much and was excited as if I had not read it in years.🫠🫠🫠
one of the best novel i ever read [img=recommend]