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Amazing read so far love the story as well the characters are amazing and I’m excited to see it be continued.
I suggest you watch the series instead of reading this. All the author does is write about Mc's relationship with beautiful girls. If he wrote it as hentai or Smut, it would definitely work. aaaaaaakekekekekekekekekekekekek
Please tell me I've just gotta know, which girl is Mark gonna end up with in this story? ........... ........... ........... ........... ...........
Great story! Already liking how things are going and I hope Matthew's telepathy turns into something he can use against the Viltrumites. Hope for more. Keep up the great work!
On chapter 13, so halfway through at the time of me writing this review, and I’m gonna drop it right here. The story is following canon WAYYY too closely. I mean, literally 90% of the story stays the same, while like 10% is original. Also, the MC is just pathetic overall, not even being able to kill aliens who he just saw slaughtering humans.
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I gave you five stars so please answer these questions Who’s the Romance? Will he be Hero, Neutral or Villan? Will he be stronger or the same strength as Mark?
The novel is pretty great so far. The boys act like teenage brothers, the classmates act like kids, everything feels natural. The story so far is still following the show pretty close with some small deviations inherent to having new characters and such, but the broad strokes are all the same. Everything is written well, there are very few big mistakes or anything really noticable. The MC has the expected powers but also nice twists to make him stand out from Mark. overall it's a great novel and I truely hope it gets more chapters going forward especially with season 2 coming out soon I can see interesting growing again.
Please continue your work Dr jddjhrhfufnrnjfhfbbkfjfnffjffjjfnfhfhnfhfhfcuchffh8cfufjfjfjfjfjfjffnjvntbrskdjduxhdhktjtufffjfjcjjririfjfjfifijffjfjtcififrjejicdusiijrdiidktlwowsixkxdjxhj7fj bfg NTN bh it bfg mc c b f by TN h
Very good story, I just hope the author continues with it and gives it an ending.
Amazing read so far love the story as well the characters are amazing and I’m excited to see it be continued.
I suggest you watch the series instead of reading this. All the author does is write about Mc's relationship with beautiful girls. If he wrote it as hentai or Smut, it would definitely work. aaaaaaakekekekekekekekekekekekek
Please tell me I've just gotta know, which girl is Mark gonna end up with in this story? ........... ........... ........... ........... ...........
Great story! Already liking how things are going and I hope Matthew's telepathy turns into something he can use against the Viltrumites. Hope for more. Keep up the great work!
On chapter 13, so halfway through at the time of me writing this review, and I’m gonna drop it right here. The story is following canon WAYYY too closely. I mean, literally 90% of the story stays the same, while like 10% is original. Also, the MC is just pathetic overall, not even being able to kill aliens who he just saw slaughtering humans.
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I gave you five stars so please answer these questions Who’s the Romance? Will he be Hero, Neutral or Villan? Will he be stronger or the same strength as Mark?
The novel is pretty great so far. The boys act like teenage brothers, the classmates act like kids, everything feels natural. The story so far is still following the show pretty close with some small deviations inherent to having new characters and such, but the broad strokes are all the same. Everything is written well, there are very few big mistakes or anything really noticable. The MC has the expected powers but also nice twists to make him stand out from Mark. overall it's a great novel and I truely hope it gets more chapters going forward especially with season 2 coming out soon I can see interesting growing again.
Please continue your work Dr jddjhrhfufnrnjfhfbbkfjfnffjffjjfnfhfhnfhfhfcuchffh8cfufjfjfjfjfjfjffnjvntbrskdjduxhdhktjtufffjfjcjjririfjfjfifijffjfjtcififrjejicdusiijrdiidktlwowsixkxdjxhj7fj bfg NTN bh it bfg mc c b f by TN h
Very good story, I just hope the author continues with it and gives it an ending.