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A complete mess, the MC is completely OP then he regrets it so the author though it would be a reason to make him vulnerable to make genjustsu his weakness when there is danzo in the village. And if what he wanted was a fight, then genjustsu is even more stupid. The clone thing is just so cliché and since the author has no imagination, the clone will obviously go rampage and kill thousands before being stopped by the MC, but the MC voluntarily gave his DNA, so he will be responsible for that but no he will be exposed as a hero. This story is a waste of time for the author and readers.
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this is very bad the concept is good but mc I to open about his powers in this world were people have there eyes and dna stolen and the fact that he is going to make a clan and give hiruzen a literal army of Kryptonians to brainwash is pure stupidy
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
nice always 5 star to mha ff baby [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Enthusiasm for the author, I hope your every activity goes smoothly. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................
A complete mess, the MC is completely OP then he regrets it so the author though it would be a reason to make him vulnerable to make genjustsu his weakness when there is danzo in the village. And if what he wanted was a fight, then genjustsu is even more stupid. The clone thing is just so cliché and since the author has no imagination, the clone will obviously go rampage and kill thousands before being stopped by the MC, but the MC voluntarily gave his DNA, so he will be responsible for that but no he will be exposed as a hero. This story is a waste of time for the author and readers.
揭示劇透 this is very bad the concept is good but mc I to open about his powers in this world were people have there eyes and dna stolen and the fact that he is going to make a clan and give hiruzen a literal army of Kryptonians to brainwash is pure stupidy
this story is good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will progress. please keep up the good work cuz I don't want see this dropped.
nice always 5 star to mha ff baby [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Enthusiasm for the author, I hope your every activity goes smoothly. .................................................................. .................................................................. ..................................................................