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The disappointment when binge reading a good story and finding out their isnt anymore chapters is immense. That’s why I ask, please write more chapters
It is a well written story. The pacing doesnt feel neither too slow or fast. The world background is obviously from pokemon but more or less everything thrown in at random (which isnt bad) The story development is good, as he slowly trains and such at the point where i dropped this story. (chapter 26 or so... when he got his second pokemon without effort) The story is updated often enough if you ask me, so that is good. The character tho... i have a personal dislike for the mc. I do not like how he is edgy and snarky at one moment and then is suddenly shown as domineering or have domineering thoughts. It just puts me off as i dont think you can be both. (again this is personal taste) Other then that the character isnt bad. As for other characters... I did not get to know any other character long enough to actually know them. (unless you count a pokemon but i dont) So overall its a very good fanfic and a good read. The reason i dropped it is simply because of the dislike of the mc. I cant read a story about someone i dont like.
Great story, with great character development and world-building but I ask if the things Lora said were her imagination or if there was some truth behind it.
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I really like this pokemon story. There are almost never of these with specialization of a single type is very entertaining and interesting I hope to see more chapters
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História muito boa, ótimo protagonista, com uma história bem desenvolvida e com uma história que não é clichê, muito bom,...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
me gusta como va la trayectoria del mundo y tambien es mas realista sobre un origen humilde y la obtencion y gasto que se tiene que tener los pokemon
The uniqueness of the main character and his shifting world view is what keeps my interest. The author took a interesting direction in the world of pokemon fanfics. i cant wait to keep reading!
I'm liking the novels, although I haven't finished it yet. How he faces and develops in the Pokémon world is interesting, I hope it continues like this. I also hope that he specialized in the ground or rock type and can finally see what they capture and use the Onix of the crystal of the orange islands. It would be amazing.
This is my second review. After reading this one and the best things in this story are the characterisation of the MC and his Pokemon. The MC is also decently competent and his starter isn't the typical OP Pseudo-legendary or Starter but something more expected from someone who came from humble beginnings.
Aye, I really like this so far. Keep it up Author. Solid writing and story execution. 👌 Really ready for Izan to take Bertha or Clay as a Teacher.
5 Stars so far. Good Grammar And Spelling No Cheats No Harem No Overpowered Pokemon A Relatively Intelligent MC The Author seems to know what they are doing and I'm loving it so far. Keep up the great work author👍
I'm greatly surprised there's no reviews yet... since from what I've seen people are already voting for this novel plenty. I'll keep it brief since there are only few chapters out: The MC is pretty awesome (the right mix between relatable and interesting) but the Pokémon and how they were introduced blew me out the water. I'm really looking forward to more Pokémon battles and to watch his team grow. Hopefully (unlike others fic the Pokémons won't be the only characters in the story though). On a final note I read the others work of the author and liked them very much... even if I'm furious that they weren't finished (I was enjoying them too much!!!!) Ps. The updates seems stable enough
Warning for your review: I can see when your review is being deleted automatically by Qidian cuz of profanity. It even deleted my own review when I used a curse word.
The disappointment when binge reading a good story and finding out their isnt anymore chapters is immense. That’s why I ask, please write more chapters
It is a well written story. The pacing doesnt feel neither too slow or fast. The world background is obviously from pokemon but more or less everything thrown in at random (which isnt bad) The story development is good, as he slowly trains and such at the point where i dropped this story. (chapter 26 or so... when he got his second pokemon without effort) The story is updated often enough if you ask me, so that is good. The character tho... i have a personal dislike for the mc. I do not like how he is edgy and snarky at one moment and then is suddenly shown as domineering or have domineering thoughts. It just puts me off as i dont think you can be both. (again this is personal taste) Other then that the character isnt bad. As for other characters... I did not get to know any other character long enough to actually know them. (unless you count a pokemon but i dont) So overall its a very good fanfic and a good read. The reason i dropped it is simply because of the dislike of the mc. I cant read a story about someone i dont like.
Great story, with great character development and world-building but I ask if the things Lora said were her imagination or if there was some truth behind it.
[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
I really like this pokemon story. There are almost never of these with specialization of a single type is very entertaining and interesting I hope to see more chapters
揭示劇透 História muito boa, ótimo protagonista, com uma história bem desenvolvida e com uma história que não é clichê, muito bom,...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
me gusta como va la trayectoria del mundo y tambien es mas realista sobre un origen humilde y la obtencion y gasto que se tiene que tener los pokemon
The uniqueness of the main character and his shifting world view is what keeps my interest. The author took a interesting direction in the world of pokemon fanfics. i cant wait to keep reading!
I'm liking the novels, although I haven't finished it yet. How he faces and develops in the Pokémon world is interesting, I hope it continues like this. I also hope that he specialized in the ground or rock type and can finally see what they capture and use the Onix of the crystal of the orange islands. It would be amazing.
This is my second review. After reading this one and the best things in this story are the characterisation of the MC and his Pokemon. The MC is also decently competent and his starter isn't the typical OP Pseudo-legendary or Starter but something more expected from someone who came from humble beginnings.
Aye, I really like this so far. Keep it up Author. Solid writing and story execution. 👌 Really ready for Izan to take Bertha or Clay as a Teacher.
5 Stars so far. Good Grammar And Spelling No Cheats No Harem No Overpowered Pokemon A Relatively Intelligent MC The Author seems to know what they are doing and I'm loving it so far. Keep up the great work author👍
I'm greatly surprised there's no reviews yet... since from what I've seen people are already voting for this novel plenty. I'll keep it brief since there are only few chapters out: The MC is pretty awesome (the right mix between relatable and interesting) but the Pokémon and how they were introduced blew me out the water. I'm really looking forward to more Pokémon battles and to watch his team grow. Hopefully (unlike others fic the Pokémons won't be the only characters in the story though). On a final note I read the others work of the author and liked them very much... even if I'm furious that they weren't finished (I was enjoying them too much!!!!) Ps. The updates seems stable enough
Warning for your review: I can see when your review is being deleted automatically by Qidian cuz of profanity. It even deleted my own review when I used a curse word.