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寫檢討It is one of the best story on this platform. In this novel you get to enjoy many different worlds that mc travel each one is unique with well detailed world building. Author even shared maps of those worlds. there is only one thing that i don't like which is system shutdown which happened more than once. it is fun story to read
This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well. This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places. You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things. In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC. A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be. ****** Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent? A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general. ***** Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad? A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written. I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers. ***** Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years? A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world. ****** Q. Why does the MC care about humans? A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him. ***** I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well. Thank you for reading the book either way.
I think the energy system and character development Were spot on.. he mixed so many worlds I feel like all the other system users were really fake and he had the only true system… I love all the soul Tainting and everything else about the universe.. I would love to have a system like his tho😅😅.. it’s like a whole new step in a whole new world.. it’s so perfect that I have nothing to say or criticize… please write more😿😿
As someone who has read over 600 chapters of this garbage. DO NOT READ! The mc is the single dumbest person you can possibly imagine. No, really, try to think of the dumbest possible thing you can do with power, are you doing it? No, nothing like making fart jokes or turning things into ducks because lol so random. No I mean legit stupidity. Okay, are you trying? Try harder! because trust me, it's not nearly as stupid as what this guy does.
First I want to ask who the hell is still watching this shit. The MC is trash the amount of bad decisions he made is beyond me and his IQ is negative Infinity like I don't even know how this bastard even lived. Do you know what this guy did for the Cultivation aspect he said he wants to struggle because he has Immortal life Span but the moment he sees someone stronger than him he compares himself and says he is weak and starts complaining and the amount of situations the bastard put himself because of his lack of strength and yet he doesn't use his system to get a better body or anything at all nah this is absolute dogshit
The first few books upto the fourth is very good, but then the fifth book is the one where he goes to a planet that has vr game, then it suddenly becomes boring for me, but i think the author realized that so he ended it pretty early. Just that, still not done, but very much enjoying it. Btw is the author Filipino or smth? Cause i see Philippines and whatnot, don't get mo wrong, just because the Philippines is mentioned doesn't mean the author is Filipino, I'm just asking if he/she is. Thank you author for making this good novel hehe
women's basketball game tonight at the end of the day and I have a lot of work and I have a lot of work to do with the kids and I don't have a lot of them in my house but I don't want to be a little bit of a lot of them but I have no idea how to do it but I don't know if they're not the same as the other one I think they are not going to be able to get the other ones in the fridge and the other one is in the fridge and the other one is on my desk in my room and I have to go back to the house and get it
揭示劇透Good idea but poor execution, mc is unwilling to let go of his past humanity and is overly emotional because of “system enhancements”
No começo é legal mas quando vai avaçando o MC fica cada vez mais burro e é agoniante de ler, ele insiste em ser um humano cultivador padrão. não tem romance e descobri que depois dos cp 400 a maioria é gerada por AI.
I don't know if it gets better latter but at least for around 60 chapters The MC is so stupid that I feel as if only someone who is less 10 year old or a complete Idiot can be less inteligent then him.😐
The story is a through and through adventure you dont have to worry about ending any time soon(as of 30/8/24 at least). The characters, their development , how it all connects together is great. No boring chapters as of yet. The only complaint i could have is that all chapters aren't out yet. 😅
The novel progresses well in the first 60 chapters, it gets boring after the 60th chapter, some chapters seem to be written just to be written, I left it at 120 chapters.
Its an interesting topic as well as an insult to cultivation novels, its like dropping a Japanese main character into a Xianxia world. The mc is not ruthless enough, the world itself is not ruthless enough, the characters around the mc are gullible and stupid, they are as straightforward as they can get. They will never take revenge or ever even think about such a thing, they will never lie and will believe everything the main character says. The mc is also gullible and stupid. After thousands of years pass he is still childish and idiotic although the author depicts him as smart and cunning due to his age. Doesn't know when to kill or how to punish, not like he would need to, the author protects him and nothing bad will ever happen to him. Nobody will ever come after him or his close ones. But with the bad comes the good. The world background is nice, the story is interesting, the writing is good and there are a lot of chapters. Even though I say a lot of negative things about it I still read until Chapter 592. It's not bad but will sometimes rile you up.
First chapter is amazing.. But when it reach around 70 higher it slowly getting worse. I stop in 150
I swear I really love this book and I would be sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad if it ended, author I hope you see this pls don't end this novel 😭😭
Started great but went downhill from there very fast. The MC act with little to no logic in his actions and I honestly had to greet my teeth every time he is making another stupid decision that's frustrated me to no end. If this novel was bad I wouldn't be so mad but it's actually good and that's what frustrated me more.
My honest review on the book. it has good "world" building, and the characters are well thought out. after 600 or so chapters(on a diff account), the book just lost me. He is just shoved with so much power, and instead of using it to go where he needs to, he takes the slow life. Like Ik he has time and all on his side, but come on 50 or more chapters on him helping his buddies travel around the world? Idk that was just me blowing some steam off after reading 40 chapters in just one sitting only to realize that the mc has more important matters and here he is traveling around the world doing unimportant things and just shoving our brain with useless information. Time skip maybe? if you do manage to get through it, well enjoy as it's a really good read! great start, idea, and overall execution.
Overall it's very awesome but at chapter 1068 I'm seriously confused about who is Nigel ? suddenly this character came out of nowhere and I am really confused please help if anyone can!?
The main character goes through HEAVY development. You can say this is a good thing but you can also say it is a bad thing; since he was an orphan in his first life, he basically has no knowledge about anything and is pretty bad with certain aspects of life but the positive is that he gets better. However, it’s also very tedious to go through what he goes through and he’s more or less a child in terms of social knowledge. The energy aspect is very unique, but the MC makes me want to find a steel wall and bash my head into it repeatedly
I love this novel, one of the best I read so far... please, please don't stop this novel.. keep writing it to the end. It's so good.. I really love it
It's really good. Jus trus me. The beginning might be a tad rough but I've defo seen worse... Hidden gem right here. . . . Well, it's not all that hidden tbh. All over the leaderboards and stuff. It's still good tho.
It is one of the best story on this platform. In this novel you get to enjoy many different worlds that mc travel each one is unique with well detailed world building. Author even shared maps of those worlds. there is only one thing that i don't like which is system shutdown which happened more than once. it is fun story to read
This is my review after more than a year of writing this book. I will start by saying that this is not my best work, but one that is very fun to write, and from the comments I receive, it is quite fun to read as well. This is not an action-packed story with very high tension and suspense, so don’t expect that. It is more than anything a Slice of life. This is a story about a man who turned into energy and can no longer die. As a result, he goes around the world, the galaxies, and eventually the multiverse to see new things and visit new places. You will see all types of power systems, all types of stories, not just Eastern Fantasy as I idiotically put it up as. There’s cultivation, magic, summoning, space adventure, and will be many more things. In addition, I wish to answer a few questions and clear some confusion/ hatred. Q. Why did you turn him into a Human? That beats the premise of the story being about a Non-human MC. A. I didn’t turn him into a human, he was always meant to be one. I never intended to write a non-human MC to begin with when the idea first popped into my head. Still, in a sense, he’s still not a human and never will be. ****** Q. Why is the MC dumb/ not intelligent? A. When I started, I didn’t even know how to write a mediocre MC, let alone one with a brain. So I decided to go with an easy choice that will let me do some exposition without making it an info dump. So, basically, it was because I wasn’t very good at writing in general. ***** Q. Why are the first 100 or so chapters bad? A. When I started writing the book, I had 0 hope of continuing it. I was already writing another book I had started just a month ago, so I didn’t pay much attention to it. I gave this book maybe an hour at most to simply write a chapter and no other time to think of the plot. As a result, the first 100 chapters are some of the worst chapters I have ever written. I only started caring because it ended up being quite a bit popular amongst the readers. ***** Q. Why does the MC not jump in a volcano and sleep for a million years? A. I get this question a lot, even though it is explained. He cannot just sleep forever. There is a high chance of losing energy instead of gaining it when he sleeps. Besides, he likes meeting new people and seeing the world. ****** Q. Why does the MC care about humans? A. Why not? He was a human too, and in some way, he still is one. If you are looking for a cold MC, or anti-hero MC, this is not it. Just because he’s an immortal, he isn’t immediately apathetic to everything around him. ***** I hope you can read past the first 100 chapters, and maybe even enjoy them. If you cannot, that’s understandable as well. Thank you for reading the book either way.
I think the energy system and character development Were spot on.. he mixed so many worlds I feel like all the other system users were really fake and he had the only true system… I love all the soul Tainting and everything else about the universe.. I would love to have a system like his tho😅😅.. it’s like a whole new step in a whole new world.. it’s so perfect that I have nothing to say or criticize… please write more😿😿
As someone who has read over 600 chapters of this garbage. DO NOT READ! The mc is the single dumbest person you can possibly imagine. No, really, try to think of the dumbest possible thing you can do with power, are you doing it? No, nothing like making fart jokes or turning things into ducks because lol so random. No I mean legit stupidity. Okay, are you trying? Try harder! because trust me, it's not nearly as stupid as what this guy does.
First I want to ask who the hell is still watching this shit. The MC is trash the amount of bad decisions he made is beyond me and his IQ is negative Infinity like I don't even know how this bastard even lived. Do you know what this guy did for the Cultivation aspect he said he wants to struggle because he has Immortal life Span but the moment he sees someone stronger than him he compares himself and says he is weak and starts complaining and the amount of situations the bastard put himself because of his lack of strength and yet he doesn't use his system to get a better body or anything at all nah this is absolute dogshit
The first few books upto the fourth is very good, but then the fifth book is the one where he goes to a planet that has vr game, then it suddenly becomes boring for me, but i think the author realized that so he ended it pretty early. Just that, still not done, but very much enjoying it. Btw is the author Filipino or smth? Cause i see Philippines and whatnot, don't get mo wrong, just because the Philippines is mentioned doesn't mean the author is Filipino, I'm just asking if he/she is. Thank you author for making this good novel hehe
women's basketball game tonight at the end of the day and I have a lot of work and I have a lot of work to do with the kids and I don't have a lot of them in my house but I don't want to be a little bit of a lot of them but I have no idea how to do it but I don't know if they're not the same as the other one I think they are not going to be able to get the other ones in the fridge and the other one is in the fridge and the other one is on my desk in my room and I have to go back to the house and get it
揭示劇透Good idea but poor execution, mc is unwilling to let go of his past humanity and is overly emotional because of “system enhancements”
No começo é legal mas quando vai avaçando o MC fica cada vez mais burro e é agoniante de ler, ele insiste em ser um humano cultivador padrão. não tem romance e descobri que depois dos cp 400 a maioria é gerada por AI.
I don't know if it gets better latter but at least for around 60 chapters The MC is so stupid that I feel as if only someone who is less 10 year old or a complete Idiot can be less inteligent then him.😐
The story is a through and through adventure you dont have to worry about ending any time soon(as of 30/8/24 at least). The characters, their development , how it all connects together is great. No boring chapters as of yet. The only complaint i could have is that all chapters aren't out yet. 😅
The novel progresses well in the first 60 chapters, it gets boring after the 60th chapter, some chapters seem to be written just to be written, I left it at 120 chapters.
Its an interesting topic as well as an insult to cultivation novels, its like dropping a Japanese main character into a Xianxia world. The mc is not ruthless enough, the world itself is not ruthless enough, the characters around the mc are gullible and stupid, they are as straightforward as they can get. They will never take revenge or ever even think about such a thing, they will never lie and will believe everything the main character says. The mc is also gullible and stupid. After thousands of years pass he is still childish and idiotic although the author depicts him as smart and cunning due to his age. Doesn't know when to kill or how to punish, not like he would need to, the author protects him and nothing bad will ever happen to him. Nobody will ever come after him or his close ones. But with the bad comes the good. The world background is nice, the story is interesting, the writing is good and there are a lot of chapters. Even though I say a lot of negative things about it I still read until Chapter 592. It's not bad but will sometimes rile you up.
First chapter is amazing.. But when it reach around 70 higher it slowly getting worse. I stop in 150
I swear I really love this book and I would be sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sad if it ended, author I hope you see this pls don't end this novel 😭😭
Started great but went downhill from there very fast. The MC act with little to no logic in his actions and I honestly had to greet my teeth every time he is making another stupid decision that's frustrated me to no end. If this novel was bad I wouldn't be so mad but it's actually good and that's what frustrated me more.
My honest review on the book. it has good "world" building, and the characters are well thought out. after 600 or so chapters(on a diff account), the book just lost me. He is just shoved with so much power, and instead of using it to go where he needs to, he takes the slow life. Like Ik he has time and all on his side, but come on 50 or more chapters on him helping his buddies travel around the world? Idk that was just me blowing some steam off after reading 40 chapters in just one sitting only to realize that the mc has more important matters and here he is traveling around the world doing unimportant things and just shoving our brain with useless information. Time skip maybe? if you do manage to get through it, well enjoy as it's a really good read! great start, idea, and overall execution.
Overall it's very awesome but at chapter 1068 I'm seriously confused about who is Nigel ? suddenly this character came out of nowhere and I am really confused please help if anyone can!?
The main character goes through HEAVY development. You can say this is a good thing but you can also say it is a bad thing; since he was an orphan in his first life, he basically has no knowledge about anything and is pretty bad with certain aspects of life but the positive is that he gets better. However, it’s also very tedious to go through what he goes through and he’s more or less a child in terms of social knowledge. The energy aspect is very unique, but the MC makes me want to find a steel wall and bash my head into it repeatedly
I love this novel, one of the best I read so far... please, please don't stop this novel.. keep writing it to the end. It's so good.. I really love it
It's really good. Jus trus me. The beginning might be a tad rough but I've defo seen worse... Hidden gem right here. . . . Well, it's not all that hidden tbh. All over the leaderboards and stuff. It's still good tho.