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It was good but didn't understand much. I hope when you write the story again, there will be some interesting words and some sentimental words.
Wow my Sweet Jaanu didu👌👌👌 Awesome, Superb, Brilliant Story also your writing skills brilliant 👌👌 I have more words to praise your story but I surprised that my Jaanu didu is also a brilliant Writer👌👌 keep it up my sweet Jaanu didu , May Lord Krishna success you in every step of life... Keep writing 👌👏👏👍
Story Superb ☺️ Akka Your dialogue writing and Scenes are Very good and Intersting Inka book chala chadhavali akka Very happy 🥰❤️ Akka Good Novelist akka Nuvu 😍 Congratulations 🌸💝 Thank you Akka Manchi book rasevu 😍❤️❤️
it's really very interesting story... the characterization is awesome... looking forward for more updates.... Thanks for writing such a wonderful unique story author💜
It was good but didn't understand much. I hope when you write the story again, there will be some interesting words and some sentimental words.
Wow my Sweet Jaanu didu👌👌👌 Awesome, Superb, Brilliant Story also your writing skills brilliant 👌👌 I have more words to praise your story but I surprised that my Jaanu didu is also a brilliant Writer👌👌 keep it up my sweet Jaanu didu , May Lord Krishna success you in every step of life... Keep writing 👌👏👏👍
Story Superb ☺️ Akka Your dialogue writing and Scenes are Very good and Intersting Inka book chala chadhavali akka Very happy 🥰❤️ Akka Good Novelist akka Nuvu 😍 Congratulations 🌸💝 Thank you Akka Manchi book rasevu 😍❤️❤️
it's really very interesting story... the characterization is awesome... looking forward for more updates.... Thanks for writing such a wonderful unique story author💜