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3.89
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I love this book and I hope a lot more chapters get released knowing that there's 221 episodes of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I'm a major My Little Pony fan.
Sorry but i need a honest reason that why did you stuck and maybe i can help you in this problem, please answer me, i will be honest to you, after all you gave me the inspiration and give me a new passion, now i was began to working on my MLP story, and once again i will waiting you. -Vacasal remaster-
I want this type of story shine back again because there was still a chance of this story being good after all sorry about the rating but i can't lying
i'd like to looking for a 'FANSEVICE' especially on JOJO references but i know you man, i would like to do same after all. Keep it up and stay creative![img=recommend]
this is probably not it's actual rating I might re-rate later but for now five stars to motivate the author.
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It's a gender-bender fic. should probably add it to the tags...............................................................................
A shameless author review. And also want to point out to anyone who had with a problem with op system shops. The shop in this fanfic will not contain any world breaking multiverse items, just thing that exist and/or makes sense that doesn't break the world
I'm kinda interested in the story but I'm still very salty about the author making the robs complain about all their reincarnees wishing for the same OP wishes but then casually give the mc a system with a shop. I'm like bruh that's a contradiction as shop systems break any world
揭示劇透
Author, this is a good book. i'm not sure if you are still writing but take care of your health.
I love this book and I hope a lot more chapters get released knowing that there's 221 episodes of My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I'm a major My Little Pony fan.
Sorry but i need a honest reason that why did you stuck and maybe i can help you in this problem, please answer me, i will be honest to you, after all you gave me the inspiration and give me a new passion, now i was began to working on my MLP story, and once again i will waiting you. -Vacasal remaster-
I want this type of story shine back again because there was still a chance of this story being good after all sorry about the rating but i can't lying
i'd like to looking for a 'FANSEVICE' especially on JOJO references but i know you man, i would like to do same after all. Keep it up and stay creative![img=recommend]
this is probably not it's actual rating I might re-rate later but for now five stars to motivate the author.
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It's a gender-bender fic. should probably add it to the tags...............................................................................
A shameless author review. And also want to point out to anyone who had with a problem with op system shops. The shop in this fanfic will not contain any world breaking multiverse items, just thing that exist and/or makes sense that doesn't break the world
I'm kinda interested in the story but I'm still very salty about the author making the robs complain about all their reincarnees wishing for the same OP wishes but then casually give the mc a system with a shop. I'm like bruh that's a contradiction as shop systems break any world
揭示劇透
Author, this is a good book. i'm not sure if you are still writing but take care of your health.