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keep it up☺️ if nobody reviews it. I will review it. good story but need improvement. first try nice try. please read this book somebody his put his full potential to make this novel
LV 1
Good novel but please make some improvements. Please bring more chapters and focus on introducing characters more well. Nice story. Nice imagined by writer
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keep it up☺️ if nobody reviews it. I will review it. good story but need improvement. first try nice try. please read this book somebody his put his full potential to make this novel
Good novel but please make some improvements. Please bring more chapters and focus on introducing characters more well. Nice story. Nice imagined by writer