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well....I should give it 1 star but its pokemon after all............well in personal opinion the story is kinda horrible...I think that's it ...Bye
This is kinda a mess, Imma give honest advice here. there are so many things that just don't need to be there. For instance, the system is unnecessary, it kind of disregards a main aspect of pokemon, being training your pokemon. Something that i think would be more interesting is just if you reincarnate into the world of pokemon and use your knowledge of the games and everything to become the strongest, like locations of items, what pokemon appear where, etc. However, this does get me nostalgic so props on that. Also the chapters are mad short lol
well....I should give it 1 star but its pokemon after all............well in personal opinion the story is kinda horrible...I think that's it ...Bye
This is kinda a mess, Imma give honest advice here. there are so many things that just don't need to be there. For instance, the system is unnecessary, it kind of disregards a main aspect of pokemon, being training your pokemon. Something that i think would be more interesting is just if you reincarnate into the world of pokemon and use your knowledge of the games and everything to become the strongest, like locations of items, what pokemon appear where, etc. However, this does get me nostalgic so props on that. Also the chapters are mad short lol
Its garbage so far but its my book so 5 stars .