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I really enjoyed it wish you would continue with it. I will be there for it 100%.
please could you start updating again. love your story; amazing . #######################################################################################################<3<3
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It's average at best. And it's not dark, it has dark moments once or twice other than that it's a good guy MC story..........................
I really liked it much more than the vampire in bnha Although there are no strong changes in the canon yet, I am very interested in the further development of the story. waiting for new chapters
not too bad. I've not that many animes, maybe I'm worse than author-chan in this aspect. but I believe this novel can be much much more. I will try to watch the anime though, it's hard getting around without knowledge of the characters
this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san!
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I don't think I've encountered a good Akutagawa fanfic before, or it might be the first even, loving the story and characters, there are some writing mistakes but it's not that much that it became noticeable , also I'm not really seeing the sickness too much, maybe because he doesn't use his ability like canon Akutagawa but it's still good.
top story with an not overly cringy edgelord mc.Also good character interreraction beside typical midorya or instant romantic relationship out of the air
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no offence but i just dont like the book and also FOR THE EXXXXPEEES times 5 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Why did I have to read this novel😭, I knew what I was getting into when I saw that there was only 15 chapters but I saw it was about akutagawa and I couldn't resist. Please author just one more chapter 💀
beautiful thing, beautiful thing, well done...coisa linda, coisa linda, bem feito...schöne Sache, schöne Sache, gut gemacht...cosa hermosa, cosa hermosa, bien hecho phrase from a character I like in different languages.(Google tradutor)
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Классная книга, но мало глав. Советую прочитать если есть сомнения. И да жду глав автор 🙂. .......................................................................
I love fanfiction so far the author has good humor and develops the story very well he say to about the world but that’s expected because if we’re reading we’ve watched the anime and he came to this world s few before ua entrance exam. He dosent have a guarantee for when he ipdates so i just didnt give hum full marks and overall i love this fanfic so far
Is good, much like. …………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….
Sheeeeeesh..Here comes the rating. Read it you won regret it. ................................ ....... ..................................
I liked it, I hope it continues, someone tells me good MHA, Danmachi fanficition ]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Rashōmon!! 🤔 orochimaru jutsu hahahahahahahahaha..] only people with culture will know what this song is Vocal percussion on a whole 'nother level coming from my mind! Vocal percussion on a whole 'nother level coming from my mind! Ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) Ah ah ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) It's like a burning sunrise! (Ani makareru makare punpun kete) It's like a burning sunset! (Ani makareru makare punpun kete) It's like a burning sunrise! (Ani makareru makare punpun kete) It's like a burning sunset! Ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) Aah ah ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) Yeah! It's like a Golden Wind! I'm dancing for your mind I'm shaking like a Shaking like a Shaking like a Shaking like a Shaking like a burning Golden Wind
Best MHA fanfic I've ever read. It's not cringed and mc character is good. I also like that it sticks to the original plot, there are some that were change due to mc's existence as a butterfly effect. AND I love that mc is op but even then he didn't overshadowed the original characters, in short his character managed to blends in really smooth. My only problem is that "I need more chapter" (ᗒᗩᗕ) Question: Is this dropped? Or was it completed?
I really enjoyed it wish you would continue with it. I will be there for it 100%.
please could you start updating again. love your story; amazing . #######################################################################################################<3<3
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
It's average at best. And it's not dark, it has dark moments once or twice other than that it's a good guy MC story..........................
I really liked it much more than the vampire in bnha Although there are no strong changes in the canon yet, I am very interested in the further development of the story. waiting for new chapters
not too bad. I've not that many animes, maybe I'm worse than author-chan in this aspect. but I believe this novel can be much much more. I will try to watch the anime though, it's hard getting around without knowledge of the characters
this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san! this fanfic is great. good job author-san!
don't really like it but still giving 5 star anyways [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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I don't think I've encountered a good Akutagawa fanfic before, or it might be the first even, loving the story and characters, there are some writing mistakes but it's not that much that it became noticeable , also I'm not really seeing the sickness too much, maybe because he doesn't use his ability like canon Akutagawa but it's still good.
top story with an not overly cringy edgelord mc.Also good character interreraction beside typical midorya or instant romantic relationship out of the air
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no offence but i just dont like the book and also FOR THE EXXXXPEEES times 5 ------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Why did I have to read this novel😭, I knew what I was getting into when I saw that there was only 15 chapters but I saw it was about akutagawa and I couldn't resist. Please author just one more chapter 💀
beautiful thing, beautiful thing, well done...coisa linda, coisa linda, bem feito...schöne Sache, schöne Sache, gut gemacht...cosa hermosa, cosa hermosa, bien hecho phrase from a character I like in different languages.(Google tradutor)
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Классная книга, но мало глав. Советую прочитать если есть сомнения. И да жду глав автор 🙂. .......................................................................
I love fanfiction so far the author has good humor and develops the story very well he say to about the world but that’s expected because if we’re reading we’ve watched the anime and he came to this world s few before ua entrance exam. He dosent have a guarantee for when he ipdates so i just didnt give hum full marks and overall i love this fanfic so far
Is good, much like. …………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. …………………………………………………………………. ………………………………………………………………….
Sheeeeeesh..Here comes the rating. Read it you won regret it. ................................ ....... ..................................
I liked it, I hope it continues, someone tells me good MHA, Danmachi fanficition ]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]]
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keep on being ok -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------STRAY---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------DOGS-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Ryūnosuke Akutagawa 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐 👌👌👌👌🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐🧐
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▪︎Writing Quality...............☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Story Development........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Character Design...........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎Updating Stability..........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎World Background.........☆☆☆☆☆
Rashōmon!! 🤔 orochimaru jutsu hahahahahahahahaha..] only people with culture will know what this song is Vocal percussion on a whole 'nother level coming from my mind! Vocal percussion on a whole 'nother level coming from my mind! Ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) Ah ah ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) It's like a burning sunrise! (Ani makareru makare punpun kete) It's like a burning sunset! (Ani makareru makare punpun kete) It's like a burning sunrise! (Ani makareru makare punpun kete) It's like a burning sunset! Ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) Aah ah ah We're Golden Wind! (Kono me amareri maroreri merare maro) Yeah! It's like a Golden Wind! I'm dancing for your mind I'm shaking like a Shaking like a Shaking like a Shaking like a Shaking like a burning Golden Wind
Best MHA fanfic I've ever read. It's not cringed and mc character is good. I also like that it sticks to the original plot, there are some that were change due to mc's existence as a butterfly effect. AND I love that mc is op but even then he didn't overshadowed the original characters, in short his character managed to blends in really smooth. My only problem is that "I need more chapter" (ᗒᗩᗕ) Question: Is this dropped? Or was it completed?