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can barely understand whats going on seems like its been mtl and half of the explanations and examples for this make zero sense. would not reccomend unless you want to re read a sentence 10 times and still have little to no clue whats going on.
is this a translation? are u translatong it???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?
Keep up plz amazing grammar and interesting powers so 0lz😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Good concept,Starting looks interesting from what I read now Its up to you how this end up in next chapters...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good luck
can barely understand whats going on seems like its been mtl and half of the explanations and examples for this make zero sense. would not reccomend unless you want to re read a sentence 10 times and still have little to no clue whats going on.
is this a translation? are u translatong it???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?-?
Keep up plz amazing grammar and interesting powers so 0lz😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Good concept,Starting looks interesting from what I read now Its up to you how this end up in next chapters...[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] good luck