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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
What time do you want me to come over and over and over and we will be in a few minutes ago lol I know what I was going to the house and get it to you and your family and friends and family and you can i am I ℹ
Has a great start in my opinion, Always love seeing new Fanfics around Cant Really judge the story based on 2 chapters but for me it has Potential to become great, please update regularly as ive seen so many fanfics that just get left for months 👍🏻 please keep it going
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What time do you want me to come over and over and over and we will be in a few minutes ago lol I know what I was going to the house and get it to you and your family and friends and family and you can i am I ℹ
Has a great start in my opinion, Always love seeing new Fanfics around Cant Really judge the story based on 2 chapters but for me it has Potential to become great, please update regularly as ive seen so many fanfics that just get left for months 👍🏻 please keep it going
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