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Hello🥰 I'm a representative of Letterlux Letterlux is a legit platform, where writers get encouraged and paid for their hard work. I came across your book and we'd love to have you signed with us. It could be a new project. I anticipate your positive response You can contact me at Violet Starr on Facebook
this Trip was very interesting and I propose to those who are not avid DC fans, to read this Fanfic and enjoy a different point of view; the tremendous dump of Information and the romance of this Story
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Eu não sou muito fã da DC, sou do time Marvel, é também prefiro fanfics da Marvel, mas gostei dessa, o começo não foi tão bom, tanto na ortografia quanto na história, mas depois melhorou, recomendo que leiam
Muito bom recomendo muito, espero q o autor não tenha abandonado, espero mais apariçoes do ratman, melhor personagem sem dúvidas😆😃😆🥰😃🥰😙😍😉😍😂😚🥰😚😍😙🤩😙🤩😙😍😙🥰😙😍😙😍🤩😙🤩😙🤩😙🤩😙🤩😙
I quite like this story and it’s very interesting, but the bad translation just makes it horrible. If someone wants to re-translate it, I will give it another read.
Eu gosto da progressão da história, dos eventos, dos relacionamentos, e surpreendente do harém. Gosto de como faz coisas diferentes como o relacionamento estranho com o coringa. A habilidade de persuasão do Naruto também é bem legal kkkk
The story is really good, but the bad grammar and traduction (the author is Russian) make it hard to read. Really interesting and entertaining, it's a good read. Hope it will be edited one day, I'm sure it will attract many new readers.
Good job AUTHOR-SAN. GREAT BOOK.............. ......................................................................................................................
can anyone tell me the original title of this fic? I want to read it in advance. thanks 👍👍👍👍 help help help. hajaiwisijwjwiwisjdjdjsjwiwi
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I had given this fanfic a good review as it is really good, the plot, character, cliche and the not so good grammar but I won't blame Author-san as he is still at the stage of improving his English vocab, just keep on practicing and I do hope that some editors out there proof read this FF and forward the corrections to author-san as it would be a great help to him.
there is no bad translation here that's for sure.... hop in on this crazy ride. it's gonna blow your brain , I mean mind... Also there is a daoist here who has given this book 5 star about 20 times. looks like he enjoyed the book immensely.
es una buena historia la verdad me gustó el desarrollo de la historia los giros que tú vieron los personajes sigue entreteniendonos con tus historias sigue así
over all this is a great story. (I'm at chapter 15) the characters are relatable and nothing is overly exaggerated to the point it breaks immersion. now the down side, as of my current chapter. the author frequently misused various pronouns. it can be jarring and you have to re-read a sentence a few times and puzzle it to gether with what's going on and who is Involved to understand what the author intended. on the other hand the story is good enough that I'm going to steam through these icy flows just so I can find out what happens next.
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gostei. Tem um desenvolvimento, o autor não se afoba muito... e obviamebte quer construir um harem, não apenas colocar o protagonista fodendo todas as garotas.
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ахазхаахахахаха не ожидал увидеть тут этот фанфик. Читал еще на фикбуке. В общем история 4.5 но лично для меня это 5 звезд.............................
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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
it's great book I like it the setting is great and the so is the story development. the mc will get stronger as time continues. the mc will be op.
I had given this fanfic a good review as it is really good, the plot, character, cliche and the not so good grammar but I won't blame Author-san as he is still at the stage of improving his English vocab, just keep on practicing and I do hope that some editors out there proof read this FF and forward the corrections to author-san as it would be a great help to him.
the writing quality is trash idk how its got such high reviews. the first line of the story (close to first line) was "gender - male, of course, i dont wanna be a homosexual" this was in reference to his gender selection. honestly i dont think the author knows what a homosexual is but i honestly am just gonna assume this is MTL trash
Hello🥰 I'm a representative of Letterlux Letterlux is a legit platform, where writers get encouraged and paid for their hard work. I came across your book and we'd love to have you signed with us. It could be a new project. I anticipate your positive response You can contact me at Violet Starr on Facebook
this Trip was very interesting and I propose to those who are not avid DC fans, to read this Fanfic and enjoy a different point of view; the tremendous dump of Information and the romance of this Story
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揭示劇透 Eu não sou muito fã da DC, sou do time Marvel, é também prefiro fanfics da Marvel, mas gostei dessa, o começo não foi tão bom, tanto na ortografia quanto na história, mas depois melhorou, recomendo que leiam
Muito bom recomendo muito, espero q o autor não tenha abandonado, espero mais apariçoes do ratman, melhor personagem sem dúvidas😆😃😆🥰😃🥰😙😍😉😍😂😚🥰😚😍😙🤩😙🤩😙😍😙🥰😙😍😙😍🤩😙🤩😙🤩😙🤩😙🤩😙
I quite like this story and it’s very interesting, but the bad translation just makes it horrible. If someone wants to re-translate it, I will give it another read.
Eu gosto da progressão da história, dos eventos, dos relacionamentos, e surpreendente do harém. Gosto de como faz coisas diferentes como o relacionamento estranho com o coringa. A habilidade de persuasão do Naruto também é bem legal kkkk
The story is really good, but the bad grammar and traduction (the author is Russian) make it hard to read. Really interesting and entertaining, it's a good read. Hope it will be edited one day, I'm sure it will attract many new readers.
Good job AUTHOR-SAN. GREAT BOOK.............. ......................................................................................................................
can anyone tell me the original title of this fic? I want to read it in advance. thanks 👍👍👍👍 help help help. hajaiwisijwjwiwisjdjdjsjwiwi
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I had given this fanfic a good review as it is really good, the plot, character, cliche and the not so good grammar but I won't blame Author-san as he is still at the stage of improving his English vocab, just keep on practicing and I do hope that some editors out there proof read this FF and forward the corrections to author-san as it would be a great help to him.
there is no bad translation here that's for sure.... hop in on this crazy ride. it's gonna blow your brain , I mean mind... Also there is a daoist here who has given this book 5 star about 20 times. looks like he enjoyed the book immensely.
es una buena historia la verdad me gustó el desarrollo de la historia los giros que tú vieron los personajes sigue entreteniendonos con tus historias sigue así
over all this is a great story. (I'm at chapter 15) the characters are relatable and nothing is overly exaggerated to the point it breaks immersion. now the down side, as of my current chapter. the author frequently misused various pronouns. it can be jarring and you have to re-read a sentence a few times and puzzle it to gether with what's going on and who is Involved to understand what the author intended. on the other hand the story is good enough that I'm going to steam through these icy flows just so I can find out what happens next.
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gostei. Tem um desenvolvimento, o autor não se afoba muito... e obviamebte quer construir um harem, não apenas colocar o protagonista fodendo todas as garotas.
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ахазхаахахахаха не ожидал увидеть тут этот фанфик. Читал еще на фикбуке. В общем история 4.5 но лично для меня это 5 звезд.............................
pleas can't you at least edit it so I won't lose my brain cells when reading it. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
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good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author good story i am looking forward to the continuation of the story dear author
it's great book I like it the setting is great and the so is the story development. the mc will get stronger as time continues. the mc will be op.
I had given this fanfic a good review as it is really good, the plot, character, cliche and the not so good grammar but I won't blame Author-san as he is still at the stage of improving his English vocab, just keep on practicing and I do hope that some editors out there proof read this FF and forward the corrections to author-san as it would be a great help to him.
the writing quality is trash idk how its got such high reviews. the first line of the story (close to first line) was "gender - male, of course, i dont wanna be a homosexual" this was in reference to his gender selection. honestly i dont think the author knows what a homosexual is but i honestly am just gonna assume this is MTL trash