/ Fantasy / The Secret of the Young Man named Ellis
摘要
The young man, Teivel C. Ellis, is the second son of the prestigious family of healers in the modern magical world. He is young but a capable healer, the only problem is his weak attitude causing him lots of traumas and pain. He then transferred to the prestigious school named Stofford Academy and have met his old friend Orion. Will his life change for the better or is it another hell?
PS. I am starting to make more decent cover, in this case we have our beloved Arnold Lukes, can you picture him blush at Teivel's teasing? Fufufu.
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I like the style of writing of Jeanne_Marcus. I also commend the character development, by the way, I know the title has 'Ellis' in it but I can't tell who is the real protagonist. Can you at least give him a chapter on his own point of view? Well, I'll continue reading it as long as it's interesting.
Rararararararararararara-rawr!!!!! Teivel is so beautiful, so cool, but Arnold is good too. I really am waiting for updates everyday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh my goodness, another fight scene, I feel like I am starting to see the flags for the main arc, Ice versus Fire and it ends with the both of them half-dead. In the end it was just a joke from their superior, if I am to have someone like that in my job I'll quit already, hahahah.
揭示劇透 It has been quiet for a while. I thought you would have dropped this story already. I am glad that it is still continuing, I want to know the reality of this world lol
Oh, this is quite a good find. I am usually reading at wattpad but there are really good readings here huh. It is pretty good of a mystery-fantasy which I really like. Good work!!!
SO HEY!!! How ca you be so cruel and create a character that just literally appears to die!!! I pity Emma. At least give her a proper reason for her death and why she died. I want to know what is the reason why her whole family is massacred too!!! Please update quicker!!!
揭示劇透 I like how I thought that Teivel is the Emperor and he is just pretending to be dead but there really is an emperor different than Teivel. I want to unveil the identity of the emperor. The characters are also good, especially Arnold, I liked hiss reactions when being teased by Teivel. Overall, can you make a proper cover though? It feels like your cover is rushed or something... anyway, I'm rooting for you. I want to read more of this.
揭示劇透卷 0 : Auxiliary Volume
卷 1
- 1 ARRIVAL OF THE YOUNG LORD 3 years ago
- 2 SHADOW OF DEATH 3 years ago
- 3 THE EMPERROR 3 years ago
- 4 THE CROWNED YOUNG MAN 3 years ago
- 5 THE BEAUTIFUL YOUNG ELLIS 3 years ago
- 6 ELLIS VS ORION 3 years ago
- 7 ARNOLD LUKES' PERSPECTIVE 3 years ago
- 8 TRAGEDY OF THE YOUNG MAN 3 years ago
- 9 THE CRIES OF ORION 3 years ago
- 10 RE: MASSACRE 3 years ago
- 11 RETURN OF THE DEAD 3 years ago
- 12 THE YOUNG COMMANDER OF THE CRIMSON MOON CORPS 3 years ago
- 13 THE CRIMSON NIGHT CORPS 3 years ago
- 14 LAUGH OF THE DEVIL 3 years ago
- 15 CRIMSON NIGHT'S RECRUITS' FIRST MISSION 3 years ago
- 16 MECHANICAL GIANT VS THE COMMANDER OF LIGHT 3 years ago
- 17 ARNOLD'S RESOLVE 3 years ago
- 18 THE DARKNESS SLEEPING UNDER THE GUISE OF LIGHT 3 years ago
- 19 CONFRONTING THE EMPEROR 3 years ago
- 20 THE EMPEROR'S GREAT ESCAPE 3 years ago
- 21 A NEW WORLD 3 years ago
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.