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'Tis a nice story of a transmigrator, ghat at the end of the story decides to live in his beginner village for a couple of decades (he'll live for at least a couple of centuries more at the end of the tale), before continuing adventuring in other realms.
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Это был очень хороший роман с достаточно быстром темпом, но несмотря на это история полноценная и практически без изъянов !. (Рекомендую к прочтению ! ).
Absolutely treasure, different from those cringe cn, humble mc, op mc ... Read the story to know more.
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A very good martial arts story , and a good read for people who wants something short and simple. The only bummer is there is no romance and ending was rushed but it ended very sweetly.
Story pacing is ok. Mc is pretty much what you'd expect from this genre. Way to short though, feel the story could have gone on for 1200 more chapters at least but it's also just a TL.
great novel, love the characters and it is not too fast-paced and I feel it was a worthwhile read
The novel was a decent read. The wording is some areas needs improvement but nonetheless I was glad to finish another book. I don’t have any particular thing I like about this novel but the system type of this novel is just another nostalgia from other older books I read.
Not that good. I picked it up because there were not many chapters and the reviews were good but I don't really liked the novel. Let's start from beginning, It is the story of Xu Ning, a guy with no backstory who transmigrates into the body of another Xu Ning with a broken and boring cheat. I will be dividing this novel into 2 parts the Mortal Arc which would be about first 200 chapters, and the Dao Realm Arc. The Mortal Arc is great, you have challanges ups and downs, meaningful relationships, family, friendship, clever fights, and more. The Dao Realm Arc however, gives you no challenges, MC will always level up before any difficulty, side character are thrown away once they are not needed, the pace of story increases rapidly, MC is having a breakthrough every 20 or less chapters, fights are basically MC overwhelming others with his superior strength. Let me give you an example of how bad the Dao Realm Arc gets, the only combat technique he learns throughout the Dao Realm is "Void Walk Beast Phantom" and it wasn't used for more that 5 chapters, all the previous technique before the Dao Realm are not used in Dao Realm. About the Ending, Ending sucks. The Final Boss guy has no stakes with the MC. Just a bad guy who wants to kill everyone for a petty reason and MC took up the duty to stop him. Also, the ending arc is incredibly rushed, the whole Dao Arc is greatly rushed but the ending takes the cake. When I finished it, I was already fed up with the whole story being rushed that I only sighed in relief for the novel finally ending. MC and his cheat, Plain MC. Good aligned. Not smart, the only time he is shown smart is by making the other character become dumb. His cheat allows him to absorb energy from any Marital Art resource like a herb or a pill, and once he has enough energy he can perfectly level up to the peak of the next level of Cultivation. He never puts any effort into Cultivation. And since he perfectly levels up to the peak of Cultivation, he is also always strongest in his current realm. Cultivation System, Cultivation System is not particularly unique, but quite descriptive. Seems like Author put a lot of thought into describing each stage and the process of Cultivation. But it doesn't mean much when MC's cheat straight up ignores every picularity of the Cultivation Realm and just levels up to the peak of the next realm. The final Cultivation realm had a unique idea, it's basically mastering the Origin of the World and then travelling to other world to master their Cultivation System and their unique Origin, but that also wasn't explored much because of the rushed ending. Overall, This novel was a Disappointment. It's a cliche novel with nothing unique to it. And it looks like Author was trying to end it after the first half, the novel after the first 50% is incredibly rushed.
this was such a gem! scratching an itch i didn't even know i has [img=recommend]
An enjoyable read. Typical cultivation with cheat system novel, but no jade beauty harem or arrogant young masters needing face slapping. Typical problems with the novel as well. MC advances so fast side characters get thrown away cuz they can't keep up, skills and abilities used in the past become irrelevant (which made all the effort put into them kinda disappointing). Cultivation gets faster and faster before the novel ends pretty abruptly. But overall much better than the generic garbage that floods this app
Such an amazing book kept me intrigued to point I didn’t sleep and read it all the way through great job author.
5 stars for now. this one's on a free mode so I gotta try to read it. the synopsis is interesting and the chapters are quite shorter than most translated novel so hopefully I wouldn't want to skip chapters. anyway, kudos still to the author and translators. I hope you are happy wherever you are.
amazing, in almost every way, my only complaints are that he didn't have a love interest from start to finish, nor did he interact much with the family, if he did, most of the time after leaving his village it was in quick dialogues and explanations afterwards of what happened. other than that, the power level is very interesting, not boring, the mc deviates from the concept of generic young masters, there are good and bad young masters, no slaps in the face, no racism or prejudice, well balanced, the author seemed a little in a hurry at the end, but it was an acceptable ending, far from most Chinese novels I've read previously, after all things considered, it deserves 4 stars minimum.
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great story it was short but it still had a great impact this was one of my Frist story i read till the end . there were some parts were it could bring more chapter such as a genius of Tao village went missing were is she was not told till the end so that is one of the incomplete segment.what happened to the void best and cyan beast (wolf type beast ) . old man Wei .so there were aspects were it could be improved and this story does not contain any romantic interest so it is free of drama (i don't actually like tragedy) so this story is one of the best light novel out here. i encourage the author to continue writing new novels. great work 5 Star 🌟🌟🌟 🌟🌟 rating . thank regards Mr.Imperfectlyfine
Pretty solid work overall. The mortal realm starts off in a very typical way but the upper realm progression was more unique, I found, different from the classic foundation establishment->gold core->nascent realm etc The MC is also middling, the secondary characters are not flat. Someone said that they are forgotten quickly, but man, the speed he's cultivating who could keep up? Especially in a huge world with no quick method of transportation. It only makes sense. The world itself is well developed. The translation is decent. There is no romance whatsoever which I always find strange. Lazy cliché does that too. I am not saying that all stories should have romance, but think that the possibility should come up, even if the MC wants to focus on his martial arts. In that kind of culture, once his strength is proven, families would be shoving their daughters his way, hoping to ride his tailcoats.
story is good neither coming too strong nor too soft...authour has written the novel with good quality truly like it
One of the best novel I've ever read, the system is well balance and the pace is just perfect, martial art realm does not feel complicated.
decent novel among the ones I hv read so far constant development of mc and story is not dragging... read till 205 chapter and still reading
Does anyone know if the author will continue this story into a sequel or not? it's a bit unfortunate that the story ends when it hints that the adventure can still continue
One is the most satisfying system novels I've read since Upgrade Specialist in Another World. I am one of those who love OP system levelling novels but gets frustrated a lot with a lot of trash novels where the premise is good but fail on dumb or unlikeable MC, ridiculous power ups but unexplainably nerfed whenever author's limited imagination is a problem, poor translation/ writing quality or the story background is not explained well. I also do not like it when novel is 1k+ chapters too long. I have read dropped novels when the plot becomes repetitive. Same struggle, the only difference is the villains level. MC beats up bully, big brother takes revenge, family takes revenge, sect takes revenge, royal family takes revenge, leaves country then again beats up stronger bully. Rinse and repeat. I also hate systems with attitude but that's just me. The plot and translation of this novel is solid but not outstanding. World background is explained well. MC is likeable, caring for his family and friends, not a genius but has common sense The story also ended at the right time. I was never bored reading it and it got me hooked on the story till the end. The only unfortunate thing is there is no romantic interest. Unusual as MC is a transmigrator. But then again he is only less than 30 by end of novel. Wuxia novels have plenty of 1000 year old virgins as if it's a thing.
A solid webnovel that is actually completed. The MC is not ambitious enough for the story to continue. Once he became no. 1 in the world, he settled down with his family. I just wish there was a little romance to show that he is actually a person.
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it's hard to objectively give a novel a rating out of 5. Most novels are incorrigible, they are cliche, monotonous, and poorly written. This novel is for the most part identical. Foregoing the issue I have with his character (altruistic, righteous, etc. (common chinese protagonist)). Similarly foregoing the chinese idiosyncrasies (I feel I don't need brackets to elaborate). The progression is occasionally explosive and at times pretty subtle so it balances well. The logic can be somewhat far-fetched and at times plain ridiculous, but, can't expect too much. Overall, it was a good read, better than 99% of what else you have floating around, but still just alright. Though it did annoy me that he always found an opportunity to make a friend each time his environment changed, a lot of the time they just relied on his influence and aid, whilst providing nothing at all (quintessential side character). Once again, it can be overlooked because he found himself in a new environment often enough to not thoroughly dislike each side character.
'Tis a nice story of a transmigrator, ghat at the end of the story decides to live in his beginner village for a couple of decades (he'll live for at least a couple of centuries more at the end of the tale), before continuing adventuring in other realms.
揭示劇透 Это был очень хороший роман с достаточно быстром темпом, но несмотря на это история полноценная и практически без изъянов !. (Рекомендую к прочтению ! ).
Absolutely treasure, different from those cringe cn, humble mc, op mc ... Read the story to know more.
揭示劇透 A very good martial arts story , and a good read for people who wants something short and simple. The only bummer is there is no romance and ending was rushed but it ended very sweetly.
Story pacing is ok. Mc is pretty much what you'd expect from this genre. Way to short though, feel the story could have gone on for 1200 more chapters at least but it's also just a TL.
great novel, love the characters and it is not too fast-paced and I feel it was a worthwhile read
The novel was a decent read. The wording is some areas needs improvement but nonetheless I was glad to finish another book. I don’t have any particular thing I like about this novel but the system type of this novel is just another nostalgia from other older books I read.
Not that good. I picked it up because there were not many chapters and the reviews were good but I don't really liked the novel. Let's start from beginning, It is the story of Xu Ning, a guy with no backstory who transmigrates into the body of another Xu Ning with a broken and boring cheat. I will be dividing this novel into 2 parts the Mortal Arc which would be about first 200 chapters, and the Dao Realm Arc. The Mortal Arc is great, you have challanges ups and downs, meaningful relationships, family, friendship, clever fights, and more. The Dao Realm Arc however, gives you no challenges, MC will always level up before any difficulty, side character are thrown away once they are not needed, the pace of story increases rapidly, MC is having a breakthrough every 20 or less chapters, fights are basically MC overwhelming others with his superior strength. Let me give you an example of how bad the Dao Realm Arc gets, the only combat technique he learns throughout the Dao Realm is "Void Walk Beast Phantom" and it wasn't used for more that 5 chapters, all the previous technique before the Dao Realm are not used in Dao Realm. About the Ending, Ending sucks. The Final Boss guy has no stakes with the MC. Just a bad guy who wants to kill everyone for a petty reason and MC took up the duty to stop him. Also, the ending arc is incredibly rushed, the whole Dao Arc is greatly rushed but the ending takes the cake. When I finished it, I was already fed up with the whole story being rushed that I only sighed in relief for the novel finally ending. MC and his cheat, Plain MC. Good aligned. Not smart, the only time he is shown smart is by making the other character become dumb. His cheat allows him to absorb energy from any Marital Art resource like a herb or a pill, and once he has enough energy he can perfectly level up to the peak of the next level of Cultivation. He never puts any effort into Cultivation. And since he perfectly levels up to the peak of Cultivation, he is also always strongest in his current realm. Cultivation System, Cultivation System is not particularly unique, but quite descriptive. Seems like Author put a lot of thought into describing each stage and the process of Cultivation. But it doesn't mean much when MC's cheat straight up ignores every picularity of the Cultivation Realm and just levels up to the peak of the next realm. The final Cultivation realm had a unique idea, it's basically mastering the Origin of the World and then travelling to other world to master their Cultivation System and their unique Origin, but that also wasn't explored much because of the rushed ending. Overall, This novel was a Disappointment. It's a cliche novel with nothing unique to it. And it looks like Author was trying to end it after the first half, the novel after the first 50% is incredibly rushed.
this was such a gem! scratching an itch i didn't even know i has [img=recommend]
An enjoyable read. Typical cultivation with cheat system novel, but no jade beauty harem or arrogant young masters needing face slapping. Typical problems with the novel as well. MC advances so fast side characters get thrown away cuz they can't keep up, skills and abilities used in the past become irrelevant (which made all the effort put into them kinda disappointing). Cultivation gets faster and faster before the novel ends pretty abruptly. But overall much better than the generic garbage that floods this app
Such an amazing book kept me intrigued to point I didn’t sleep and read it all the way through great job author.
5 stars for now. this one's on a free mode so I gotta try to read it. the synopsis is interesting and the chapters are quite shorter than most translated novel so hopefully I wouldn't want to skip chapters. anyway, kudos still to the author and translators. I hope you are happy wherever you are.
amazing, in almost every way, my only complaints are that he didn't have a love interest from start to finish, nor did he interact much with the family, if he did, most of the time after leaving his village it was in quick dialogues and explanations afterwards of what happened. other than that, the power level is very interesting, not boring, the mc deviates from the concept of generic young masters, there are good and bad young masters, no slaps in the face, no racism or prejudice, well balanced, the author seemed a little in a hurry at the end, but it was an acceptable ending, far from most Chinese novels I've read previously, after all things considered, it deserves 4 stars minimum.
揭示劇透 great story it was short but it still had a great impact this was one of my Frist story i read till the end . there were some parts were it could bring more chapter such as a genius of Tao village went missing were is she was not told till the end so that is one of the incomplete segment.what happened to the void best and cyan beast (wolf type beast ) . old man Wei .so there were aspects were it could be improved and this story does not contain any romantic interest so it is free of drama (i don't actually like tragedy) so this story is one of the best light novel out here. i encourage the author to continue writing new novels. great work 5 Star 🌟🌟🌟 🌟🌟 rating . thank regards Mr.Imperfectlyfine
Pretty solid work overall. The mortal realm starts off in a very typical way but the upper realm progression was more unique, I found, different from the classic foundation establishment->gold core->nascent realm etc The MC is also middling, the secondary characters are not flat. Someone said that they are forgotten quickly, but man, the speed he's cultivating who could keep up? Especially in a huge world with no quick method of transportation. It only makes sense. The world itself is well developed. The translation is decent. There is no romance whatsoever which I always find strange. Lazy cliché does that too. I am not saying that all stories should have romance, but think that the possibility should come up, even if the MC wants to focus on his martial arts. In that kind of culture, once his strength is proven, families would be shoving their daughters his way, hoping to ride his tailcoats.
story is good neither coming too strong nor too soft...authour has written the novel with good quality truly like it
One of the best novel I've ever read, the system is well balance and the pace is just perfect, martial art realm does not feel complicated.
decent novel among the ones I hv read so far constant development of mc and story is not dragging... read till 205 chapter and still reading
Does anyone know if the author will continue this story into a sequel or not? it's a bit unfortunate that the story ends when it hints that the adventure can still continue
One is the most satisfying system novels I've read since Upgrade Specialist in Another World. I am one of those who love OP system levelling novels but gets frustrated a lot with a lot of trash novels where the premise is good but fail on dumb or unlikeable MC, ridiculous power ups but unexplainably nerfed whenever author's limited imagination is a problem, poor translation/ writing quality or the story background is not explained well. I also do not like it when novel is 1k+ chapters too long. I have read dropped novels when the plot becomes repetitive. Same struggle, the only difference is the villains level. MC beats up bully, big brother takes revenge, family takes revenge, sect takes revenge, royal family takes revenge, leaves country then again beats up stronger bully. Rinse and repeat. I also hate systems with attitude but that's just me. The plot and translation of this novel is solid but not outstanding. World background is explained well. MC is likeable, caring for his family and friends, not a genius but has common sense The story also ended at the right time. I was never bored reading it and it got me hooked on the story till the end. The only unfortunate thing is there is no romantic interest. Unusual as MC is a transmigrator. But then again he is only less than 30 by end of novel. Wuxia novels have plenty of 1000 year old virgins as if it's a thing.
A solid webnovel that is actually completed. The MC is not ambitious enough for the story to continue. Once he became no. 1 in the world, he settled down with his family. I just wish there was a little romance to show that he is actually a person.
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it's hard to objectively give a novel a rating out of 5. Most novels are incorrigible, they are cliche, monotonous, and poorly written. This novel is for the most part identical. Foregoing the issue I have with his character (altruistic, righteous, etc. (common chinese protagonist)). Similarly foregoing the chinese idiosyncrasies (I feel I don't need brackets to elaborate). The progression is occasionally explosive and at times pretty subtle so it balances well. The logic can be somewhat far-fetched and at times plain ridiculous, but, can't expect too much. Overall, it was a good read, better than 99% of what else you have floating around, but still just alright. Though it did annoy me that he always found an opportunity to make a friend each time his environment changed, a lot of the time they just relied on his influence and aid, whilst providing nothing at all (quintessential side character). Once again, it can be overlooked because he found himself in a new environment often enough to not thoroughly dislike each side character.
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