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yes yes very giid ,very Godly I must say.I have never read this kind of novel so it's my first time.please update more frequently thank you.
I don't understand why he care so much about his dream. he's literary the first before him there were no good no bad no creation no destruction he who put the laws and when there is no time why he talk about it his family can't understand something that don't exist in the first place
This story reminds me of this one DC fanfic where the MC is reborn as Michael. The first chapters were fine but after that is like retelling the Genesis story with Marvel. After some time it gets really boring.
A Great Fanfiction, The Mc is Yaweh, and the one above all is his son Stanlee if you can avoid the lemon during the 1st four chapters, that is the only one, then it gets into the story which the author lays it out great, though it feels a little rushed, I rate five stars because I enjoy it immensely
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any questions let me know, I am about to start my first job so I will be able to post longer chapters once I buy a new computer soon, I thank you all for your support.
interesting story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Grrat story that i believe is a solid 4.5 if not 5. Though it gets a little religious at times, it is so mich fun to read. The author does a pretty decent job at explanations as well so there’s that.
It's a pretty good story to me, A guy reborn as God who is nothing itself. Ot has Stan Lee and Nemesis as his children along with a woman created to be his wife. Nemesis died because she wanted too.Feeling the greif of her beloved lucifers change and banishment. when she died she even created a universe! Although I know the history of the Marvel comics in another form this is pretty interesting. I am looking forward to more.
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I rate this story five stars simply because of the interesting concept, and it is really adding up to my expectations, the only thing that really is bad is the romantic development, between mc and his wife in the first three chapters, but if you get past that it can be a very enjoyable story
let's see what comes next..............................................................................................................................
I can't stop thinking how anything from this makes sense? he is the void, how he even cares about the human memories, he is all powers as you say? I'm sorry if I misunderstand your story because I can't keep reading your novel because I can't stop thinking logical
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Aaron... lol[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
________________________________________to say the truth I have read about 3 chapters and I like were this going so 7/10___________________________________
yes yes very giid ,very Godly I must say.I have never read this kind of novel so it's my first time.please update more frequently thank you.
I don't understand why he care so much about his dream. he's literary the first before him there were no good no bad no creation no destruction he who put the laws and when there is no time why he talk about it his family can't understand something that don't exist in the first place
This story reminds me of this one DC fanfic where the MC is reborn as Michael. The first chapters were fine but after that is like retelling the Genesis story with Marvel. After some time it gets really boring.
A Great Fanfiction, The Mc is Yaweh, and the one above all is his son Stanlee if you can avoid the lemon during the 1st four chapters, that is the only one, then it gets into the story which the author lays it out great, though it feels a little rushed, I rate five stars because I enjoy it immensely
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any questions let me know, I am about to start my first job so I will be able to post longer chapters once I buy a new computer soon, I thank you all for your support.
interesting story 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Grrat story that i believe is a solid 4.5 if not 5. Though it gets a little religious at times, it is so mich fun to read. The author does a pretty decent job at explanations as well so there’s that.
It's a pretty good story to me, A guy reborn as God who is nothing itself. Ot has Stan Lee and Nemesis as his children along with a woman created to be his wife. Nemesis died because she wanted too.Feeling the greif of her beloved lucifers change and banishment. when she died she even created a universe! Although I know the history of the Marvel comics in another form this is pretty interesting. I am looking forward to more.
揭示劇透 I rate this story five stars simply because of the interesting concept, and it is really adding up to my expectations, the only thing that really is bad is the romantic development, between mc and his wife in the first three chapters, but if you get past that it can be a very enjoyable story
let's see what comes next..............................................................................................................................
I can't stop thinking how anything from this makes sense? he is the void, how he even cares about the human memories, he is all powers as you say? I'm sorry if I misunderstand your story because I can't keep reading your novel because I can't stop thinking logical
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Aaron... lol[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
________________________________________to say the truth I have read about 3 chapters and I like were this going so 7/10___________________________________