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A/n:: Lucifer seems pretty stupid now, I am trying to make his lies and tricks develop over time and his jealousy grow over time as well, till he truly becomes the lord of lies, the father of evil and whats the opposite word for incorruptible? I could make lucifer redeemed, but honestly I do not know I am still thinking hope you enjoy this short chapter

Lucifer slithered down the ground in the form of a Snake, yes a snake, as it seems he still has some of the power that he had as an Archangel, but it was different, instead of a more glorious form, it was different, more plain and basic. Like a normal animal.

Lucifer slithered on the ground at fast speeds until he reached where the couples were. The couples, who were eating the apples from all of the trees, They were so innocent, and carefree, from what he had heard and had seen, were allowed to eat any apple tree but the one in the centre or else they would die.

Lucifer smirked triumphantly as he thought of the most genius plan in his eyes.

He slithered until he was face to face with them,,,,

"Hello..." he replied, causing them to look at him in amazement, "You just spoke?"

His smirk grew, "Yes of course I did.... but I just noticed something really odd, you are eating all the apples from every tree but the center one... why?"

He glanced at him confused, "What do you mean why, father told us not to...."

The serpent shook his head, In disappointment, "Father father....you know what he is doing, he is being cautious, because if you eat that fruit in the center, you would become just like him."

His eyes widened in astonishment, but Eve however frowned skeptical....

"But wouldn't he not create that tree if he knew it would be so bad?"

"Exactly!" Lucifer's smirk turned into a grin, "Exactly right, that means it is not bad at all," He glanced over to father and saw him beginning to stir, he looked back at them " I have to go, think about what I just said."

Just like that he vanished.

Adam looked over frowning in deep thought before he smiled and walked over to the tree in the center and picked up an apple....

"Adam don't!" Eve replied grabbing him by the arm, "Father told us not to do that, he must have reasons.

He grabbed another apple and handed it to her, "Reasons I believe him to be right." he said, He took a bite of the said apple causing eve's eyes to widen in shock, he looked at her and smiledwhy would he have created it in the first place if it was truly that bad?"

SHe looked at it with a frown, before she slowly began to take a bite, adam continued with his, until they where both finished,

Once they were done though something unusual happened, the light that they had on began to fade, and The heavens themselves began to violently shake


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