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4/1/3/5/5 Good, but abandoned... I suggest you not to read, this is too addicting but get abandoned. You guys only make yourself hurt. Not really much say about it cause only 5 chapter but overall it's interesting
First few chapter is amazing and good, the route of the story reminds me of a certain ff also in Webnovel. Anyway it is very good story and I just hope the author keeps up the good work and continue to update and not drop this gemstone
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first and only power stone. this story has potential but alas, it is like the other dropped stories. Hope author continues it. Also, i ship mashihiro
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Love It the MC is a mangaka first and foremost also probably a Dharam fanfiction but support just KEEP POSTING PLZ...........
good... I'm getting a little addicted.. please update often at least 1-2 per week or more you can.. and even then if you want... I... Want... Moreeee!!
i love this novel.................................................................................. ............... ........................
If I compare it to the start of becoming a mangaka I like the start of the story better, the mc on this one has more possibility of character growth compare to start by becoming a mangaka where the mcs personility there is already built from the start
I'm leaving a 5 star review so you can write with passion! Please don't stop without finishing it![img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I would give this a 10 if I could but sadly the score is limited to 5. Screw you Webnovel!! Keep it up man I hope to see more chapters. . . . . . .
Yeah i know another novel with same setting with this, but for now i prefer to read your novel, and please i need more chapter and stable update
Good Fanfiction..................................................................................................................................................................................
Please make the third pov, a little uncomfortable for me to read it ..................... ..................... ..................... .....
bro I liked your book and I have request can you give mc archer emiya class card and make him little bit like shirou emiya [img=update][img=recommend]
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. please keep up the good work
Is it harem by cover it look like it ....,..........................................................................................,..........
I'm sad this Fic is hopefully on long hiatus, the only fic that near this is that akitan one, but I think we knows the problem with it and before people says it's the mc I will say : yes, it is the mc
4/1/3/5/5 Good, but abandoned... I suggest you not to read, this is too addicting but get abandoned. You guys only make yourself hurt. Not really much say about it cause only 5 chapter but overall it's interesting
First few chapter is amazing and good, the route of the story reminds me of a certain ff also in Webnovel. Anyway it is very good story and I just hope the author keeps up the good work and continue to update and not drop this gemstone
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first and only power stone. this story has potential but alas, it is like the other dropped stories. Hope author continues it. Also, i ship mashihiro
................................................... ................................................... Ku harap cerita ini berlanjut .................................................. ..................................................
Love It the MC is a mangaka first and foremost also probably a Dharam fanfiction but support just KEEP POSTING PLZ...........
good... I'm getting a little addicted.. please update often at least 1-2 per week or more you can.. and even then if you want... I... Want... Moreeee!!
i love this novel.................................................................................. ............... ........................
If I compare it to the start of becoming a mangaka I like the start of the story better, the mc on this one has more possibility of character growth compare to start by becoming a mangaka where the mcs personility there is already built from the start
I'm leaving a 5 star review so you can write with passion! Please don't stop without finishing it![img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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I would give this a 10 if I could but sadly the score is limited to 5. Screw you Webnovel!! Keep it up man I hope to see more chapters. . . . . . .
Yeah i know another novel with same setting with this, but for now i prefer to read your novel, and please i need more chapter and stable update
Good Fanfiction..................................................................................................................................................................................
Please make the third pov, a little uncomfortable for me to read it ..................... ..................... ..................... .....
bro I liked your book and I have request can you give mc archer emiya class card and make him little bit like shirou emiya [img=update][img=recommend]
this story is very good so far and I'm looking forward for more chapters and how the story will continue onwards. please keep up the good work
Is it harem by cover it look like it ....,..........................................................................................,..........
I'm sad this Fic is hopefully on long hiatus, the only fic that near this is that akitan one, but I think we knows the problem with it and before people says it's the mc I will say : yes, it is the mc