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This story is promoted as part of a Christmas thing. started reading and have enjoyed it so far, and I am looking for more chapters in the future. Hopefully the author keeps writing as it fast becoming a daily fix for myself.
Is there a summary of the novel or just things happen (, things happen) ........................................................................
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Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
Suitable for anyone who like overdrawn nonsense drama especially between MC and girls. I read till chapter 150 on pirate website, all i can say is this novel is will make u very frustrated, suffer and angry. I dont feel the joy of reading this sh**. Legitly, i got high blood pressure from reading this. PLEASE END THE STUPID DRAMA KEEP IT WITHIN LESS THAN 100 CHP AT MOST.[img=faceslap]
This novel is amazing even though it has a goofy title(but I like it). Well then, first of all, the grammar is spot on. The stability of updates considering he has college is really impressive. The story developing at a stable pace not too fast not too slow. The character designs are good. The world is vast and yeah, that's pretty much it.
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although I just read 3 chapters but I think I already where the story is going! I just hope that Elsa will be part of Helio's harem too!🥺😍🤭
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The writing is decent, the updates seem consistent, story development is alright and there are decent characters. The world building also seems OK. Honestly if you like some what JP-anime vibe story then give it ago. There is nothing that seems wrong, but the character of the MC and the side characters were rather annoying often. Plus the whole thing about everyone keeping things from him isn't my cup of tea and him not remembering things after major events. Plus the whole chapter of talking to himself about how he will not do something only for him to that exact thing at the end was annoying as well along with half of his self talk. All in all, if you are a fan of the genre give it a read and decide for yourself, it has its upsides, it wasn't my cup of tea, but it could be yours.
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I think you can add more power like aura control for helio he can control +ions and -ions , aura is a thin laker of +ions so I think helio was able to control opponent aura and mude for a little time like make opponent sad , Scared , berserk to feared for a little while
THIS BOOK IS JUST AMAZING! AUTHOR, I REALLY REALLY SUPER LOVE YOUR BOOK! It’s great! No wonder why it has many reviews! Keep up the great work, author! I’m rooting for you! Ahhhhh i’m so excited!
Its good ...........................................................................................................................................
I like this I deducted 1 star from writing quality because there were occasional glitches in the matrix. pacing is good but more action might make it better. it's updated daily. and though im left with some questions about the world, I like this, end of story.
The narrator has an engaging voice. Good grammar. Intriguing world and characters. It's one of those few novels that give me faith in web novels.
The writing is just marvellous. I can't begin to describe how much emotion is brought out when reading it. The detailing that goes into it is beyond extraordinary. Would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for an intriguing story. That being said, well done author!
the character of the novel are so refined the plot is dark and that's a good thing , the story sometimes felt confusing and I had to reread few parts but overall it was good
The writing is as clean as bottled mineral water, pure and flows easily, something that only comes with years of practice. Helios is a fun MC, easy to connect and his mother is an absolute charmer. The story starts immediately and doesn't dilly dally. We do see some internal conflict in helios, and lil bit with his sis. I am only on chapter 4, so I am sure the author portrays or will portray the greater conflict in the future. The dialogues are awesome and on the best features of this story. We already see a lil of the world, and I believe there will be more of the mutant world in future. I sure will continue to follow this story. Thank you, author.
This story is a whirlwind for sure! There isn't a boring moment and the writing flows at a steady but neck-breaking speed. That being said I love it as it fits the story well. The premise and the world are a superb!
At first I thought that his name was "Hello". XD that was really dumb for me. Anyway, all I can say is it was a fun read and entertaining. The title is weird and funny. The writing is okay and I know the author has his primary book participating the WSA, so having this book joining a new contest is understandble. All I can say is that the novel focuses more on "telling" and less "showing". It would be more entertaining if the chapters gets a full edit in the long run about the showing stuff and make it more engaging. Overall, 5/5!!!!
I love the story so far so good ! Both the writing quality , story development and world background are well done and stuctured . please keep going and update more , i'm hooked already !
A bit of a slow start to establish world-building. Awesome take and the premise is well crafted. I can see its potential. (For the new readers) Well, the story goes deeper and deeper as you go on so make sure you read it kay? Nice!
The characters are portrayed very well and the interactions have a natural flow which is alluring. Certain sentences do seem abrupt but, the essence of the story does attract readers.
An interesting story in an interesting world. I like, that there are some unique and interesting powers. Characters are relatable, especially the dorm senior. Well done author! Added to library and waiting for more!
Again shamelessly giving my book 5 stars. (I'm not doing this just to increase ratings, promise) Anyway, congrats myself on reaching 100k views. *patting myself on the back* (why's this so hard?) Enough messing around. Thanks, everyone. Glad you like my work (and hopefully me too). Though updates will be 6~8 chapters a week, I hope you guys stick around and enjoy yourselves. The purpose of this book is pure enjoyment and fun. So, enjoy yourselves XD. And if you've got questions feel free to shoot them at me. (You even mail me, link's in the bio)
5 stars.........................................................................................................................................................
This story is promoted as part of a Christmas thing. started reading and have enjoyed it so far, and I am looking for more chapters in the future. Hopefully the author keeps writing as it fast becoming a daily fix for myself.
Is there a summary of the novel or just things happen (, things happen) ........................................................................
niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee uwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwuwu goob jobbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter
Suitable for anyone who like overdrawn nonsense drama especially between MC and girls. I read till chapter 150 on pirate website, all i can say is this novel is will make u very frustrated, suffer and angry. I dont feel the joy of reading this sh**. Legitly, i got high blood pressure from reading this. PLEASE END THE STUPID DRAMA KEEP IT WITHIN LESS THAN 100 CHP AT MOST.[img=faceslap]
This novel is amazing even though it has a goofy title(but I like it). Well then, first of all, the grammar is spot on. The stability of updates considering he has college is really impressive. The story developing at a stable pace not too fast not too slow. The character designs are good. The world is vast and yeah, that's pretty much it.
..............................................................................................................................................................................Exp
although I just read 3 chapters but I think I already where the story is going! I just hope that Elsa will be part of Helio's harem too!🥺😍🤭
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The writing is decent, the updates seem consistent, story development is alright and there are decent characters. The world building also seems OK. Honestly if you like some what JP-anime vibe story then give it ago. There is nothing that seems wrong, but the character of the MC and the side characters were rather annoying often. Plus the whole thing about everyone keeping things from him isn't my cup of tea and him not remembering things after major events. Plus the whole chapter of talking to himself about how he will not do something only for him to that exact thing at the end was annoying as well along with half of his self talk. All in all, if you are a fan of the genre give it a read and decide for yourself, it has its upsides, it wasn't my cup of tea, but it could be yours.
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I think you can add more power like aura control for helio he can control +ions and -ions , aura is a thin laker of +ions so I think helio was able to control opponent aura and mude for a little time like make opponent sad , Scared , berserk to feared for a little while
THIS BOOK IS JUST AMAZING! AUTHOR, I REALLY REALLY SUPER LOVE YOUR BOOK! It’s great! No wonder why it has many reviews! Keep up the great work, author! I’m rooting for you! Ahhhhh i’m so excited!
Its good ...........................................................................................................................................
I like this I deducted 1 star from writing quality because there were occasional glitches in the matrix. pacing is good but more action might make it better. it's updated daily. and though im left with some questions about the world, I like this, end of story.
The narrator has an engaging voice. Good grammar. Intriguing world and characters. It's one of those few novels that give me faith in web novels.
The writing is just marvellous. I can't begin to describe how much emotion is brought out when reading it. The detailing that goes into it is beyond extraordinary. Would definitely recommend it to anyone looking for an intriguing story. That being said, well done author!
the character of the novel are so refined the plot is dark and that's a good thing , the story sometimes felt confusing and I had to reread few parts but overall it was good
The writing is as clean as bottled mineral water, pure and flows easily, something that only comes with years of practice. Helios is a fun MC, easy to connect and his mother is an absolute charmer. The story starts immediately and doesn't dilly dally. We do see some internal conflict in helios, and lil bit with his sis. I am only on chapter 4, so I am sure the author portrays or will portray the greater conflict in the future. The dialogues are awesome and on the best features of this story. We already see a lil of the world, and I believe there will be more of the mutant world in future. I sure will continue to follow this story. Thank you, author.
This story is a whirlwind for sure! There isn't a boring moment and the writing flows at a steady but neck-breaking speed. That being said I love it as it fits the story well. The premise and the world are a superb!
At first I thought that his name was "Hello". XD that was really dumb for me. Anyway, all I can say is it was a fun read and entertaining. The title is weird and funny. The writing is okay and I know the author has his primary book participating the WSA, so having this book joining a new contest is understandble. All I can say is that the novel focuses more on "telling" and less "showing". It would be more entertaining if the chapters gets a full edit in the long run about the showing stuff and make it more engaging. Overall, 5/5!!!!
I love the story so far so good ! Both the writing quality , story development and world background are well done and stuctured . please keep going and update more , i'm hooked already !
A bit of a slow start to establish world-building. Awesome take and the premise is well crafted. I can see its potential. (For the new readers) Well, the story goes deeper and deeper as you go on so make sure you read it kay? Nice!
The characters are portrayed very well and the interactions have a natural flow which is alluring. Certain sentences do seem abrupt but, the essence of the story does attract readers.
An interesting story in an interesting world. I like, that there are some unique and interesting powers. Characters are relatable, especially the dorm senior. Well done author! Added to library and waiting for more!
Again shamelessly giving my book 5 stars. (I'm not doing this just to increase ratings, promise) Anyway, congrats myself on reaching 100k views. *patting myself on the back* (why's this so hard?) Enough messing around. Thanks, everyone. Glad you like my work (and hopefully me too). Though updates will be 6~8 chapters a week, I hope you guys stick around and enjoy yourselves. The purpose of this book is pure enjoyment and fun. So, enjoy yourselves XD. And if you've got questions feel free to shoot them at me. (You even mail me, link's in the bio)