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Man!!! This is a wild ride! I can see such world building and detailed writing reach 2000+ chapters if continued properly. I also like the comedy here and there and the feeling of the characters having their own personalities being portrayed during exchanges. I could feel myself reading Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones again. Nice job!!! Keep it up!
Absolutely amazing. The author has done an amazing job all round so far, and i do hope this level of writing continues as the book progresses. Excellent writing quality. No grammatical errors I could see and the selection of words used made the story seem very free flowing. It's too early to judge story development, but from what I've read so far, it's clear it has massive potential. The characters are easy to follow and written well, each unique and we'll suited to the roles the author has set out for them. And the world background. Very well crafted world and understanding how it works has been made very easy thanks to the author. Keep up the good work.
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The writing is ok. The character .... well what do u expect from authors these days making characters arrogant is their common trait but we'll in this situation it can be understandable since winning a few wars made him feel arrogant. Don't know how he can be arrogant after getting defeated in India and running away. The transmigration was quick as if on a whim. I dropped .
The author does know Alexander the Great was a bloodthirsty conquerer, right? Like did you randomly pick him without doing any research on his character?
Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘 btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰
If you don't need something to hang out with, don't read it. If you don't need something to hang out with, don't read it. If you don't need something to hang out with, don't read it.
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Awesome, just awesome 😭👍, the plot, characters, comedy, powerup, surprises, all of them are super 🤪, the only problem is i wish i started it late, i want more( ･ั﹏･ั)
Sheezuss...... this book is spellbinding indeed! I was sceptical at first. Can't wait for the next chapters to be released.... Work harder Author the suspense is killing me!!!
Its a wonderful novel with a lot of potential if written correctly also its the first novel i have seen about Alexander the Great!! ….…….…………
I was smiling when I read the concept because a Macedonian ruler suddenly transmigrated into a different world. The concept definitely looks interesting! Good work Authoe-nim!
A novel on THE Alexander of Macedon was not one I expected, but it is extremely good! The writing quality is spectacular and some of the best on the platform. Now, I'll have to read more about the characters but from the get-go, they're also superbly written. Onto the world-building, I'd say it deserves more than 5 stars. Good work!
The whole Idea behind this novel is amazing. taking a king into a new world with new abliIties is 🔥. I canT wait to see more fighting seNces. can Alexander the greaT liVe up to his title EVen in another worLd brilliant idea and amazing exCutEd
As of now, I'm all caught up at chapter 33! So I think I am pretty qualified to share my opinion! Alexander the Great Mage is a fun, light-hearted romp that follows the adventure of a reincarnated Alexander in the body of a King in an alien world and his path to world domination. If you like scenes of massive armies annihilated under a hail of spells (especially earth golems. The author REALLY likes using to crush foes with big chunky golems.) Most of the relationships depicted are friendly and amusing. You will have a smile on your face as you witness the characters teasing or ribbing one another. (My personal fav is Alexander's guard who compares him to various animals at times.) I hope that the rest of you have fun following the adventures of Alexander and his companions!
SUCH AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITER!! MAN!! YOU SHOULD WIN ALL THE AWARDS HERE!!!!! I'M SCREAMING HERE CUZ ITS SOOOOOO AMAZINGGGG!!!! PLEASE WIN!!!!!
Excellent novel in EVERY aspect! I love the character development to bits. The dialogues are epic and feels very real. And the fight scenes are really really good! I hope you win WSA!!
Upur story is too amazing, the write-up amazing, the storytelling superb and above all, I’m digging Alexander. Write more great author, I can’t wait to read more
I really like the dialogue in this novel. it really feels like I'm actually there and listening to their remarks and seeing their emotion. Very well done. the grammar, vocabulary and structure it's on point and I'm really looking forward to more of this author. Surreal work!
I like this story. I think it is well written and very funny. The caharcters are very cool. The twists are good. The description and background are really good.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Too good to leave only 1 review. Why are there so few powerstones and views?? This novel should be ranked higher!! Come on guys!! Can't wait to read more about the cute couple author. Keep posting! Once a day at least!
wow...I felt like watching a movie....what a brilliant mind and idea this author has..what brilliantly he has written this book..I'm awed from the beginning of the book. Kudos Author!
YOU DESERVE MORE READS! This is such a fun story, plus it's so unique. I've ever heard of anything with this plot. I loved it[img=recommend] The writing style is excellent and each sentence caught my interest. Extremely recommended [img=recommend]
Excellent development!! I love it!! World development is starting to feel epic. It feels really big and rich in background. Very very well done!
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Fantastic from the start. Taking the great Alexander from his near grasped dream to conquer a different race. Interesting plot twist to keep you going and in need of more. Spectacular job in everything. Not reading this is a mistake.
very good story, I am loving it, keep going author, fighting. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the transition of the story by each chapter! The grammar is good and the way you described your characters and how you wrote them is incredible
Amazing am so in love with this story. It's set up is mind blowing and l love the author's great imagination. Over all this is a great story and good work author .
I don't see any errors from reading the book, the author's narration is great The title and synopsis is a hook already, give this a read everyone!
A really great and unique story! I normally find it hard to immerse completely into sci-fi, but this one did it for me. it is fast paced and there isn't a moment when nothing is happening. 5/5 would recommend to people who are new to the concept of transmigration, as I was.
Okay I would not be surprised if this novel wins WSA. No, I mean like for real. It has all the ingredients to win it AND the writing is publication quality. 5star does not do it justice. 1. Writing quality: PAR EXCELLENCE. NO typos, grammatical errors. Vocabulary congruent to the story and setting. And words are lucid and not unnecessarily convoluted. Flows easily. 2. Stability of Updates: stable lol 3. Story development: superb pacing. Doesn't dawdle, gets into the thick of things right away without compromising the pacing. Very very interesting twist on the transmigration/system genre and you do not have to be a fan of the genre to like it, you will like it either way. There are the elements of an epic story that you will know about pretty early. Also, political conflict is there, which makes it even better for me. lol. 4. Character Design: Superb simply. The MC only really interacts with the system but you can already tell he will be a fun MC to follow. Fun and brave, the elements of a perfect hero. And the heroine is compelling too. :D 5. World Background: Superb. Beautifully explained by the system without making it sound weary and expositional. REALLY GREAT WORK. Will definitely stay in my library. I cannot wait for Alex and Archmage to speak with each for the first time.
Man!!! This is a wild ride! I can see such world building and detailed writing reach 2000+ chapters if continued properly. I also like the comedy here and there and the feeling of the characters having their own personalities being portrayed during exchanges. I could feel myself reading Lord of the Rings or Game of Thrones again. Nice job!!! Keep it up!
Absolutely amazing. The author has done an amazing job all round so far, and i do hope this level of writing continues as the book progresses. Excellent writing quality. No grammatical errors I could see and the selection of words used made the story seem very free flowing. It's too early to judge story development, but from what I've read so far, it's clear it has massive potential. The characters are easy to follow and written well, each unique and we'll suited to the roles the author has set out for them. And the world background. Very well crafted world and understanding how it works has been made very easy thanks to the author. Keep up the good work.
Is this completed? Fghfhfhfhfhfhffgtgsrhafstjsrjsjfsjfsjfjtsrjsktdykdktstjsktskfzgkdtkdtkdtkskgdkgskgdktdktsktstksktstkdktdtisitsitsktsktsjtstj
The writing is ok. The character .... well what do u expect from authors these days making characters arrogant is their common trait but we'll in this situation it can be understandable since winning a few wars made him feel arrogant. Don't know how he can be arrogant after getting defeated in India and running away. The transmigration was quick as if on a whim. I dropped .
The author does know Alexander the Great was a bloodthirsty conquerer, right? Like did you randomly pick him without doing any research on his character?
Halo kaaa, cerita nya seruuu.. tetap semangat menulisnya kaaa, jangan pernah menyerah dan patah semangat!! 😘😘😘 btw mampir kelapak aku yuk kaakk, Follback, Collback dan Revback cerita aku yaaaa.. terimakasih 🥰
If you don't need something to hang out with, don't read it. If you don't need something to hang out with, don't read it. If you don't need something to hang out with, don't read it.
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Awesome, just awesome 😭👍, the plot, characters, comedy, powerup, surprises, all of them are super 🤪, the only problem is i wish i started it late, i want more( ･ั﹏･ั)
Sheezuss...... this book is spellbinding indeed! I was sceptical at first. Can't wait for the next chapters to be released.... Work harder Author the suspense is killing me!!!
Its a wonderful novel with a lot of potential if written correctly also its the first novel i have seen about Alexander the Great!! ….…….…………
I was smiling when I read the concept because a Macedonian ruler suddenly transmigrated into a different world. The concept definitely looks interesting! Good work Authoe-nim!
A novel on THE Alexander of Macedon was not one I expected, but it is extremely good! The writing quality is spectacular and some of the best on the platform. Now, I'll have to read more about the characters but from the get-go, they're also superbly written. Onto the world-building, I'd say it deserves more than 5 stars. Good work!
The whole Idea behind this novel is amazing. taking a king into a new world with new abliIties is 🔥. I canT wait to see more fighting seNces. can Alexander the greaT liVe up to his title EVen in another worLd brilliant idea and amazing exCutEd
As of now, I'm all caught up at chapter 33! So I think I am pretty qualified to share my opinion! Alexander the Great Mage is a fun, light-hearted romp that follows the adventure of a reincarnated Alexander in the body of a King in an alien world and his path to world domination. If you like scenes of massive armies annihilated under a hail of spells (especially earth golems. The author REALLY likes using to crush foes with big chunky golems.) Most of the relationships depicted are friendly and amusing. You will have a smile on your face as you witness the characters teasing or ribbing one another. (My personal fav is Alexander's guard who compares him to various animals at times.) I hope that the rest of you have fun following the adventures of Alexander and his companions!
SUCH AN EXTRAORDINARY WRITER!! MAN!! YOU SHOULD WIN ALL THE AWARDS HERE!!!!! I'M SCREAMING HERE CUZ ITS SOOOOOO AMAZINGGGG!!!! PLEASE WIN!!!!!
Excellent novel in EVERY aspect! I love the character development to bits. The dialogues are epic and feels very real. And the fight scenes are really really good! I hope you win WSA!!
Upur story is too amazing, the write-up amazing, the storytelling superb and above all, I’m digging Alexander. Write more great author, I can’t wait to read more
I really like the dialogue in this novel. it really feels like I'm actually there and listening to their remarks and seeing their emotion. Very well done. the grammar, vocabulary and structure it's on point and I'm really looking forward to more of this author. Surreal work!
I like this story. I think it is well written and very funny. The caharcters are very cool. The twists are good. The description and background are really good.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Too good to leave only 1 review. Why are there so few powerstones and views?? This novel should be ranked higher!! Come on guys!! Can't wait to read more about the cute couple author. Keep posting! Once a day at least!
wow...I felt like watching a movie....what a brilliant mind and idea this author has..what brilliantly he has written this book..I'm awed from the beginning of the book. Kudos Author!
YOU DESERVE MORE READS! This is such a fun story, plus it's so unique. I've ever heard of anything with this plot. I loved it[img=recommend] The writing style is excellent and each sentence caught my interest. Extremely recommended [img=recommend]
Excellent development!! I love it!! World development is starting to feel epic. It feels really big and rich in background. Very very well done!
揭示劇透 Fantastic from the start. Taking the great Alexander from his near grasped dream to conquer a different race. Interesting plot twist to keep you going and in need of more. Spectacular job in everything. Not reading this is a mistake.
very good story, I am loving it, keep going author, fighting. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the transition of the story by each chapter! The grammar is good and the way you described your characters and how you wrote them is incredible
Amazing am so in love with this story. It's set up is mind blowing and l love the author's great imagination. Over all this is a great story and good work author .
I don't see any errors from reading the book, the author's narration is great The title and synopsis is a hook already, give this a read everyone!
A really great and unique story! I normally find it hard to immerse completely into sci-fi, but this one did it for me. it is fast paced and there isn't a moment when nothing is happening. 5/5 would recommend to people who are new to the concept of transmigration, as I was.
Okay I would not be surprised if this novel wins WSA. No, I mean like for real. It has all the ingredients to win it AND the writing is publication quality. 5star does not do it justice. 1. Writing quality: PAR EXCELLENCE. NO typos, grammatical errors. Vocabulary congruent to the story and setting. And words are lucid and not unnecessarily convoluted. Flows easily. 2. Stability of Updates: stable lol 3. Story development: superb pacing. Doesn't dawdle, gets into the thick of things right away without compromising the pacing. Very very interesting twist on the transmigration/system genre and you do not have to be a fan of the genre to like it, you will like it either way. There are the elements of an epic story that you will know about pretty early. Also, political conflict is there, which makes it even better for me. lol. 4. Character Design: Superb simply. The MC only really interacts with the system but you can already tell he will be a fun MC to follow. Fun and brave, the elements of a perfect hero. And the heroine is compelling too. :D 5. World Background: Superb. Beautifully explained by the system without making it sound weary and expositional. REALLY GREAT WORK. Will definitely stay in my library. I cannot wait for Alex and Archmage to speak with each for the first time.