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it isn't bad and even isn't good the mc is just average Joe and is surrounded by geniuses where he has to train all day since his birth to get good at something while others who train for 1 hour a day pulverize him so the disparity in talent is pretty high and mc has low eq and is not an social butterfly
After dozens of novels I finally found a novel which made me binge read after lotm
very interesting read, did not expect the very ending, nice surprise, overall well writen for me, not an expert but enjoyed the amount of details (not too much and enough to not burn chapters) with the fast pace
this is one of the best books I've read so far, I'm into more fantasy stuff but this book has shown me something different
i want to like this book but even after its completion the amount of spelling mistakes and just wrong words used consistently throughout the paragraphs that make you have to stop and consistently figure out what the author was trying to convey made the story unreadable for me. Otherwise, it's an interesting but unoriginal story as of Chapter 40. Maybe the writing quality gets better, but it's just too much of a chore as it is for me to read.
A great book, good characters, good story. Slight grammerical errors but still very readable!
Just finished reading this book and, good gods, this by far one of the best if not the best book I read in a good while. To be honest, since there is a lot of works that are filled with harem, lemons and similar stuff, so I got tired of it and now that I found this book, it's so good, I finished it in 3-4 days and the best part (for me) is that there is no harem, lemon, basically 0 romance and a lot of good quality story. So if you read this and haven't started to read, then I recomend this work 100%.
it's a good story with minor flaws, that being as the story progresses the MC's magic doesn't last as long as in previous battles but ends up being a plus because he's not so overpowered and makes the story boring.
Woah, what a gem of a find I did not expect to find a well written story, Its already better than 95% of stories just simply because its ' readable' and the plot is well thought out.
it was consistent, it was well paced and well written. I would have liked a bit more epilogue and hearing how certain things ended but that wasn't really loose ends and more me not wanting to let a great story go. all things considered I really enjoyed it.
It was a very good story. I don't have anything more to say. so…👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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not a bad read... 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥👏👏👏🔥👏🔥👏👏👏🔥👏🔥👏👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥👏🔥
I read this book around the time when I would never write reviews for stories but looking back this is probably one of the favourite stories I've read on this app. I've always liked stories where the main character develops from either emotionless or straight up ruthless into someone who at the very least is kind to the people who they like. I also liked how everything pretty much tied together once the story reached the prologues time. Cant say that the grammar was always perfect, but I also can't really remember that all too well.
This novel just has enough details to keep you interested to know what happens next. It's not climatic at all I'm over 100 chapters in and there's nothing that really makes you go "OMG that.was amazing. It's good enough to pass time. I'd give this a 5/10
I'm 450 chapters in and I honestly don't really have many problems with the novel, I just don't like the cliche emotionless character trope, but the author seriously needs to take some grammar lessons, because there are so many wording problems through the story and I can't tell what is happening sometimes because the author uses the wrong words and says one thing is happening when the opposite is actually happening
I really like the story, but I hate the fact that the Mc loose people who actually care about him this is the same reason I dropped sin city, but overall it's a pretty good novel
Come to new world...rule: you follow path of your father, of your family..magician arent precious...and sword, spear are better for this world..Zaos decided to do both of them...Zaos didnt along with father, hated to be used by royal family...wished his mother to survive...he loved he the most...
An excellent wrap-up to a compelling story with gripping fights and heartwrenching plotlines. I loved Zaos, Ameria, Aleni, The Bloody Knights, and all the other characters that we followed along with. Thank you for the thought and effort to keep the quality of the story good all the way through.
A great work, it starts slow but that is where you truly connect and feel attached with the characters come from. Of you want a great story with a cast of characters you truly will remember this is a novel for you.
The work is simply sublime! Lyra is the best character, too bad she left us early, but she never let us down! The author is to be congratulated, job very well done. I know the story is good when I feel part of my soul leaving with its ending, the ending is also perfect! My thanks to the author. I will miss Lyra, Ameria, Milliandra and Aleni. My only sadness is not seeing Aleni's children.
please add on to this story with another book this was a fantastic story. I would love to see what the guardian throne is for and what other adventures the mc will have
Wow. That was alot... I don't usually write reviews but I gotta say, this is by far one of my favorite novels. I just finished it and I'm now at the stage of I want to keep reading but I know I wont find anything this good again. The story was consistent but not boring, and I was always in suspense but never for too long to where I got bored of it. The ending was great and I'm glad that the author used the last chapter to explain a little of what happend, I would love to see some short stories of the events Zaos does, maybe meeting with Ameria's reincarnation or something. al
This was such an amazing gem to read. A well thought out plots and twists a very good story development and a satisfactory ending.. i recommend this to those who love nice story without harems.. The slight OP of Mc is justified as well..
Love it. Very interesting novel about war...about the protagonist, which doesnt want to be only pawn of kingdom...with magic and his skills he will do everything to change destiny and live hia life [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
never really read the book just skimmed through it because of a painful problem, it's like im reading the book from a 3rd person view....that sounds confusing, I mean like instead reading from the Mc's point of view I'm just watching from afar, it's hard to explain but it's like we don't see what the Mc is thinking about and what emotions he's feeling yes it has that but far to little and it's....slopy ig? idk the story looks great it's just the writing style is kinda....boring.
wow, this is some ending. So cool..do we get a sequel to this novel? i would really like to read what happened after the end!!! Man, i can't praise it enough. Although writing quality is not that good.. the story and the ending just takes the cake. Loved it... Thank you.
while there's the occasional wring word used in places, I assume that is due to translation . I LOVED this story. I adored little Zaos and his never yield attitude. it was great. Some Character's story can be heartbreaking, others are amazing in their depth and uniqueness. check out the story. I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I am.
it isn't bad and even isn't good the mc is just average Joe and is surrounded by geniuses where he has to train all day since his birth to get good at something while others who train for 1 hour a day pulverize him so the disparity in talent is pretty high and mc has low eq and is not an social butterfly
After dozens of novels I finally found a novel which made me binge read after lotm
very interesting read, did not expect the very ending, nice surprise, overall well writen for me, not an expert but enjoyed the amount of details (not too much and enough to not burn chapters) with the fast pace
this is one of the best books I've read so far, I'm into more fantasy stuff but this book has shown me something different
i want to like this book but even after its completion the amount of spelling mistakes and just wrong words used consistently throughout the paragraphs that make you have to stop and consistently figure out what the author was trying to convey made the story unreadable for me. Otherwise, it's an interesting but unoriginal story as of Chapter 40. Maybe the writing quality gets better, but it's just too much of a chore as it is for me to read.
A great book, good characters, good story. Slight grammerical errors but still very readable!
Just finished reading this book and, good gods, this by far one of the best if not the best book I read in a good while. To be honest, since there is a lot of works that are filled with harem, lemons and similar stuff, so I got tired of it and now that I found this book, it's so good, I finished it in 3-4 days and the best part (for me) is that there is no harem, lemon, basically 0 romance and a lot of good quality story. So if you read this and haven't started to read, then I recomend this work 100%.
it's a good story with minor flaws, that being as the story progresses the MC's magic doesn't last as long as in previous battles but ends up being a plus because he's not so overpowered and makes the story boring.
Woah, what a gem of a find I did not expect to find a well written story, Its already better than 95% of stories just simply because its ' readable' and the plot is well thought out.
it was consistent, it was well paced and well written. I would have liked a bit more epilogue and hearing how certain things ended but that wasn't really loose ends and more me not wanting to let a great story go. all things considered I really enjoyed it.
It was a very good story. I don't have anything more to say. so…👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I read this book around the time when I would never write reviews for stories but looking back this is probably one of the favourite stories I've read on this app. I've always liked stories where the main character develops from either emotionless or straight up ruthless into someone who at the very least is kind to the people who they like. I also liked how everything pretty much tied together once the story reached the prologues time. Cant say that the grammar was always perfect, but I also can't really remember that all too well.
This novel just has enough details to keep you interested to know what happens next. It's not climatic at all I'm over 100 chapters in and there's nothing that really makes you go "OMG that.was amazing. It's good enough to pass time. I'd give this a 5/10
I'm 450 chapters in and I honestly don't really have many problems with the novel, I just don't like the cliche emotionless character trope, but the author seriously needs to take some grammar lessons, because there are so many wording problems through the story and I can't tell what is happening sometimes because the author uses the wrong words and says one thing is happening when the opposite is actually happening
I really like the story, but I hate the fact that the Mc loose people who actually care about him this is the same reason I dropped sin city, but overall it's a pretty good novel
Come to new world...rule: you follow path of your father, of your family..magician arent precious...and sword, spear are better for this world..Zaos decided to do both of them...Zaos didnt along with father, hated to be used by royal family...wished his mother to survive...he loved he the most...
An excellent wrap-up to a compelling story with gripping fights and heartwrenching plotlines. I loved Zaos, Ameria, Aleni, The Bloody Knights, and all the other characters that we followed along with. Thank you for the thought and effort to keep the quality of the story good all the way through.
A great work, it starts slow but that is where you truly connect and feel attached with the characters come from. Of you want a great story with a cast of characters you truly will remember this is a novel for you.
The work is simply sublime! Lyra is the best character, too bad she left us early, but she never let us down! The author is to be congratulated, job very well done. I know the story is good when I feel part of my soul leaving with its ending, the ending is also perfect! My thanks to the author. I will miss Lyra, Ameria, Milliandra and Aleni. My only sadness is not seeing Aleni's children.
please add on to this story with another book this was a fantastic story. I would love to see what the guardian throne is for and what other adventures the mc will have
Wow. That was alot... I don't usually write reviews but I gotta say, this is by far one of my favorite novels. I just finished it and I'm now at the stage of I want to keep reading but I know I wont find anything this good again. The story was consistent but not boring, and I was always in suspense but never for too long to where I got bored of it. The ending was great and I'm glad that the author used the last chapter to explain a little of what happend, I would love to see some short stories of the events Zaos does, maybe meeting with Ameria's reincarnation or something. al
This was such an amazing gem to read. A well thought out plots and twists a very good story development and a satisfactory ending.. i recommend this to those who love nice story without harems.. The slight OP of Mc is justified as well..
Love it. Very interesting novel about war...about the protagonist, which doesnt want to be only pawn of kingdom...with magic and his skills he will do everything to change destiny and live hia life [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
never really read the book just skimmed through it because of a painful problem, it's like im reading the book from a 3rd person view....that sounds confusing, I mean like instead reading from the Mc's point of view I'm just watching from afar, it's hard to explain but it's like we don't see what the Mc is thinking about and what emotions he's feeling yes it has that but far to little and it's....slopy ig? idk the story looks great it's just the writing style is kinda....boring.
wow, this is some ending. So cool..do we get a sequel to this novel? i would really like to read what happened after the end!!! Man, i can't praise it enough. Although writing quality is not that good.. the story and the ending just takes the cake. Loved it... Thank you.
while there's the occasional wring word used in places, I assume that is due to translation . I LOVED this story. I adored little Zaos and his never yield attitude. it was great. Some Character's story can be heartbreaking, others are amazing in their depth and uniqueness. check out the story. I'm sure others will enjoy it as much as I am.