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I realy like the story. The story has a nice flow and the characters are well made. The personality of the MC is being clearly established together with the other characters too. Overall great!
Overall great book...........please write more..............! The Mc is ruthless Which is awesome.......And i will kindly ask for 50k....... Love this book please write more
A very well written Novel by new Novelist............! In this novel I loved the character of the hero of the novel..........! I liked to read this novel .....very well.......Its my opinion that it is a very written novel.....!Please write this type of novel and please continue to write this novel.
It a good story! no doubt it has a potential, thought the first chapters looked more like a script but with a few changes it could be a masterpiece!!
I realy like the story. The story has a nice flow and the characters are well made. The personality of the MC is being clearly established together with the other characters too. Overall great!
Overall great book...........please write more..............! The Mc is ruthless Which is awesome.......And i will kindly ask for 50k....... Love this book please write more
A very well written Novel by new Novelist............! In this novel I loved the character of the hero of the novel..........! I liked to read this novel .....very well.......Its my opinion that it is a very written novel.....!Please write this type of novel and please continue to write this novel.
It a good story! no doubt it has a potential, thought the first chapters looked more like a script but with a few changes it could be a masterpiece!!