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Hey author! Your story plot is gooood, and the characters too. I like how Leo feels he ain't good but people around him are well aware of his capabilities. I'll suggest you enhance your writing style a bit more to enhance your writing and make it more attractive...else it was good reading your novel and I'll continue reading too. So keep your updates stable. All The Best For Your Future Updates!
Interesting plot. The character names reminds me of Hollywood superstars that I can't help but imagine them as the characters. Continue this, author, it has a lot of potential.
I Loved The Book Cover N The synopsis... The MC Is quite Cute😍😍 The Book Is still In progress So Imma Wish U a Very Good Luck...😉 Write More N more With The same passion..😍 Do Update us with the chapters My eyes r waiting to read them😃 Great Job😍 Keep It Up...💕💕
............................................................................. The MC is dense, quite stupid and silly. Interesting Plot, but needs more you know, the spice And also too weird but okay, *turns back to go away* Who ever wrote this, good luck. Wait wait wait... Isn't this my book?! Welp...