/ Fantasy / BLOOD SILK
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-- A small heads, early chapters have a quite bad grammar, I am fixing them asap, also the MC doesn't start as OP, he go through cultivation before it. --
"I always wondered until the day I died, why humans are such filthy creatures?"
A Noble status, money, and power were the things that ruled this world, but Aaris Ralkier had nothing since the day he was born.
His childhood was ridiculed by poverty and bullying by the nobles, hoping to change his world one day after becoming a great mage, his dreams were shattered because of his unique and miserable condition of possessing no mana.
What he had in his life was his mother, the lowest witch who never wanted anything but his happiness, but she was taken away by the hands of aristocrats and the kingdom that was supposed to protect them.
He lost everything, struggling to find his existence again he was betrayed and left to die at the hands of a dreadful demon and was framed even after his death.
Reminiscing his life on his last breaths, he decided to take the demon soul along with his with the spell his mother forbid for him, Blood Silk.
He lost his life too, but fate doesn't take mercy on him, his eyes opened once again, maybe a choice was given to him, suffer or fight.
Like cursed blessing in his body, he set out on a journey to find his existence, lingering regrets, and goring grudges, in the realm ridiculed with divine curses & diabolical graces, everything is laid in front of him to quell or win.
But red strings of fate only take it to weave a War, waiting to meet its End.
P.s:- English is not my first language I am still a fledgling writer.
reach to me on insta....zushe_sensei_016.
Dis.:- I don't own the cover pic.
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This is a great book with a promising storyline. I love books about and this one is actually amazing I would recommend it to anyone who loves books about magic and demons
it's confusing and has bad grammar, starts with a promising couple chapters and then changes and has so many boring chapters after that that makes me lose motivation to read would have been better if these boring chapters were broken up into "flashbacks" so that they didnt take the wind out of the story I'm sure for other people it was great, it seemed to have a strong concept, and a well planned out character backstory etc. but it definitely wasnt for me
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Ideas are interesting and deserve development. Author, you do have imagination and this could be a promising story. Readers, you can give it a try! Now, here are a few points for the author: you need to proofread, use Grammarly or/and Antidote to check your sentences. Be careful of commas, suspension point and capital letter. The same goes for the dialogues. Pay attention to those points and it will be smoother ;) Keep going and good luck!
Everything's perfect, I really enjoyed reading it. But if capitalization was used properly, it would have been much awesome! Looking forward to new chapters!
It seems like it could be a fine novel however the writing is bad. Instead of explaining the story, it is more like giving statements. And also due to that, the novel is pretty fast-paced which brings down the quality :/
Almost perfect for me. The plot, the characters, the cliffhangers, the drama, the pacing, are all great! Only needs polishing but it's a hidden gem. All the best to the author, Sushi.
The main Thing Which Attracted Me towards This Novel Is its Title "BLOOD SILK"😍😍 I really loved The Synopsis... I just read It N I Was In the World Of this Novel❤ Character Development Is Queit Nice...💖 This Book Is a masterpirce Which I Added To my Library Just after Reading First 2 chapters☺ Author is quiet Hardworking🤗 Best Of Luck to the author❤ Do write More chapterz My eyes R waiting fr them👀Hehe... Overall This Is Recommended To evryone😊
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Wow, a story of weak to strong. Basically, character growth stories are the best. As they are mostly relatable. Good job author. Fighting. Best wishes to Arraris
Goodbye Verdos, I wish you a happy suffering! one of the coolest lines I ever heard. It is really so beautiful, it feels like I was being transported inside a psp game. I have never felt that feeling before given by reading a novel. I like this story, and if it's not too much to wish, I hope one day it can be converted into a game. I hope the author continues to write more chapters so that more readers can enjoy his story.
An interesting story that has a smooth progress and a nice flow. Multiple characters with different personalities. Suspense is steadily building up. Good job,keep going.
This story shows promise and excitement! I like how you portray the emotions for the main character and I like how the action goes. Though there are some grammar mishaps and spelling, it's got potential! 👌
i scrolled, scrolled, scrolled and then when I saw it ends... MOTHER?! You know what? Your cliffhangers are so on point, i just... anyways, i know you won't let me down. Give me the next chapter soon!
i love how the storyline grows and develops along with the growth of a character in the story as well with its deep-running connection building up throughout the story.
Just a little through the introduction and the story pulls you in 😍, apart from those gramar and punctuation mistakes (which are totally curable) it takes so much promise into developing the character. ❤️ keep up the good work author-san
Everythings too good to be true. I see a lot of potential in you. Please never stop writing. Love from all my family too. My blessings are with you.
To be sincere this novel, is pretty much interesting and unique right from it beginning. Just that it still need improvement, so as to develop it to a high standards. Overall, it really something new to me, and am curious to read it all .
Really author you are imagination is amazing. Character and story is like straight out of anime a hidden gem a must read. I am adding this to library for sure
卷 1 : The End Of The Broken Soul.
- 1 The Temple 3 years ago
- 2 BLOOD SILK 3 years ago
- 3 Before I Die 3 years ago
- 4 The Reward 3 years ago
- 5 Disappointment 3 years ago
- 6 You Are Weak 3 years ago
- 7 The Cold Night 3 years ago
- 8 The Scarred Face 3 years ago
- 9 The Guilty 3 years ago
- 10 The Treason 3 years ago
- 11 The Silence 3 years ago
- 12 The Escape 3 years ago
- 13 The Trap 3 years ago
- 14 The Loyal 3 years ago
- 15 The Red Strings 3 years ago
- 16 The Scarlet Eyes 3 years ago
- 17 The Mistake 3 years ago
- 18 The Supper 3 years ago
- 19 Night and Day 3 years ago
- 20 The Question 3 years ago
- 21 The Answer 3 years ago
- 22 The Letter 3 years ago
- 23 The New Home 3 years ago
- 24 The End 3 years ago
- 25 The Broken Soul 3 years ago
- 26 The Resurgence 3 years ago
卷 2 : Become The Beginning
- 27 Hollow Justice 3 years ago
- 28 Another Chance 3 years ago
- 29 Persistent Yet Worthless 3 years ago
- 30 Sly Smile 3 years ago
- 31 Genral of Domain 3 years ago
- 32 Chances Should Be Taken 3 years ago
- 33 Nightmare Has Begun... 3 years ago
- 34 Wrong Move 2 years ago
- 35 2nd Building 2 years ago
- 36 Shadow of the Hallway 2 years ago
- 37 Walking Shadow 2 years ago
- 38 The Return 2 years ago
卷 3 : The Grand Selection
- 39 Mana Degree Test 2 years ago
- 40 The Tridents 2 years ago
- 41 Take it or Leave! 2 years ago
- 42 Stranger of the Bookstore - I 2 years ago
- 43 Stranger of the Life - II 2 years ago
- 44 Stranger of the Library - III 2 years ago
- 45 Sweet Misery 2 years ago
- 46 Take the Bet 2 years ago
- 47 Agreement & Conflict 2 years ago
- 48 The Rules of the Dorm. 2 years ago
- 49 Infiltration 2 years ago
- 50 The First Test 2 years ago
- 51 Worst Challengers 2 years ago
- 52 First Ranking 2 years ago
- 53 Late but not out of Options 2 years ago
- 54 A New Name 2 years ago
- 55 It's Your Fault! 2 years ago
- 56 Get Up Partner! 2 years ago
- 57 The Two Rules. 2 years ago
- 58 Who's the Liar 2 years ago
- 59 The Loud Knock 2 years ago
- 60 The Meeting 2 years ago
- 61 The Student Council 2 years ago
- 62 Your Eyes 2 years ago
- 63 The King's Domain 2 years ago
- 64 The Unexpected Team 2 years ago
- 65 Outnumbered 2 years ago
- 66 His Grace 2 years ago
- 67 Hidden Hunters 2 years ago
- 68 Hunting The Hunters 2 years ago
- 69 To The Throne 2 years ago
- 70 That's Her Fate Then 2 years ago
- 71 You will Lose Your Everything 2 years ago
- 72 I don't think I have anything left to lose! 2 years ago
- 73 Between Life & Death 2 years ago
- 74 End of the Grand Selection 2 years ago
- 75 I Don't Want to Fight. 2 years ago
- 76 Another Chance 2 years ago
- 77 Slumber of Silence 2 years ago
- 78 I Win 2 years ago
- 79 The Beginning 2 years ago
- 80 The Collision of The Beginning and End 2 years ago
- 81 The End of the Zeroth Day 2 years ago
- 82 The Last Seth 2 years ago
卷 4 : The Dwarf and Dark Elven Lore
- 83 Let the Quest Begin! 2 years ago
- 84 To the Gate Tower 2 years ago
- 85 To Copperlin 2 years ago
- 86 The Familiar 2 years ago
- 87 Just a Metal Cube 2 years ago
- 88 Village of Copperlin 2 years ago
- 89 The Plan 2 years ago
- 90 I'll protect You 2 years ago
- 91 No Human to be Found Here 2 years ago
- 92 The Last Bid 2 years ago
- 93 Run for Now 2 years ago
- 94 Defeated in Seconds 2 years ago
- 95 Cling to Your Wish 2 years ago
- 96 Love and Cage 2 years ago
- 97 Secrets 2 years ago
- 98 A Short Break 2 years ago
- 99 Reunion 2 years ago
- 100 A Shred of Memories 2 years ago
- 101 Hassaleh 2 years ago
- 102 To Live 2 years ago
- 103 Tell me 2 years ago
- 104 Bisca 2 years ago
- 105 In The Mansion 2 years ago
- 106 Into the Spider's Web 2 years ago
- 107 The Great Escape 2 years ago
- 108 Begin the Training again! - 1 2 years ago
- 109 Hollow Crystals 2 years ago
- 110 Return to Seloud 2 years ago
- 111 You Sure? 2 years ago
- 112 She has to Die 2 years ago
- 113 Story of Dark Elves 2 years ago
- 114 Helvi and Lele 2 years ago
- 115 Melvi 2 years ago
- 116 The Half Soul 2 years ago
- 117 Half Seal Ritual 2 years ago
- 118 Elf Revolts 2 years ago
- 119 The Solemn 2 years ago
- 120 Happiness doesn't Last Long 2 years ago
- 121 Foolish Guy 2 years ago
- 122 The Day of Banquet 2 years ago
卷 5 : To Save a Foe
- 123 The Main Event 2 years ago
- 124 Back from Hell 2 years ago
- 125 I'll Fight Alone 2 years ago
- 126 I Want to Walk with You 2 years ago
- 127 Down the Dungeon 2 years ago
- 128 Is It Worth for Second Chance? 2 years ago
- 129 Aching Persistent 2 years ago
- 130 Cries for Tomorrow 2 years ago
- 131 Will You Go on a Date with Me? 2 years ago
- 132 A Lost Battle 2 years ago
- 133 On Verge 2 years ago
- 134 Asura 2 years ago
- 135 A Last Try 2 years ago
- 136 The Elegant Flames 2 years ago
- 137 A Good Back Up! 2 years ago
- 138 Reunion 2 years ago
- 139 Part of Glory 2 years ago
- 140 Shiny Puppets 2 years ago
- 141 She can't Use Bad Words 2 years ago
- 142 I want to Protect 2 years ago
- 143 Rush Dead 2 years ago
- 144 The Crystal Quake 2 years ago
- 145 Emerald Monster 2 years ago
- 146 Serve Me! 2 years ago
- 147 Liberos 2 years ago
- 148 Emerald Serpentine 2 years ago
- 149 A Mysterious Human 2 years ago
- 150 A Smile Worth of Demons 2 years ago
- 151 Enemy Under Shadows 2 years ago
- 152 The Days After Triumph 2 years ago
- 153 Meeting with The Emperor 2 years ago
- 154 Reward of Emperor 2 years ago
- 155 Copperlin Return 2 years ago
- 156 Tale of Silvour - I 2 years ago
- 157 Return to Ovyrus 2 years ago
- 158 The Letter from old 2 years ago
- 159 New Quest 2 years ago
卷 6 : The Misery of Sacred Mother
- 160 A Fluke of True Power 2 years ago
- 161 To Set Out 2 years ago
- 162 Arrival to Kieous 2 years ago
- 163 The Streets of Keious 2 years ago
- 164 A Yearning for Home 2 years ago
- 165 Hunt and Prey 2 years ago
- 166 I'll Help You Out 2 years ago
- 167 I'll Make You My Slave 2 years ago
- 168 New Allies or Mates? 2 years ago
- 169 Double Quest 2 years ago
- 170 Two Possibilities 2 years ago
- 171 A Date of Trap 2 years ago
- 172 For Your Name 2 years ago
- 173 The Plague 2 years ago
- 174 I can't Help You! 2 years ago
- 175 Tailing and Searching 2 years ago
- 176 Face off 2 years ago
- 177 Stronger Every Second 2 years ago
- 178 A Little Game Worth Life 2 years ago
- 179 Forest of Uaholm - I 2 years ago
- 180 Meeting Raka 2 years ago
- 181 Blossom of Yggdrasil 2 years ago
- 182 Meeting with Lela 2 years ago
- 183 Planning 2 years ago
- 184 Envy like Snake 2 years ago
- 185 Raucous Beast 2 years ago
- 186 A good plan 2 years ago
- 187 False Intruder 2 years ago
- 188 Hunt Fest 2 years ago
- 189 Hunter was hunted 2 years ago
- 190 Internal conflict! 2 years ago
- 191 Papers 2 years ago
- 192 Kahan 2 years ago
- 193 A Mere piece 2 years ago
- 194 Against Friends 2 years ago
- 195 Part of Hatred 2 years ago
- 196 A Childlike Robber 2 years ago
- 197 Betraying a never born trust 2 years ago
- 198 i don't deserve this 2 years ago
- 199 Neighbour 2 years ago
- 200 A Friend That Broke In 2 years ago
- 201 Thousand needles 2 years ago
- 202 A Fake Hand of Help 2 years ago
- 203 Wicked but Nonsense Mind 2 years ago
- 204 Checkmate 2 years ago
- 205 Better Gulity 2 years ago
- 206 Laze Sin 2 years ago
- 207 For Life if Possible 2 years ago
- 208 No Scratch 2 years ago
- 209 Hideous Beyond Comparison 2 years ago
- 210 Get Away! 2 years ago
- 211 Fluke Escape 2 years ago
- 212 No One to Blame 2 years ago
- 213 Dirty Things 2 years ago
- 214 Silver Cacoon 26 days ago
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Now, this is finished work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work! ADVICE Edits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were unnecessary spaces and mistyped spellings. The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️