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This is a great fanfic that is relaxing to read. I wish that you would consider returning to it.
This was a good novel with a great idea that I read a long time ago. Came back to give a review as it popped up in my head today. Have a nice day!
its good and all characters are great, but i dont know if there is more chapters or the author gave up.
reading this felt like a fever dream man, but eh, I like it hahaha 😆 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Decent writing I suppose, I like The story So far. It's not like Other story's where the mc just want to get stronger. and The fact the Mc's Pikachu and Raichu act's lIke Gangster's Is very appealing to me in a way. And To top it all off, The Fact He can Summon any Pokemon He owns. and Has Boxes Full Of Legendary and Shiny Pokémon's. he could literally Control the world If he could, But chose To laze around, Overall. This Story's Good. Recommended. - but I wonder, What Is Your Updating schedule? (to Author)
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
I really enjoy the book, as well as its progression. This is probably my favorite pokemon work. I simply wish that there were more updates.
the author was ROB-ed and is the mc of the story now. Now there are no new chapters for us because it is to troublesome for ROB to write them. Would be a good reason. ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ
Are you dropping this book? [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
I really like the plot, I wish there was more novels/fanfics with plot like this honestly. I could relate doing this, just relaxing instead of doing bat sh!! crazy things that others write.
This is one of the nicest Fanfiction I've read. [img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать]
the stories are amazing and interesting take on Pokemon. instead of immediately going on a Pokemon Journey he decides to open up a shop. I really hope you keep on continuing the story please update as soon as you can cuz the story is really interesting and entertaining then I put it in my library until then see you soon.
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when will the New chapter arrive??? I am getting restless, are you on some writers Block or something. □|《<■>》>》{¡{¡>《¤《《<>¡¡{♡>》<\¤\▪︎|《<》{¿{{♤
Why are you not posting any chapters?? It is a really good pokemon Fan-fic, I don't really get some things here and there but it is really a good thing. Was your story ment to be slow paced or are you planning to make it a little faster? Don't get your hopes up, there will always be haters. If you have a problem with them. And I am waitig for more chapters. Don't just leave us hanging nowhere.
nice and easy ............................................................................yyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
this is such an interesting read so much so that I wished it would continue on but it seems like I haven't yet seen any more updates I hope the author comes back soon and Updates this book that I have been reading it is engaged my mind and made me think of such and what if scenarios please continue on with this lovely book
I'm giving you a 5 star because i really like your synopsis 😎👍 ...........................................................................
I don't know why I enjoy this so much, probably because I don't really care about the writing and plot and just enjoyed it. If you're looking for an actual score then this is like a 3/5 for me. However, 5 for enjoyment and I understand if you don't enjoy this too! If your looking for a serious down-to-earth Pokemon novel then don't read this. This is not for you, don't take this novel seriously. Pros: - Couple of chuckles here and there - The author puts some personality for Pokemon - Intriguing concept - Nonsensical Plot Going everywhere (Can be a con) Cons: - Grammar is bad. Tenses are all over the place and I want to die reading them sometimes - Nonsensical Plot Going everywhere (Can be a pro for some) - Questionable actions and things that happen in chapters (It's not hard to ask questions about the origin of someone along with them knowing things about the MC that he doesn't know and they don't even try to look further? I guess the author is trying to foreshadow and make fun of the MC's transmigration later on but the way he did it is a bit questionable and unrealistic in the sense that humans don't really act that way) - Pacings a bit wack.... Things just happen and there is no sense of order to help the reader keep their interest. However, this novel is very early on so it can be fixed or edited later on.
gggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd kkkkkeeeeeeppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppp pppp
I'm at chapter 13 and I already like this fan fic. I hope that the author can continue updating this fan fic and not drop it like other authors with their fics.
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Havent read the fanfic at all ,but i give 5 star just because yagoo is the one creating this fic.. ...,. ......... .............. ......... .. .....
Love the story, just hope the vr and the chu-mafia dosent domiante the story later on. (｢`･ω･)｢♪┌|∵|┘♪ ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾(｢`･ω･)｢♪ \(^ω^\ )└|∵|┐♪♪(┌・。・)┌♪(┌・。・)┌₍₍ ◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾└|∵|┐♪(｢`･ω･)｢⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾♪┌|∵|┘♪ (｢`･ω･)｢
5 stars just for the synopsis [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Unique pokémon fanfic as it isn't about becoming a pokemon master or something like that it a genuine slice of life with an overpowered main. Pls don't drop🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
First of all, this story is a pokemon fan-fiction type slice of life with as background the movie Pokemon I choose you, author will fill the world background with part of the games and anime timeline. MC transmigrated with his 3DS which can take pokemon in and out from the game ( he can train inside pokemon and take them out to battle "IRL" ). Since he has pretty OP pokemon, he decided to first enjoy the Pokemon World as a nobody then try to beat the league with a new team. He decided to open a shop and the story will revolve around this shop. From the first 26 chapters that i have read, the story is quite good with detailed description, some foreshadowing and logical thinking. The Pokemon battle follow the anime style of battle which is more realistic but author also incorporate strats and the concept of Talent from Pokemon games which is quite ingenious, you will see for example a pokemon with the talent sturdy will not be one shot. The MC is also not almighty, he will still train to become stronger and adapt to this new system of combat. But the story is still not perfect, the story seems a little bit rushed, the MC directly acquired a house at chapter 3 for helping someone and meeting the elite 4 quite early in the story. Overall, the quality of this book is quite good and it is an interesting story of slice of life. It is a good story that will help you relax when you have a little time.
The premise is good, the idea is interesting and can't say I have seen more than two other stories with this idea.... and it feels like it would lead to a humorous and interesting take on the genre. Yet.... the chinese garbage reaches far and wide, this is such an example. MC is uninteresting, it would be better to use a cardboard box. He is braindead and a idiot. Hypocrite of the highest level with all the checks of typical chinese mc. The chinese jargon is not correctly translated and you can feel it as you are reading the story. "Hidden master" or "Broter this! Big Brother that! Senior!". There are other examples but everything points as a non-effort translated chinese story. There is no worldbuilding and most characters feel so watered down that their reaction or feelings seem to come out of a robot. First chapters we have all high profiles of his region watch his match and all they can do is be blow away by how great and powerful MC is. Thankfully the fight is funny enough and well enough done to ignore this part. Again, no worldbuilding. Things happen because they can and there is no such a thing as outside view or explanation as to why those things are ignored. The world is uninteresting and MC doesn't bring anything to the table from his "outside" perspective. MC is the typical chinese retard character that goes to a 10 year old kid who crashes on him and the first thing that comes to his head is insult the kid, his talent, pokemon then the kids mother.... then gets surprise pikachu face when said kid gets angry? Then he trashes the kid with his Pikachu that ONE-SHOTS elite-four pokemon? And MC feels he is in the right? The rating, as always comes from bots and the story at most is 1,5. Not even 2 in the rating. Have seen better done pokemon with system stories and wishfulfilment than this.... thing. It's funny, sure, but that doesn't change how hard it is to stomach the chinese bullshit and MC attitude not to mention the lack of worldbuilding and cardboard characters. Do not translate stories and post them here, go to actual chinese translated stories websnovels that support this and not pages like webnovel, Ao3 or fanfic. This is the cancer of novels.
This is a great fanfic that is relaxing to read. I wish that you would consider returning to it.
This was a good novel with a great idea that I read a long time ago. Came back to give a review as it popped up in my head today. Have a nice day!
its good and all characters are great, but i dont know if there is more chapters or the author gave up.
reading this felt like a fever dream man, but eh, I like it hahaha 😆 [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Decent writing I suppose, I like The story So far. It's not like Other story's where the mc just want to get stronger. and The fact the Mc's Pikachu and Raichu act's lIke Gangster's Is very appealing to me in a way. And To top it all off, The Fact He can Summon any Pokemon He owns. and Has Boxes Full Of Legendary and Shiny Pokémon's. he could literally Control the world If he could, But chose To laze around, Overall. This Story's Good. Recommended. - but I wonder, What Is Your Updating schedule? (to Author)
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
I really enjoy the book, as well as its progression. This is probably my favorite pokemon work. I simply wish that there were more updates.
the author was ROB-ed and is the mc of the story now. Now there are no new chapters for us because it is to troublesome for ROB to write them. Would be a good reason. ಡ ͜ ʖ ಡ
Are you dropping this book? [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
I really like the plot, I wish there was more novels/fanfics with plot like this honestly. I could relate doing this, just relaxing instead of doing bat sh!! crazy things that others write.
This is one of the nicest Fanfiction I've read. [img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать][img=рекомендовать]
the stories are amazing and interesting take on Pokemon. instead of immediately going on a Pokemon Journey he decides to open up a shop. I really hope you keep on continuing the story please update as soon as you can cuz the story is really interesting and entertaining then I put it in my library until then see you soon.
揭示劇透 when will the New chapter arrive??? I am getting restless, are you on some writers Block or something. □|《<■>》>》{¡{¡>《¤《《<>¡¡{♡>》<\¤\▪︎|《<》{¿{{♤
Why are you not posting any chapters?? It is a really good pokemon Fan-fic, I don't really get some things here and there but it is really a good thing. Was your story ment to be slow paced or are you planning to make it a little faster? Don't get your hopes up, there will always be haters. If you have a problem with them. And I am waitig for more chapters. Don't just leave us hanging nowhere.
nice and easy ............................................................................yyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
this is such an interesting read so much so that I wished it would continue on but it seems like I haven't yet seen any more updates I hope the author comes back soon and Updates this book that I have been reading it is engaged my mind and made me think of such and what if scenarios please continue on with this lovely book
I'm giving you a 5 star because i really like your synopsis 😎👍 ...........................................................................
I don't know why I enjoy this so much, probably because I don't really care about the writing and plot and just enjoyed it. If you're looking for an actual score then this is like a 3/5 for me. However, 5 for enjoyment and I understand if you don't enjoy this too! If your looking for a serious down-to-earth Pokemon novel then don't read this. This is not for you, don't take this novel seriously. Pros: - Couple of chuckles here and there - The author puts some personality for Pokemon - Intriguing concept - Nonsensical Plot Going everywhere (Can be a con) Cons: - Grammar is bad. Tenses are all over the place and I want to die reading them sometimes - Nonsensical Plot Going everywhere (Can be a pro for some) - Questionable actions and things that happen in chapters (It's not hard to ask questions about the origin of someone along with them knowing things about the MC that he doesn't know and they don't even try to look further? I guess the author is trying to foreshadow and make fun of the MC's transmigration later on but the way he did it is a bit questionable and unrealistic in the sense that humans don't really act that way) - Pacings a bit wack.... Things just happen and there is no sense of order to help the reader keep their interest. However, this novel is very early on so it can be fixed or edited later on.
gggggggggggggggggggooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd kkkkkeeeeeeppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuuuuppppppppp pppp
I'm at chapter 13 and I already like this fan fic. I hope that the author can continue updating this fan fic and not drop it like other authors with their fics.
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Havent read the fanfic at all ,but i give 5 star just because yagoo is the one creating this fic.. ...,. ......... .............. ......... .. .....
Love the story, just hope the vr and the chu-mafia dosent domiante the story later on. (｢`･ω･)｢♪┌|∵|┘♪ ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾(｢`･ω･)｢♪ \(^ω^\ )└|∵|┐♪♪(┌・。・)┌♪(┌・。・)┌₍₍ ◝( ﾟ∀ ﾟ )◟ ⁾⁾└|∵|┐♪(｢`･ω･)｢⁽⁽ଘ( ˊᵕˋ )ଓ⁾⁾♪┌|∵|┘♪ (｢`･ω･)｢
5 stars just for the synopsis [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Unique pokémon fanfic as it isn't about becoming a pokemon master or something like that it a genuine slice of life with an overpowered main. Pls don't drop🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
First of all, this story is a pokemon fan-fiction type slice of life with as background the movie Pokemon I choose you, author will fill the world background with part of the games and anime timeline. MC transmigrated with his 3DS which can take pokemon in and out from the game ( he can train inside pokemon and take them out to battle "IRL" ). Since he has pretty OP pokemon, he decided to first enjoy the Pokemon World as a nobody then try to beat the league with a new team. He decided to open a shop and the story will revolve around this shop. From the first 26 chapters that i have read, the story is quite good with detailed description, some foreshadowing and logical thinking. The Pokemon battle follow the anime style of battle which is more realistic but author also incorporate strats and the concept of Talent from Pokemon games which is quite ingenious, you will see for example a pokemon with the talent sturdy will not be one shot. The MC is also not almighty, he will still train to become stronger and adapt to this new system of combat. But the story is still not perfect, the story seems a little bit rushed, the MC directly acquired a house at chapter 3 for helping someone and meeting the elite 4 quite early in the story. Overall, the quality of this book is quite good and it is an interesting story of slice of life. It is a good story that will help you relax when you have a little time.
The premise is good, the idea is interesting and can't say I have seen more than two other stories with this idea.... and it feels like it would lead to a humorous and interesting take on the genre. Yet.... the chinese garbage reaches far and wide, this is such an example. MC is uninteresting, it would be better to use a cardboard box. He is braindead and a idiot. Hypocrite of the highest level with all the checks of typical chinese mc. The chinese jargon is not correctly translated and you can feel it as you are reading the story. "Hidden master" or "Broter this! Big Brother that! Senior!". There are other examples but everything points as a non-effort translated chinese story. There is no worldbuilding and most characters feel so watered down that their reaction or feelings seem to come out of a robot. First chapters we have all high profiles of his region watch his match and all they can do is be blow away by how great and powerful MC is. Thankfully the fight is funny enough and well enough done to ignore this part. Again, no worldbuilding. Things happen because they can and there is no such a thing as outside view or explanation as to why those things are ignored. The world is uninteresting and MC doesn't bring anything to the table from his "outside" perspective. MC is the typical chinese retard character that goes to a 10 year old kid who crashes on him and the first thing that comes to his head is insult the kid, his talent, pokemon then the kids mother.... then gets surprise pikachu face when said kid gets angry? Then he trashes the kid with his Pikachu that ONE-SHOTS elite-four pokemon? And MC feels he is in the right? The rating, as always comes from bots and the story at most is 1,5. Not even 2 in the rating. Have seen better done pokemon with system stories and wishfulfilment than this.... thing. It's funny, sure, but that doesn't change how hard it is to stomach the chinese bullshit and MC attitude not to mention the lack of worldbuilding and cardboard characters. Do not translate stories and post them here, go to actual chinese translated stories websnovels that support this and not pages like webnovel, Ao3 or fanfic. This is the cancer of novels.