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Guys, I have read the advance chapters on the author's patre0n and I can happily say that my money has not been wasted. The mc actually uses his brain and plans meticulously about his future actions. He pays attention to every small detail and uses them to his advantage. .. So, get ready because I can feel the next chapters are going to be interesting.
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Well even though I stopped reading manga and watched the anime from this series, I could say this ff is one of the best Boruto fics here in webnovel. Though as you know it is harem but it should not be forced harem where MC can collect it like pokemon. The build up with his first woman isn't forced and it is based on logic. The writing quality is good, the story development is also good, the character design of the mc and others is also good. Over all this ff has potential. Sadly it was not yet ranked in the top 10 from monthly so that it will be noticed by other readers and gain more fan base.
This book is definitely the best book I have read thus far it has just the right amount of you know what scenes and the action aswell as the story still leaves you in amazement thank you author for this amazing book the only complaint I have is that the uploading speed isnt that fast but if these quality chapters are the result of the time put in then I say keep it up also please dont drop no matter the hate you might get🙂
This is quite good. Just read upto chapter 11 and it’s still too early to tell, this is a review for anyone to gather if this has any potential. Writing Quality: Not the most well-polished script but defeinitely readable and presented clearly. One thing I find annoying however is starting off very chao with a short segment from the previous one. I can imagine binge-readers in the future will complain about that. 3.5 stars. Updating Stability: 9ch/week but relatively short chapters. I’ll give it a fair 4.5 stars. Story development: I haven’t read Boruto. I haven’t even read Naruto lol. Read a lot of fanfics though. Anyways, there’s been no goals set and no real conflicts occurred but I do know the direction of the story and if written well, it has good potential. 4 stars. Character design: MC is quite good. Comes off as sc * mmy but only in his head for now. I wonder how he will treat the girls when he actually begins sed * cing them since it’s still early days. 4.5 stars. World Building: While it is fanfic, this does seem to fall flat in this department. Again it’s only 11 chapters so I shouldn’t expect much. Waiting for the future. 3.5 stars. Despite the ratings I gave for each category I’ll be bumping them up slightly in my ratings just because higher rating -> more exposure -> more readers -> author satisfaction -> more chapters -> more goodness for me. So don’t blame me lol. Final Verdict: It’s good and has potential. Read it.
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It is a nice one. I didn’t watch boruto but still want to read this one. But Updating stability is really annoying. Now I have no interest.
Eida or Ada.I hope Rey will conquer her.and add to his Harem.she looks like Hinata..a bit.
Im must say when I read this story. I take this as a AU in who all the time i have something like a deja vu. When i was reading CANON Manga. So called What if.? What if Rey was in young Naruto timeline.?
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I would not advise wasting time on this story. The writing is sub-par at best. I'm not even going to try going into detail on what exactly is wrong since, unfortunately, there is too much. The descriptors for various(most) scenes aren't particularly good. The conversations are poor etc... etc... etc... I went into this with low expectations and wanting to like this and despite the low expectations it still managed to let me down.
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