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PLEASE AUTHOR - SAN, DO NOT DROP THIS FIC 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
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I don't even know what to say. some things are contradictory, many things need better explanations and he seems to gain and master powers out of nowhere anyway as i haven't read everything and dropped it i won't comment anymore. just that this fic need a reader whit beter pacience tham me
That's a good novel, and I had to say that I'm really looking forward the next world. Keep going with the frequency and the quality, you had my 5 stars bro :D[img=recommend]
The only good thing abou this is the updates. The MC masters every known art and fightint style by the time he’s 1000 years old, makes no sense. He raises the Shiba clan up from the bottom and then leaves for a mission, when he comes back they were massacred. What does he do? Nothing he forgives them cuz they were “sorry”. Then he proceeds to help the people that destroyed his even after saying he won’t help them in the paragraph before…
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PLEASE AUTHOR - SAN, DO NOT DROP THIS FIC 😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢😢
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I don't even know what to say. some things are contradictory, many things need better explanations and he seems to gain and master powers out of nowhere anyway as i haven't read everything and dropped it i won't comment anymore. just that this fic need a reader whit beter pacience tham me
That's a good novel, and I had to say that I'm really looking forward the next world. Keep going with the frequency and the quality, you had my 5 stars bro :D[img=recommend]
The only good thing abou this is the updates. The MC masters every known art and fightint style by the time he’s 1000 years old, makes no sense. He raises the Shiba clan up from the bottom and then leaves for a mission, when he comes back they were massacred. What does he do? Nothing he forgives them cuz they were “sorry”. Then he proceeds to help the people that destroyed his even after saying he won’t help them in the paragraph before…
Author here to give my shameless 5 star review. ********************************************************************************************
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