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a story that thus far has incredible potential I really hope the author doesn't drop the story. (👍≖‿‿≖)👍 (👍≖‿‿≖)👍 (👍≖‿‿≖)👍
Bery good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Neopholitan (RWBY)
Found a new gem. Good writing style with amazing world-building. Please continue to write this story, it's amazing. Found a new gem. Good writing style with amazing world-building. Please continue to write this story, it's amazing.
Naice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Until now is a good story, well Louise got good potential, however I can't be so sure of the level powers of this world, it will be good more amazing places for the story. The skill will summon also normal girls, or just supernatural girls?
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good chapter. *********************************************************************************************************************************************************
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When will you continue to write your novel ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/
a story that thus far has incredible potential I really hope the author doesn't drop the story. (👍≖‿‿≖)👍 (👍≖‿‿≖)👍 (👍≖‿‿≖)👍
Bery good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Neopholitan (RWBY)
Found a new gem. Good writing style with amazing world-building. Please continue to write this story, it's amazing. Found a new gem. Good writing style with amazing world-building. Please continue to write this story, it's amazing.
Naice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Until now is a good story, well Louise got good potential, however I can't be so sure of the level powers of this world, it will be good more amazing places for the story. The skill will summon also normal girls, or just supernatural girls?
揭示劇透 good chapter. *********************************************************************************************************************************************************
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When will you continue to write your novel ???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/