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This is an incomplete story that was dropped. I will not change my review until the status has changed to dropped.
It's a great story. The writing quality is consistent, and the characters feel lively.
at first when I Read the title and synopsis I became interested in the story. maybe it is because MC doesn't actually have his own personality just goes with flow. it feels more like a slice of life rather than a well thought out character.
Interesting DC fanfic. Ended abruptly. The only thing I don't like is how the MC goes on a spoiler spiel towards DC characters and everyone just believes it's gospel.
Loved binge reading this, hope this story continues or picks up again. Thank you for a great read!
This is one of the best DC fics I've ever read the MC is neither a Mary sue or an edgelord and the story is compelling and coherent, highly recommended.
A premissa da história é ótima, porém a história em si é uma merda. ............................ ... A premissa da história é ótima, porém a história em si é uma merda. ............................ ...
Really good story. So sad it got dropped. I hope it gets picked back up. & I hope the author isn't leaving behind a trail of dead stories. --- M.c. makes reasonably rational decisions & he i it's unerring heroic, he lives for his sake & trying to increase the net good in the world.
Simplesmente não ter como ler isso, não da pra entender quase nada, o autor joga um monte de informações aleatórias e foca nos detalhes errados, ele não especifica nada do que está acontecendo, nem mesmo sabemos a idade exata do protagonista ou em que ano ele está.
Fun read, but this isn't the OG author and the story was never finished so there is no point in reading it. Sadly I was halfway through when I realized that so I had to "finish" it. I hate when authors drop their stories halfway through so 1 star for this one.
Magnífica historia, podría pasar como una película de DC, si no fuera un fanfic jajaja, mu hubiera gustado que terminara la reunión con Loki, que terminara como las películas de DC, un final abierto...
Is there a part 2? . .. ............... .......... .... ............................................................... .......................
This is pretty awesome read. There are definitely times where I just lost it with the humor. XD I just hope this comes back, I really want to see how he deals with loki with him knowing meta knowledge. Already just reading the last part makes me want more
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The ending tho … cliffhangers aren’t nice ya know? Anyways it was fun to read until I read the last chapter of your “complete” book. Like seriously.
This is a well written and very interesting story. I would highly recommend it to anyone who likes superhero stories. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Is this really finished? A well-done worldview, and original storyline. A good job and a great story. Thank you author for having this novel into being.
I love this fic,i beg you for more episodios!!(only of you want) (Sorry for my bad English) Now I'am going to fill the rest of the reciew witt the word metal. Metal,metal,metal,metal,metalMetal,metal,metal,metal,metalMetal,metal,metal,metal,metal
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Enjoyable story, looking forward to your next update. I like that you are not fixed in the most recent story lines of DC. You bring older aspects as well, which is a refreshing change.
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Good overall read. The author used the characters quirks to in rich the story. ..............................................................................
there is literally no story mc reincarnates and then born to a villan instead of taking advantages he idioticaly ran away didn't even think waht will happen back home and later even more idioticaly ran to paris when he was 10 and started killing people he have no reason or anything for that matter and later reveals so much even more idioticaly and he thinks it make sense to go to war zone where so many villans fight with superhero
A Hella good fanfiction and a DC one to boot. A great mc, nice story pace and a good plot, i like where this is going and would love to read more🤓. I enjoyed it very much and thank you for posting it here author🙂
I love this story and was sad to see it discontinued. Will you be continuing it in his stead. You can make it a continuation and keep this story separate.
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This is an incomplete story that was dropped. I will not change my review until the status has changed to dropped.
It's a great story. The writing quality is consistent, and the characters feel lively.
at first when I Read the title and synopsis I became interested in the story. maybe it is because MC doesn't actually have his own personality just goes with flow. it feels more like a slice of life rather than a well thought out character.
Interesting DC fanfic. Ended abruptly. The only thing I don't like is how the MC goes on a spoiler spiel towards DC characters and everyone just believes it's gospel.
Loved binge reading this, hope this story continues or picks up again. Thank you for a great read!
This is one of the best DC fics I've ever read the MC is neither a Mary sue or an edgelord and the story is compelling and coherent, highly recommended.
A premissa da história é ótima, porém a história em si é uma merda. ............................ ... A premissa da história é ótima, porém a história em si é uma merda. ............................ ...
Really good story. So sad it got dropped. I hope it gets picked back up. & I hope the author isn't leaving behind a trail of dead stories. --- M.c. makes reasonably rational decisions & he i it's unerring heroic, he lives for his sake & trying to increase the net good in the world.
Simplesmente não ter como ler isso, não da pra entender quase nada, o autor joga um monte de informações aleatórias e foca nos detalhes errados, ele não especifica nada do que está acontecendo, nem mesmo sabemos a idade exata do protagonista ou em que ano ele está.
Fun read, but this isn't the OG author and the story was never finished so there is no point in reading it. Sadly I was halfway through when I realized that so I had to "finish" it. I hate when authors drop their stories halfway through so 1 star for this one.
Magnífica historia, podría pasar como una película de DC, si no fuera un fanfic jajaja, mu hubiera gustado que terminara la reunión con Loki, que terminara como las películas de DC, un final abierto...
Is there a part 2? . .. ............... .......... .... ............................................................... .......................
This is pretty awesome read. There are definitely times where I just lost it with the humor. XD I just hope this comes back, I really want to see how he deals with loki with him knowing meta knowledge. Already just reading the last part makes me want more
resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect resurrect
The ending tho … cliffhangers aren’t nice ya know? Anyways it was fun to read until I read the last chapter of your “complete” book. Like seriously.
This is a well written and very interesting story. I would highly recommend it to anyone who likes superhero stories. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
//////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////// ////////////////////////////////////////// /////////////////////////////////////////
Is this really finished? A well-done worldview, and original storyline. A good job and a great story. Thank you author for having this novel into being.
I love this fic,i beg you for more episodios!!(only of you want) (Sorry for my bad English) Now I'am going to fill the rest of the reciew witt the word metal. Metal,metal,metal,metal,metalMetal,metal,metal,metal,metalMetal,metal,metal,metal,metal
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Enjoyable story, looking forward to your next update. I like that you are not fixed in the most recent story lines of DC. You bring older aspects as well, which is a refreshing change.
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Good overall read. The author used the characters quirks to in rich the story. ..............................................................................
there is literally no story mc reincarnates and then born to a villan instead of taking advantages he idioticaly ran away didn't even think waht will happen back home and later even more idioticaly ran to paris when he was 10 and started killing people he have no reason or anything for that matter and later reveals so much even more idioticaly and he thinks it make sense to go to war zone where so many villans fight with superhero
A Hella good fanfiction and a DC one to boot. A great mc, nice story pace and a good plot, i like where this is going and would love to read more🤓. I enjoyed it very much and thank you for posting it here author🙂
I love this story and was sad to see it discontinued. Will you be continuing it in his stead. You can make it a continuation and keep this story separate.
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1 star is too high but I am limited.