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it was a very great story, sadly cut short but I'm very thankful towards the author for his although rushed quite good ending. i want you to know that I really liked the concept of the story and that your writing was actually quite good. i think you didn't have to say about your ideas that you don't think you can bring them to life because i think you can and they would have been Great. thank you for the read and i hope you are doing well... on a side note does anyone else know some other good hollow knight novel, I've been searching for a while and this was the only good one I found?
Is this heaven a hollow knight fanfic???? Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie
The romance could be better and that thing with the daemon prince was confusing, but for a short read this story is pretty good.
I enjoyed this quite a lot the story was fun and you didn't murder all the good characters like some fics I've read so yeah good story
Its not traveling multiverses but more like universes Come to you. The wholesome moments are great but the romance feels a little rushed. (She kisses him the moment they met) the ending feels rushed too. At least you finished it instead of droping it.
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It was fun to finally read a Hollow Knight fic sunce those are so rare and the fanbase is not that string k Thid platform. Hopefully there will be more like this to come
Was a great short story. When I First started it I thought it would be okay, but when i reaches the middle i thought of dropping it. i am glad that i decided to stick with it as this story is agreat story.
5/5 amazing, absolutely loved it and especially loved the romance with hornet. plus a really good ending. Story was well with what author was doing with it, not many can do that many multiverses and still be good but author did it anyway and was amazing with it.
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9/10 muy buena historia aunque un poco corta...........................................................................................................
im sorry but f you the story is to fast with hornet with ember if they knew each other better than it would be very good relationship but in my opinion it was rushed thats all
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A solid story that covers what I believe should happen during an Isekai. While some might not like how certain aspects are set up I find that this makes the story unique and almost fresh to read.
overall a feat novel to read it just wish there were more chapters and its updated quicker orher than that its great please dont drop.......
not much to review only 3 chap, but it shows potential, It's not impossible to read and I didn't find any grammatical errors, it just started meaning the characters had no time to develop at all and since for now thinking further than hollow knight is useless i will use it's story's world backround for the rating, i don't know f you plan to continue this but it would be fun to read, I might change this review if new chapters come out.
Hey, writing my own review, with my own thoughts, about my own story. If you like the story then hooray you liked it, if not then alright then its how you feel
it was a very great story, sadly cut short but I'm very thankful towards the author for his although rushed quite good ending. i want you to know that I really liked the concept of the story and that your writing was actually quite good. i think you didn't have to say about your ideas that you don't think you can bring them to life because i think you can and they would have been Great. thank you for the read and i hope you are doing well... on a side note does anyone else know some other good hollow knight novel, I've been searching for a while and this was the only good one I found?
Is this heaven a hollow knight fanfic???? Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie Silksong is a lie
The romance could be better and that thing with the daemon prince was confusing, but for a short read this story is pretty good.
I enjoyed this quite a lot the story was fun and you didn't murder all the good characters like some fics I've read so yeah good story
Its not traveling multiverses but more like universes Come to you. The wholesome moments are great but the romance feels a little rushed. (She kisses him the moment they met) the ending feels rushed too. At least you finished it instead of droping it.
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It was fun to finally read a Hollow Knight fic sunce those are so rare and the fanbase is not that string k Thid platform. Hopefully there will be more like this to come
Was a great short story. When I First started it I thought it would be okay, but when i reaches the middle i thought of dropping it. i am glad that i decided to stick with it as this story is agreat story.
5/5 amazing, absolutely loved it and especially loved the romance with hornet. plus a really good ending. Story was well with what author was doing with it, not many can do that many multiverses and still be good but author did it anyway and was amazing with it.
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9/10 muy buena historia aunque un poco corta...........................................................................................................
im sorry but f you the story is to fast with hornet with ember if they knew each other better than it would be very good relationship but in my opinion it was rushed thats all
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A solid story that covers what I believe should happen during an Isekai. While some might not like how certain aspects are set up I find that this makes the story unique and almost fresh to read.
overall a feat novel to read it just wish there were more chapters and its updated quicker orher than that its great please dont drop.......
not much to review only 3 chap, but it shows potential, It's not impossible to read and I didn't find any grammatical errors, it just started meaning the characters had no time to develop at all and since for now thinking further than hollow knight is useless i will use it's story's world backround for the rating, i don't know f you plan to continue this but it would be fun to read, I might change this review if new chapters come out.
Hey, writing my own review, with my own thoughts, about my own story. If you like the story then hooray you liked it, if not then alright then its how you feel
It's wraps up nicely, short yet fulfilling