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-Perceptions generate heroes, as well as villains, and I realized that I am incredible in generating my actions..... ..........................
Its good i guess, but doesn't deserve 5 stars in my opinion. There can be a lot of improvements in several key areas. But other than that, its great.
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-Perceptions generate heroes, as well as villains, and I realized that I am incredible in generating my actions..... ..........................
Its good i guess, but doesn't deserve 5 stars in my opinion. There can be a lot of improvements in several key areas. But other than that, its great.