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The Title of the story is The Alchemist of Harry Potter yet the descriptions says "The story is not about alchemy. Please ignore the title". So you mean to tell me that we're suppose to ignore the thing that supposed to draw our attention first? Nah screw that and screw this novel for title baiting people! Note: This would get a 0 if it could be given.
It's a really great story.. There's just many wrong word like, magic spell should be charms, herbalism is herbology, tooth is fang, auditorium is great hall, etc.. But it's ok, I know what you mean.. But it will be better if you still use the right word 😁😁😍👍
This Story Is great but I'm I the only one that wants to scargle his sister like she is spoiled I understand keeping the wand far from her but then he gives it to her for practice as long he sees it like come on peoples wands aren't the death stick
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Please, if you are going to write a harry potter fanfiction in english at least watch the movies in english. That way you don't write ridiculous names for spells and character like the "Almost Headless Nick"
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I give 5 Stars for this Novel. The reason For which I am doing this is For one main thing. I to, am a Salted Fish. (I also did it for the Vin-... *cough cough* for the EXP)
this is a fun fan-fic. i hope it stays good and finishes. you could work on update time though. if it updated faster I'm pretty sure you would be higher in the rankings
Not a bad story however nearly unreadbale due to certain word being americanised lile headmaster to principal and calling Dumbledore the president and not the chief warlock which seems sloppy.
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More chapters? Review: 10/10 Plot's good, story's good, very good. Thou idk about updating schedule, but its good. Our story is during Fred & George Weasley's year.
Noice one, a slow fan fict for now. But it takes the time to put every needed info in. The system makes things a little convenient tho. Hope the story will turn out to be good when serious things start
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Thanks for translating it, it's unreadable in google translate/original source...................................................................................
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Good work but too many muggleborn loving protagonists out there .I really want something unique a muggleborn who wants wizard culture superiority.
d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:dd:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:
a really good polt devlopment. Should the grammar improve its a real great find ,........................................................,
The story is a good idea but it feels as if isn’t being pulled off in the best way. The reasoning has to do mainly with the character interaction and occasional grammar issues. The characters, specifically the MC feel almost mechanical in their interactions. One example is when he interacts with other kids there was dialogue in which he offered candy and then thought something along the lines of “this has shown to work well when inducing social interactions while in school.” The only other thing is the constantly changing gender and name of his owl. Outside of that it is a great story that I have enjoyed reading.
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I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend
Is this ff a re-post? I'm sure I've read this before but author said he was stopping writing it bcos some morons couldn't see the hidden gem that it was. if so I hope it doesn't get dropped again.
LOL the story is pretty great but man some else tried to translate the story and got soooo much hate for Harry Potter and The Alchemist list is what the dude called it its up to chapter 56.
Where's the mandatory author review??! I came to spam the comments of that review after reading this nice story but ****! Author/Chief Editor didn't give any review. Are you crazy? How can you just forget our traditions so easily???! Post a review and lemme spam the comments section. Hmph!
Loved the story. Till now it's fun and exciting let's see how it goes on future. I would love to finish this book as fast as possible so I would like request translator to increase the pace.
What a Noice book! Why didn't I find this when I was bored and free? Now that I have so many assignments to finish, this book appeared here on webnovel. I really want to finish reading this on MTL but 😢😢😢 Anyways I'll keep following this book here on webnovel. As it's just one or two chapters per day uploaded here.
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This fuking shit is a gem. I loved it. I'll review it, I'll vote for it. Because this shit is addictive. Loved it, Binged it. Drop it and see how I beat the shit out of you.
No está mal, la historia transcurre un poco lenta pero se deja leer bastante bien. Ya no me apetece escribir más si que hasta aquí hemos llegado
The Title of the story is The Alchemist of Harry Potter yet the descriptions says "The story is not about alchemy. Please ignore the title". So you mean to tell me that we're suppose to ignore the thing that supposed to draw our attention first? Nah screw that and screw this novel for title baiting people! Note: This would get a 0 if it could be given.
It's a really great story.. There's just many wrong word like, magic spell should be charms, herbalism is herbology, tooth is fang, auditorium is great hall, etc.. But it's ok, I know what you mean.. But it will be better if you still use the right word 😁😁😍👍
This Story Is great but I'm I the only one that wants to scargle his sister like she is spoiled I understand keeping the wand far from her but then he gives it to her for practice as long he sees it like come on peoples wands aren't the death stick
......................................................(︶︹︺)( TДT)(｡-_-｡)(｡•́︿•̀｡)(∩︵∩)(︶︹︺)(｡-_-｡)(｡-_-｡)(︶︹︺)(︶︹︺)( TДT)●︿●≥﹏≤￣へ￣￣へ￣=￣ω￣=(*>.<*)\˚ㄥ˚\〣( ºΔº )〣（⊙.⊙）（⊙.⊙）(°ﾛ°٥)Ó( ° △ °|||)Σ (ﾟДﾟ;)Σ (ﾟДﾟ;)Σ( ° △ °)(＊￣︶￣＊)＜（－︿－）＞╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭╮(╯▽╰)╭-_-#●_●'Ω'v_v$_$-_-#＼（○＾ω＾○）／⊂(￣(ｴ)￣)⊃(●￣(工)￣●)(p＾ｪ＾q)ヾ(〃^∇^)ﾉ( ^▽^)σ)~O~)(*'▽'*)♪٩(●˙—˙●)۶٩(●˙—˙●)۶ヾ(¯∇￣๑)ヾ(¯∇￣๑)
Please, if you are going to write a harry potter fanfiction in english at least watch the movies in english. That way you don't write ridiculous names for spells and character like the "Almost Headless Nick"
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I give 5 Stars for this Novel. The reason For which I am doing this is For one main thing. I to, am a Salted Fish. (I also did it for the Vin-... *cough cough* for the EXP)
this is a fun fan-fic. i hope it stays good and finishes. you could work on update time though. if it updated faster I'm pretty sure you would be higher in the rankings
Not a bad story however nearly unreadbale due to certain word being americanised lile headmaster to principal and calling Dumbledore the president and not the chief warlock which seems sloppy.
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More chapters? Review: 10/10 Plot's good, story's good, very good. Thou idk about updating schedule, but its good. Our story is during Fred & George Weasley's year.
Noice one, a slow fan fict for now. But it takes the time to put every needed info in. The system makes things a little convenient tho. Hope the story will turn out to be good when serious things start
Good....................................................................................................................................................................................................
Thanks for translating it, it's unreadable in google translate/original source...................................................................................
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Good work but too many muggleborn loving protagonists out there .I really want something unique a muggleborn who wants wizard culture superiority.
d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:dd:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D::D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:d:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:
a really good polt devlopment. Should the grammar improve its a real great find ,........................................................,
The story is a good idea but it feels as if isn’t being pulled off in the best way. The reasoning has to do mainly with the character interaction and occasional grammar issues. The characters, specifically the MC feel almost mechanical in their interactions. One example is when he interacts with other kids there was dialogue in which he offered candy and then thought something along the lines of “this has shown to work well when inducing social interactions while in school.” The only other thing is the constantly changing gender and name of his owl. Outside of that it is a great story that I have enjoyed reading.
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I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend I’ve read up to the most recent chapter (717), it’s very good, I recommend
Is this ff a re-post? I'm sure I've read this before but author said he was stopping writing it bcos some morons couldn't see the hidden gem that it was. if so I hope it doesn't get dropped again.
LOL the story is pretty great but man some else tried to translate the story and got soooo much hate for Harry Potter and The Alchemist list is what the dude called it its up to chapter 56.
Where's the mandatory author review??! I came to spam the comments of that review after reading this nice story but ****! Author/Chief Editor didn't give any review. Are you crazy? How can you just forget our traditions so easily???! Post a review and lemme spam the comments section. Hmph!
Loved the story. Till now it's fun and exciting let's see how it goes on future. I would love to finish this book as fast as possible so I would like request translator to increase the pace.
What a Noice book! Why didn't I find this when I was bored and free? Now that I have so many assignments to finish, this book appeared here on webnovel. I really want to finish reading this on MTL but 😢😢😢 Anyways I'll keep following this book here on webnovel. As it's just one or two chapters per day uploaded here.
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This fuking shit is a gem. I loved it. I'll review it, I'll vote for it. Because this shit is addictive. Loved it, Binged it. Drop it and see how I beat the shit out of you.
No está mal, la historia transcurre un poco lenta pero se deja leer bastante bien. Ya no me apetece escribir más si que hasta aquí hemos llegado