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this book is good however I can't handle much mystery. and I don't like past involved so much in book 😭😭 I like living in present So byyy....
Honestly speaking, this book has so much potential its just that whenever something happened it will go flashback to the skipped scene which is really annoying if it continues to be like it. It's much better to detailed it according to the event or scene since it was already there, but jumping to a scene the do flashback of the previous scene which could also be a proper scene, will tend to get confusing. it doesn't add up to what we call hidden scene. Over all, this book is good just need some retouch and it will be even better.
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i just started this story and so far i really like it. there is a small issue with he/his and she/her getting all mixed up but it doesn't really take away from the story itself .
bagus emang ceritanya dan nyesel nih baru baca sekarang. bikin kepo Deh kelanjutannya dan nggak sabar baca kelanjutannya. semangat ya. di tunggu next ceritanya ya [img=update][img=update][img=update]
definitely a must read.. It really pulls you in and makes you so engrossed in it that you just don't want to stop reading it.. [img=update][img=update][img=update] Great Job Author I will definitely keep reading as you post more.. 🥰🥰🥰
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The story is very very very VERY good. I love the characters. And it is very creative too. I also love its mystery. Waiting for the next chapter... 😊
Really interesting and .recommended. i love it waiting for the next chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can't say much more because it's so interesting! All characters are unique. The plot is fresh and easy to understand😍😍😍😍 I need more![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very interesting! I really like the idea in this novel. Cool and stunning. I hope the writer can continue to write it well. Cheer up !! 😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Vraiment cool et j'ai imaginé à quel point Fu Xie LAN serait génial. J'ai vraiment aimé cette histoire dès le début de sa lecture. J'ai vraiment hâte au prochain chapitre
Really cool and I imagined how great Fu Xie LAN would be. I really liked this story from the very beginning of reading it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
Romantic fantasy,, ughhh can't wait for the next chapter. keep spirit authorrr [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
As a romantic fantasy lover, this is one of the best works, I recommend, the characters that are built are also unique, cool. really looking forward to the continuation of the story.
one of the neatly and epic written fantasy stories, each hanger at the end of the chapter makes you more curious and wants to keep reading, keep the writer excited, I'm waiting
Looking for a female lead who is tough and strong, has character, and has an adventure with many unimaginable figures, I read the local version and expect a lot with the English version.
this will be an interesting STORY set in an epic and unique setting. neat writing, makes it easier for readers to understand and like this great story. [img=coins][img=coins]
wow wow wow I don't how to describe this masterpiece 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 just read and you will never regret reading this😌😌😌😌 this story will pull you into the world 😆😆😆😆😆
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this book is good however I can't handle much mystery. and I don't like past involved so much in book 😭😭 I like living in present So byyy....
Honestly speaking, this book has so much potential its just that whenever something happened it will go flashback to the skipped scene which is really annoying if it continues to be like it. It's much better to detailed it according to the event or scene since it was already there, but jumping to a scene the do flashback of the previous scene which could also be a proper scene, will tend to get confusing. it doesn't add up to what we call hidden scene. Over all, this book is good just need some retouch and it will be even better.
揭示劇透 i just started this story and so far i really like it. there is a small issue with he/his and she/her getting all mixed up but it doesn't really take away from the story itself .
bagus emang ceritanya dan nyesel nih baru baca sekarang. bikin kepo Deh kelanjutannya dan nggak sabar baca kelanjutannya. semangat ya. di tunggu next ceritanya ya [img=update][img=update][img=update]
definitely a must read.. It really pulls you in and makes you so engrossed in it that you just don't want to stop reading it.. [img=update][img=update][img=update] Great Job Author I will definitely keep reading as you post more.. 🥰🥰🥰
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The story is very very very VERY good. I love the characters. And it is very creative too. I also love its mystery. Waiting for the next chapter... 😊
Really interesting and .recommended. i love it waiting for the next chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I can't say much more because it's so interesting! All characters are unique. The plot is fresh and easy to understand😍😍😍😍 I need more![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Very interesting! I really like the idea in this novel. Cool and stunning. I hope the writer can continue to write it well. Cheer up !! 😍😍😍😍😍😍
A very interesting story to read. Goodddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd
Vraiment cool et j'ai imaginé à quel point Fu Xie LAN serait génial. J'ai vraiment aimé cette histoire dès le début de sa lecture. J'ai vraiment hâte au prochain chapitre
Really cool and I imagined how great Fu Xie LAN would be. I really liked this story from the very beginning of reading it. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter
Romantic fantasy,, ughhh can't wait for the next chapter. keep spirit authorrr [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
As a romantic fantasy lover, this is one of the best works, I recommend, the characters that are built are also unique, cool. really looking forward to the continuation of the story.
one of the neatly and epic written fantasy stories, each hanger at the end of the chapter makes you more curious and wants to keep reading, keep the writer excited, I'm waiting
Looking for a female lead who is tough and strong, has character, and has an adventure with many unimaginable figures, I read the local version and expect a lot with the English version.
this will be an interesting STORY set in an epic and unique setting. neat writing, makes it easier for readers to understand and like this great story. [img=coins][img=coins]
wow wow wow I don't how to describe this masterpiece 💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜💜 just read and you will never regret reading this😌😌😌😌 this story will pull you into the world 😆😆😆😆😆