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I liked the story a lot.The plot , character development are all good.I hope the author start updating it again soon.
I really love this novel! the characters are interesting and the world is built really well. I'm just a tiny bit annoyed by the language mistakes.... They're perfectly understandable (esp if English is not your first language or you're using a speech to text or handwriting scanning app) but it kinda takes the focus off the story. Author san, if you're reading this, do you need a free editor (working hrs and productivity would be variable tho)? I don't have relevant experience but I really want to read the story (and maybe help others too) a bit more easily.
The story is great. The characters are super interesting, it reels you in to find out more and go on this amazing journey with them but I have to give it 2 stars on the story development. It keeps building up with these details, and backstories that it’s so easy to get lost and become confused. I was loving it but at a point I had to stop reading because it felt like there were too many things happening and too many characters being introduced from the past and present. In summary, it’s a good story but it’s pretty easy to get lost in the details since they’re not well layed out
Writing quality and stability were given 4 stars, but everything else a 5. I took a star from quality because, yes, there are sometimes grammar mistakes or a chapter where the layout is confusing. But I would definitely still be reading this despite that because the mistakes are hardly affecting the reading experience as a whole. I took a star from stability because this story does not have a set release rate, but because I’ve only been reading it for a week, I can properly judge how the release rate is from week to week. The world background is very well though-out and displayed in a simple but intricate way that makes it easy but still enjoyable to read. Would definitely reccomend trying this novel out, the characters are lovely written and each have their own depth to them. Thank you, author, for all your hard work that you gave to make this novel. Please don’t abandon it, it’s really good!
(This review might be a little bit long but it’s my first so I apologize in advance) The writing is SO good! All the characters have a certain depth to them. They're fun and the author also shows the reader the thoughts behind their actions in such a clear and understandable way (without taking away the suspense and thrill or making it boring). In regards to world building, there is a good fusion between the tradicional cultivation world and the modrn world. Throughout the story you can see and experience the changes and fusion of both worlds through the characters memories and esxperiences. There is fluff, sweet moments, and also hardships that will lead the characters closer together. Give it a try, you won’t regret it!!👏🏻
The most attractive thing about this book is its plot. The plot is very different... something I have never read before. The synopsis is well written. No grammatical errors so far. Those who loves adventure, I think they will love how the story unfolds as Raizel complete the to-do-list for his junior brother. Looking forward to read more [img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a fantastic story. The pacing, the plot, the characters are all intriguing. Following Raizel on his journey back from Terra into the modern world is fun. I loved the explanation of his Daos and techniques as well the cultivation system. The English is really good and I had a great Time moving along this journey[img=recommend] Thumbs up author
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i love how you write your characters, it makes the readers understand them easily! kudos to how you thought of the plot as well, very nice. kudos to you! <33
For starters, great writing. What I love most was that I could easily portray every movement, every emotion, every action taken by everyone so vividly that it was literally out of this world. Second, the flow of the story was great, engaging, and easy to understand. Third, conversations were well written and for the most part, everything felt very mysterious and that's a really good sign. The only problem was that the chapters were too few. Would recommend to upload more chapters. All and all though the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
I enjoyed reading this story! Characters are full of humor and I like the writing style. The world building is crafted nicely, although I wish some of the stuffs (like how different talismans are used) are explained or introduced but maybe it's because the author avoids info dumps. Pace of the story is great as well. As for the writing quality, everything is good for me. I could also clearly imagine the scenes in the story. I'm excited to read more. Great job author!
The details of the environment and the events are very precise. It really makes you synchronize with the story. I can't find any errors to the writing, making it quite pleasant to read. The tale starts very enticing in a way, and with the details, I can actually see what's happening. It keeps getting better and better, and I love it!!
Writing Quality: I rate it as four, I like how you shot and not just tell. But there were a few details that were not necessary but it was alright since it could be your style and I respect that. Stability of Updates: Still rated 4. updates should be consistent but since everyone has their busy day then It's understandable. Story Development: Still rated 4. The phase was smooth, there were some lapses but it was barely noticeable. Character Design: The lead , the supporting characters , they develop well. The descriptions of characters from Lord Raziel , Olivia , and other such were imaginative. However, I only read five chapters. World Background: I rated 4. The surroundings and its current issues were explained well. [img=recommend] Do not hesitate to read this novel! The book contents is good~
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Hi, so sorry about the late review, something came up and I couldn't get access to the internet. Let me begin by saying that I read so many cultivation type novels that now when I see when and it doesn't seem particularly interesting I dip and run, but your concept is really intriguing. I love it! The idea of him having to complete this ridiculous list seriously is just hilarious. And his character is soooo great. I love the his inner monologues and how sarcastic he sounds and really the way he reacts to the modern world. Just gold. In terms of writing, it reads smoothly and easily and no glaring grammatical errors. However, there is a lot of information being told to you and not shown. This is more a personal opinion, because I find it hard to concentrate on the story when there's info dumping and a lot of the time I would end up skimming over to get to the good parts. Just wanted to point it out. I didn't want to give a run of the mill review and give false praise without any feedback, so sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Anyway good work, Fighting!
This is actually a hidden gem on this app! I love everything about it! Your style makes the reader submerged in every detail. This plot definitely exceeded my expectations. The title and book cover on the other hand totally meet the content. Added to library and can't wait for more!
The story was very well written! And I suppose the writing style would also work perfectly if the author chose to write a comedy oriented novel. I really like this!
Wow! That's all I can say from reading the first chapter already, the story is skillfully written. This will stay in my library and give it a vote, after all this deserves to be read my many people.
The story was really good. It has a great plotline and solid characterization. It was funny, especially at some parts that cackle me up. Although, there were also some parts that were confusing, like the sudden changes in point of view and the unseparated thoughts or the contents of the book to the narration. Still, it's in my library now, though.
The Novel is well written. The plot is very engaging to read. Hope the Author will update with more stable chapters. Author work is much appreciated.
Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy named Raizel who'll embark on a journey to fulfil an oath he gave to his dying friend. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially kaizel. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
Hmm..After reading, I will say that the novel is easy to understand and to imagine because of your descriptive paragraphs/dialogues in the novel. The hype becomes stronger every chapter. Good luck to your WSA Journey and Keep it up.
I really like this novel's premise, it's kinda like magic, old ages, and modern ages all meshed together. The writing on it is very well done, my only complaint would be that it's hard to understand who's perspecttive the story is from, I don't mean dialogue, but the story itself. other than that, amazing job!
This gets you into action right from the start, which I enjoy. The descriptions are also very well done and I enjoy the characters personalities. Good job!
Keep up the good work. Just started reading and I can see myself reading the last chapter with the exact same love and excitement... Adding to my favourite list. Tysm for this work...
A story about a hero waking up from his long slumber and going out to the modern world? I already know this is going to be fun. The writing style uses vivid imagery that matches well with pace, may it be the action scenes or the funny scenes. It threw me off when the POV changes from 3rd person to 1st and vice versa but I can live with it. Overall, this story is enjoyable and the characters have solid personalities. Good job, author! Keep up the good work.
I have actually seen your work in the pilot read for WSA and read few parts of your story. I really love how you wrote all the things with such precisions and showed the parts that needed to be described. Kudos for the author, and I cannot wait to read more of your work~
Author hooked me on the cover and also on the synopsis, the title itself is already intriguing for the fact it's "To-do List" and as a fan of writing my to do list, this is such a great idea and great concept. A To-do list that is not easy to be achieved. And oh, I didn't see any error from reading this! Give this a read!
This is pretty well written. While I don't read in this type of genre, I can still appreciate the level of skill in display here. The Author certainly has a way with words, and the flowery prose is really what sells it for me.
The novel is very nice, I liked the character of Raziel and his friend It's amazing how you combined the narration and the description It made me feel like I'm living events (your style is perfect)
I really liked how much attention to detail went into the beginning of setting up the world and it’s character. The author is very well versed in their writing skills, an experienced one. I enjoyed the few first chapters I read. Keep it up author, you’re work is very appreciated!
I liked the story a lot.The plot , character development are all good.I hope the author start updating it again soon.
I really love this novel! the characters are interesting and the world is built really well. I'm just a tiny bit annoyed by the language mistakes.... They're perfectly understandable (esp if English is not your first language or you're using a speech to text or handwriting scanning app) but it kinda takes the focus off the story. Author san, if you're reading this, do you need a free editor (working hrs and productivity would be variable tho)? I don't have relevant experience but I really want to read the story (and maybe help others too) a bit more easily.
The story is great. The characters are super interesting, it reels you in to find out more and go on this amazing journey with them but I have to give it 2 stars on the story development. It keeps building up with these details, and backstories that it’s so easy to get lost and become confused. I was loving it but at a point I had to stop reading because it felt like there were too many things happening and too many characters being introduced from the past and present. In summary, it’s a good story but it’s pretty easy to get lost in the details since they’re not well layed out
Writing quality and stability were given 4 stars, but everything else a 5. I took a star from quality because, yes, there are sometimes grammar mistakes or a chapter where the layout is confusing. But I would definitely still be reading this despite that because the mistakes are hardly affecting the reading experience as a whole. I took a star from stability because this story does not have a set release rate, but because I’ve only been reading it for a week, I can properly judge how the release rate is from week to week. The world background is very well though-out and displayed in a simple but intricate way that makes it easy but still enjoyable to read. Would definitely reccomend trying this novel out, the characters are lovely written and each have their own depth to them. Thank you, author, for all your hard work that you gave to make this novel. Please don’t abandon it, it’s really good!
(This review might be a little bit long but it’s my first so I apologize in advance) The writing is SO good! All the characters have a certain depth to them. They're fun and the author also shows the reader the thoughts behind their actions in such a clear and understandable way (without taking away the suspense and thrill or making it boring). In regards to world building, there is a good fusion between the tradicional cultivation world and the modrn world. Throughout the story you can see and experience the changes and fusion of both worlds through the characters memories and esxperiences. There is fluff, sweet moments, and also hardships that will lead the characters closer together. Give it a try, you won’t regret it!!👏🏻
The most attractive thing about this book is its plot. The plot is very different... something I have never read before. The synopsis is well written. No grammatical errors so far. Those who loves adventure, I think they will love how the story unfolds as Raizel complete the to-do-list for his junior brother. Looking forward to read more [img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is a fantastic story. The pacing, the plot, the characters are all intriguing. Following Raizel on his journey back from Terra into the modern world is fun. I loved the explanation of his Daos and techniques as well the cultivation system. The English is really good and I had a great Time moving along this journey[img=recommend] Thumbs up author
揭示劇透 i love how you write your characters, it makes the readers understand them easily! kudos to how you thought of the plot as well, very nice. kudos to you! <33
For starters, great writing. What I love most was that I could easily portray every movement, every emotion, every action taken by everyone so vividly that it was literally out of this world. Second, the flow of the story was great, engaging, and easy to understand. Third, conversations were well written and for the most part, everything felt very mysterious and that's a really good sign. The only problem was that the chapters were too few. Would recommend to upload more chapters. All and all though the work has great potential. Well done Author! Waiting for more chapters.
I enjoyed reading this story! Characters are full of humor and I like the writing style. The world building is crafted nicely, although I wish some of the stuffs (like how different talismans are used) are explained or introduced but maybe it's because the author avoids info dumps. Pace of the story is great as well. As for the writing quality, everything is good for me. I could also clearly imagine the scenes in the story. I'm excited to read more. Great job author!
The details of the environment and the events are very precise. It really makes you synchronize with the story. I can't find any errors to the writing, making it quite pleasant to read. The tale starts very enticing in a way, and with the details, I can actually see what's happening. It keeps getting better and better, and I love it!!
Writing Quality: I rate it as four, I like how you shot and not just tell. But there were a few details that were not necessary but it was alright since it could be your style and I respect that. Stability of Updates: Still rated 4. updates should be consistent but since everyone has their busy day then It's understandable. Story Development: Still rated 4. The phase was smooth, there were some lapses but it was barely noticeable. Character Design: The lead , the supporting characters , they develop well. The descriptions of characters from Lord Raziel , Olivia , and other such were imaginative. However, I only read five chapters. World Background: I rated 4. The surroundings and its current issues were explained well. [img=recommend] Do not hesitate to read this novel! The book contents is good~
揭示劇透 Hi, so sorry about the late review, something came up and I couldn't get access to the internet. Let me begin by saying that I read so many cultivation type novels that now when I see when and it doesn't seem particularly interesting I dip and run, but your concept is really intriguing. I love it! The idea of him having to complete this ridiculous list seriously is just hilarious. And his character is soooo great. I love the his inner monologues and how sarcastic he sounds and really the way he reacts to the modern world. Just gold. In terms of writing, it reads smoothly and easily and no glaring grammatical errors. However, there is a lot of information being told to you and not shown. This is more a personal opinion, because I find it hard to concentrate on the story when there's info dumping and a lot of the time I would end up skimming over to get to the good parts. Just wanted to point it out. I didn't want to give a run of the mill review and give false praise without any feedback, so sorry it took me so long to get back to you. Anyway good work, Fighting!
This is actually a hidden gem on this app! I love everything about it! Your style makes the reader submerged in every detail. This plot definitely exceeded my expectations. The title and book cover on the other hand totally meet the content. Added to library and can't wait for more!
The story was very well written! And I suppose the writing style would also work perfectly if the author chose to write a comedy oriented novel. I really like this!
Wow! That's all I can say from reading the first chapter already, the story is skillfully written. This will stay in my library and give it a vote, after all this deserves to be read my many people.
The story was really good. It has a great plotline and solid characterization. It was funny, especially at some parts that cackle me up. Although, there were also some parts that were confusing, like the sudden changes in point of view and the unseparated thoughts or the contents of the book to the narration. Still, it's in my library now, though.
The Novel is well written. The plot is very engaging to read. Hope the Author will update with more stable chapters. Author work is much appreciated.
Overall: This is a very interesting novel to read. If you want to read a fantasy book full of thrills, look no further than this. Highly recommended. Style - The author is using third person narration style. We are able to experience the feelings and actions of the characters. Well executed. Updating - As a writer myself, I give kudos to the author. Wtiting is very hard. I'm giving the autho 5 in this aspect. Story - Well planned. Story line is the heart of any novel, and this novel did a good job on its story. It's about a guy named Raizel who'll embark on a journey to fulfil an oath he gave to his dying friend. Hard to put down. Grammar - Excellent use of the grammar. No complaint on this aspect. The flow of the story is smooth which shows the effort that the author is putting into the writing. Commendable. Character - The characters are well written and designed. They fitted their roles, especially kaizel. Well written. The other characters are well catered for too. Kudos to the author. World: Its based on the fantasy genre settings. The author put great effort into this and it was perfect. Well done.
Hmm..After reading, I will say that the novel is easy to understand and to imagine because of your descriptive paragraphs/dialogues in the novel. The hype becomes stronger every chapter. Good luck to your WSA Journey and Keep it up.
I really like this novel's premise, it's kinda like magic, old ages, and modern ages all meshed together. The writing on it is very well done, my only complaint would be that it's hard to understand who's perspecttive the story is from, I don't mean dialogue, but the story itself. other than that, amazing job!
This gets you into action right from the start, which I enjoy. The descriptions are also very well done and I enjoy the characters personalities. Good job!
Keep up the good work. Just started reading and I can see myself reading the last chapter with the exact same love and excitement... Adding to my favourite list. Tysm for this work...
A story about a hero waking up from his long slumber and going out to the modern world? I already know this is going to be fun. The writing style uses vivid imagery that matches well with pace, may it be the action scenes or the funny scenes. It threw me off when the POV changes from 3rd person to 1st and vice versa but I can live with it. Overall, this story is enjoyable and the characters have solid personalities. Good job, author! Keep up the good work.
I have actually seen your work in the pilot read for WSA and read few parts of your story. I really love how you wrote all the things with such precisions and showed the parts that needed to be described. Kudos for the author, and I cannot wait to read more of your work~
Author hooked me on the cover and also on the synopsis, the title itself is already intriguing for the fact it's "To-do List" and as a fan of writing my to do list, this is such a great idea and great concept. A To-do list that is not easy to be achieved. And oh, I didn't see any error from reading this! Give this a read!
This is pretty well written. While I don't read in this type of genre, I can still appreciate the level of skill in display here. The Author certainly has a way with words, and the flowery prose is really what sells it for me.
The novel is very nice, I liked the character of Raziel and his friend It's amazing how you combined the narration and the description It made me feel like I'm living events (your style is perfect)
I really liked how much attention to detail went into the beginning of setting up the world and it’s character. The author is very well versed in their writing skills, an experienced one. I enjoyed the few first chapters I read. Keep it up author, you’re work is very appreciated!