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The setting and characters are so interesting! I'm still very early in the book but so far my curiosity is peeked and I would love to see how this all plays out!
I don't even know where to begin. One word to describe this story "AMAZING". I love the writing and the world building! And don't even get me to begin with the characters. I love LOVE ASCIAN!! This vampire lord is a DADDY. I can already see what a boyfriend material he is even though the FL hasn't been introduced yet. On that note, I also love the relationship between the characters. But, even more so with the intricate mystery presented in the story. Although there's only 10 chapters, you can already see the conflict unfolding nicely. So many questions and that peaks my curiosity. All in all, this is a fun read! If you like fantasy and VAMPIRE, do give it a try because lemme repeat: ASCIAN IS A DADDY <3
Amazing! That is the right word I could find to describe this book. The characters and description are amazing. Each chapter is captivating, it makes you want to read more. Keep up the good work author, I can't wait to read more. 💖💖💖
I have just started reading the book and I am already hooked to it. Can't wait for the further chapters now. I love the character building and also how every chapter has a knack of keeping you at the edge of your seat. Keep it up dear prada!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow, such mystery! I loved it, author. I'm so exited to read more! keep up the amazing work. I loved your writing style and your story. It's very unique! Vampires and werewolves?! I want to know more...
This is a very interesting read. Ell crafted characters and plot already developing well at earlier chapters. looking forward to see how this will go
This novel starts off on an interesting note, and I must say, chapter 4 is by far my favorite. Its ending is a real page turner, although I won’t give away too much details. Moving on, I must praise this author’s writing quality, which suits the novel perfectly. I loved the setting, and the flow of events that went by extremely smoothly, I can’t wait to see what will unfold during the next chapters, and I highly recommend this novel and suggest any reader looking for a novel with vampires, dragons, werewolves and royalty to look here! mari <3
Wow. This book is probably one of the best-written ones in webnovel. Only 6 chapters right now but so much has happened already. It was never short of description; rather it was action-filled, and very well narrated with emotion-inducing, smooth flow of events. Very much plot-driven. Mystery is there to unfold in the next chapters. Intensity also rises astronomically every chapter. Superb.
Wow... just reading the early chapters I know this is another great story in the making from this wonderful author. Writing quality is superb! I couldn't help but admire author's writing skills. The plot is so intriguing...I just love it, the combination of suspense, action , and mystery... mixed with some humors as well. I'm so excited to know more about Ascian's journey into the human world. Author you are doing great. Keep it up. Please write more chapters. You left us hanging. (sobs sobs) Anyway. all the best in your new book aithor. I will definitely support you.
Omg such beautiful writing! 😍 Author sure has a way with words and I was instantly pulled into the story. Writing and grammar is flawless and this vampire story is just what I need! 🤩 The mystery is right there from the beginning which hooked me instantly and now I am already done reading 😭 I want more chapters about Ascian wuwu..ima will bribe u with anything but pls just post more chaptersssss~~~🤭🤭 Loved the story and eagerly looking forward to the development ❤️ Good luck author 😃👍
Whoahh😀, Author, Vampires and the Mystery are the deadly combination. I am excited to read this book and I absolutely plan to stick with this series as I enjoyed the world building, loved the plot setting, and was intrigued by all of the main characters. Please please please mass release the chapters author, 🙃I want to finish this book...😌 I can't bear the mysterious suspense...😚 And ❤️ I wish you all the success dear❤️, I hope you should earn alot with massive votes and finally grab the Spirity loot💯...
First of all, I had no clue that the author has a thing for fantasy as well. Not only that, but she was able to do it so beautifully that found it hard to stop before finding myself at the end of the last chapter (chapter 14 as of now). I was going to leave a review after reading the first five chapters and then going back to reading the rest of the chapters. But oh my!!! It was not easy to tear my eyes away from the screen. I usually don't give a book five stars unless it actually deserves, so I think this alone is enough for you guys to know how much I adored the story so far. The worlds are drawn so beautifully that you can imagine yourself picturing them out. the transition from one to the other is done so flawlessly that it'd be hard for you find it random or hard. More so, the characters are written so wonderfully. There our almost none to zero errors which makes it easier for us to get engulfed into the story. Coming to the plot itself, I am already in love with Ascian, our vampire king. and I came wait to find more about the mysterious lady who had managed to get his heart. At the same time, I wanna know who the freaking had the guts to conspire against the vampire lord. Ahhhhh!!!! there's so much that I am looking forward to. Please update my dear author. Don't leave me hanging like this. I look forward to reading it all. Also, wishing u the best of luck for the contest. I am sure this story is going to go to great heights. ❤️
The setting and characters are so interesting! I'm still very early in the book but so far my curiosity is peeked and I would love to see how this all plays out!
I don't even know where to begin. One word to describe this story "AMAZING". I love the writing and the world building! And don't even get me to begin with the characters. I love LOVE ASCIAN!! This vampire lord is a DADDY. I can already see what a boyfriend material he is even though the FL hasn't been introduced yet. On that note, I also love the relationship between the characters. But, even more so with the intricate mystery presented in the story. Although there's only 10 chapters, you can already see the conflict unfolding nicely. So many questions and that peaks my curiosity. All in all, this is a fun read! If you like fantasy and VAMPIRE, do give it a try because lemme repeat: ASCIAN IS A DADDY <3
Amazing! That is the right word I could find to describe this book. The characters and description are amazing. Each chapter is captivating, it makes you want to read more. Keep up the good work author, I can't wait to read more. 💖💖💖
I have just started reading the book and I am already hooked to it. Can't wait for the further chapters now. I love the character building and also how every chapter has a knack of keeping you at the edge of your seat. Keep it up dear prada!![img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow, such mystery! I loved it, author. I'm so exited to read more! keep up the amazing work. I loved your writing style and your story. It's very unique! Vampires and werewolves?! I want to know more...
This is a very interesting read. Ell crafted characters and plot already developing well at earlier chapters. looking forward to see how this will go
This novel starts off on an interesting note, and I must say, chapter 4 is by far my favorite. Its ending is a real page turner, although I won’t give away too much details. Moving on, I must praise this author’s writing quality, which suits the novel perfectly. I loved the setting, and the flow of events that went by extremely smoothly, I can’t wait to see what will unfold during the next chapters, and I highly recommend this novel and suggest any reader looking for a novel with vampires, dragons, werewolves and royalty to look here! mari <3
Wow. This book is probably one of the best-written ones in webnovel. Only 6 chapters right now but so much has happened already. It was never short of description; rather it was action-filled, and very well narrated with emotion-inducing, smooth flow of events. Very much plot-driven. Mystery is there to unfold in the next chapters. Intensity also rises astronomically every chapter. Superb.
Wow... just reading the early chapters I know this is another great story in the making from this wonderful author. Writing quality is superb! I couldn't help but admire author's writing skills. The plot is so intriguing...I just love it, the combination of suspense, action , and mystery... mixed with some humors as well. I'm so excited to know more about Ascian's journey into the human world. Author you are doing great. Keep it up. Please write more chapters. You left us hanging. (sobs sobs) Anyway. all the best in your new book aithor. I will definitely support you.
Omg such beautiful writing! 😍 Author sure has a way with words and I was instantly pulled into the story. Writing and grammar is flawless and this vampire story is just what I need! 🤩 The mystery is right there from the beginning which hooked me instantly and now I am already done reading 😭 I want more chapters about Ascian wuwu..ima will bribe u with anything but pls just post more chaptersssss~~~🤭🤭 Loved the story and eagerly looking forward to the development ❤️ Good luck author 😃👍
Whoahh😀, Author, Vampires and the Mystery are the deadly combination. I am excited to read this book and I absolutely plan to stick with this series as I enjoyed the world building, loved the plot setting, and was intrigued by all of the main characters. Please please please mass release the chapters author, 🙃I want to finish this book...😌 I can't bear the mysterious suspense...😚 And ❤️ I wish you all the success dear❤️, I hope you should earn alot with massive votes and finally grab the Spirity loot💯...
First of all, I had no clue that the author has a thing for fantasy as well. Not only that, but she was able to do it so beautifully that found it hard to stop before finding myself at the end of the last chapter (chapter 14 as of now). I was going to leave a review after reading the first five chapters and then going back to reading the rest of the chapters. But oh my!!! It was not easy to tear my eyes away from the screen. I usually don't give a book five stars unless it actually deserves, so I think this alone is enough for you guys to know how much I adored the story so far. The worlds are drawn so beautifully that you can imagine yourself picturing them out. the transition from one to the other is done so flawlessly that it'd be hard for you find it random or hard. More so, the characters are written so wonderfully. There our almost none to zero errors which makes it easier for us to get engulfed into the story. Coming to the plot itself, I am already in love with Ascian, our vampire king. and I came wait to find more about the mysterious lady who had managed to get his heart. At the same time, I wanna know who the freaking had the guts to conspire against the vampire lord. Ahhhhh!!!! there's so much that I am looking forward to. Please update my dear author. Don't leave me hanging like this. I look forward to reading it all. Also, wishing u the best of luck for the contest. I am sure this story is going to go to great heights. ❤️