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20.68% Rise Of Immortal Dawn / Chapter 36: Can You See What I See? Part 2

章節 36: Can You See What I See? Part 2

After Holly had set up the equipment and had the monitor showing what the telescope was seeing, Dawn then asked Marcus if he could tell her the coordinates of the planet he had seen aliens on.

"I could give you the coordinates from the day I saw them but it won't do you no good today because that planet has moved." Marcus lectured them.

"So we won't be able to do our own verification then?" Dawn asked.

"I didn't say that!" Marcus angrily replied, "Give me a minute to work the math out in my head and I can give you the coordinates of where that planet should be today!"

"Deep breath buddy! Deep breath." Holly soothed, "We're not the guys that keep ridiculing you. We're just trying to see for ourselves, ok? So let's take a chill pill."


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Sorry for having to break the indtroduction of Marcus into two chapters but I didn't want to leave you hanging last night and wanted to be able to introduce him in a way that would present his general personality as well as a touch of his backstory without making it sound boring.

Now, as usual, I must ask you for some feedback. Please leave me some reviews, some comments, and (hopefully) some powerstones.

Thanks

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