/ Anime & Comics / In Fairytail with Painting magic
摘要
A young man suddenly transmigrated to Fairytail with Painting magic.
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> English is not my main language so you all may notice many grammar mistakes and spelling etc. At least it's better than MTL
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寫檢討its unique i guess !...and its pretty good but as usual the authors on this website write with a kind of "chines/wuxia" style of speech for their characters like " so it turned out to be like this" .. " this" "shameful" etc etc .. as a said somewhere in the comments chines dialect or wuxia dialect just ruining the whole thing especially when its original Japanese story from the start .. Japanese and chines stuff just don't mix at all .. welp that's just my opinion
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This is actually really cool and it feel original to use painting magic. Anyways I like it, I just hope that you will give us more chapters and will Mira be the Mc girl?
The Paint Magic is original ando ubique. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The story is great and the MC is good, but the Grammar is kinda bad and needs some serious proofreading. It could have been so much better if someone edited it or something, Maybe consider using Grammarly. Anyway, the story and idea is great, and will continue to read it and see your improvements.
Really enjoyed it so far. Early introduction to fairytail makes it stand out from all the fan-fiction that introduces MC to fairytail around when the main story begins.
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This must be one of the most boring books ever. For a guy that reincarnated from modern earth, with all the anime and comics on how to use powers and magic relating or close to his painting magic, he does a pretty good job of making the magic as average as it can be. The book just drones on and on and on, and I find myself just scrolling up really fast. I cannot understand why the overall eating for this book is so high cause this book is just plain boring.
you said it's a "maybe harem" so here is an automatic 1star for you(delete this if its not a harem) .........................................................................................................
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the idea of the novel is very good and not very strong but quite useful, I want to ask if this is a novel in translation? or not? if yes i want to know the link
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作者 Luxanna_
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