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Honestly, if u can read past the stupidity of the mc, it would be a decent read. The first hurdle in the reading comes unassuming. He is supposed to be a reincarnation of a 30 y/o, not a kindergartner. He seems to make the logical action then does something beyond stupid to force the plot armor card to appear. Then he repeats. The mc seems to have 2 personalities, the one that is logical and then there is the one that embodies arrogance, with nothing to back it up, and stupidity, with no reasoning behind why. The logical one is the one barrating while the other one is the one acting and doing the stupid to force the plot along. Then there are assumptions made everywhere that have no evidence, like them being dragon royalty or something. All of it comes as if the narrator is unreliable without the author meaning to. It would have been better if the author didn’t make the mc a reincarnator. It would have been a better read and would not have all of these problems.
I’ve only just got to chapter 27 and this is fantastic! I‘m look forward for the upcoming chapters, and thanks to the author for providing this!
it can be a bit clunky at times with weird story development and things that literally come out of nowhere but it is a pretty good story and worth reading.
are the disciple of the werewolf died in the other dimension or imprisoned? without to mention that necro is not mad.The sons of the golden are dead or they are take revenge who knows.
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to be honest when I first started reading this i misread the title as my life as a reborn tentacle monster, so I got really into expecting certain things. when I read that he was a dragon, by the time i realized I misread the title i was already into the story so I didn't really mind. anyway this is a great novel. hope everyone else is enjoying it like i am
So before I delete this novel from my library purely because I do not want to see the cover again I wanted to tell you to delete that cover because it is horrible, atrocious, I mean if I saw that cover on my first time using Webnovel I would delete the app it looks like it’s made for children delete it
mc couldn't use these abilities. He is always forced into bad situations. Something gets in the way. He can't consume animals. The plot seems too hard. mc needs to kill and consume living things, but he can't do it. mc is stupid, he acts with his emotions, his brain doesn't work.
My kind of humor and an interesting story. If you can handle minor grammar issues (there/their, your/you’re, lack of commas, ’a lot’ being one word instead of two…) then it is an amazing book worth reading.
A dragon that is so pathetically weak and always seek comfort in his inner monologue's despite having a system and a legacy which is both thrash in my opinion
Author here with a shameless review.... I love writing this story. This in a way is very therapeutic for me and is my momentary escape. I only hope that you find some enjoyment even among the misspelling and errors that im sure i missed. thank you for spending your time reading
I really love the concept of the story, the writer did a great job in the beginning and I am hooked, mc is a dragon meaning huge potential, I cant wait to see how he will interact with various aspects of the world, and how he deals with being a dragon.
if only there weren't so many mistakes with Grammer then maybe I could get myself to read more of this. sadly, Grammer is a major part for me and this story doesn't clear the bar.
That fact that the mc gets beaten for character development is amazing love it.__________________________________________________________•.•
Its honesty okay, and just that its okay. The paragraphs are a bIt too long so its a mouthful to read that big chunk of text. The character interactIons are a bIt rough. I’d say give it a try as it could be good but it was hard for me to read. Best of luck author!
the story already had me once I read those Godly lines, involving truck-lun ................................................................ yeah
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
So far so good I'm waiting on more chapters though I'll surely keep an eye on it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have read the first 2/3 chapter and I liked it I hope there will be more chapter.😃 ......................................................
kekekekkekekekekekekekeke did u by any chance reincarnate as a slime mahahahhahahhahahahahah this time u got reincarnated as a slime that would be quite funny
It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out. Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out! Good luck!
Is the R18 tags for lemons or for gores? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
drop all exceptions for dragon and reincarnation . also for system and gultony legacy . this MC Don't use any of this for as long as i have read .all you will get is useless family drama and depression from MC that you didn't even connected yet.he is dragon with system and gultony legacy .it just that he is little weaker than his siblings . now that little weakness will be all this story focus on. an older but physically weak man can easily win against teens , teens can win against children even if they run slower than children . why ...? because of experience . no intelligence , no planing just pure exp. but our reincarnated MC struggle against newborns . is the family drama a reason for reading such fantasy novel about reincarnation , dragon , system and magic ? with that childish cover photo and catchy title about dragon and reincarnation i didn't prepare my self for a emotional and drama. it was depressing Mr . author . that is the reason for long essay for short review . i hope you read the whole thing .
Honestly, if u can read past the stupidity of the mc, it would be a decent read. The first hurdle in the reading comes unassuming. He is supposed to be a reincarnation of a 30 y/o, not a kindergartner. He seems to make the logical action then does something beyond stupid to force the plot armor card to appear. Then he repeats. The mc seems to have 2 personalities, the one that is logical and then there is the one that embodies arrogance, with nothing to back it up, and stupidity, with no reasoning behind why. The logical one is the one barrating while the other one is the one acting and doing the stupid to force the plot along. Then there are assumptions made everywhere that have no evidence, like them being dragon royalty or something. All of it comes as if the narrator is unreliable without the author meaning to. It would have been better if the author didn’t make the mc a reincarnator. It would have been a better read and would not have all of these problems.
I’ve only just got to chapter 27 and this is fantastic! I‘m look forward for the upcoming chapters, and thanks to the author for providing this!
it can be a bit clunky at times with weird story development and things that literally come out of nowhere but it is a pretty good story and worth reading.
are the disciple of the werewolf died in the other dimension or imprisoned? without to mention that necro is not mad.The sons of the golden are dead or they are take revenge who knows.
揭示劇透 to be honest when I first started reading this i misread the title as my life as a reborn tentacle monster, so I got really into expecting certain things. when I read that he was a dragon, by the time i realized I misread the title i was already into the story so I didn't really mind. anyway this is a great novel. hope everyone else is enjoying it like i am
So before I delete this novel from my library purely because I do not want to see the cover again I wanted to tell you to delete that cover because it is horrible, atrocious, I mean if I saw that cover on my first time using Webnovel I would delete the app it looks like it’s made for children delete it
mc couldn't use these abilities. He is always forced into bad situations. Something gets in the way. He can't consume animals. The plot seems too hard. mc needs to kill and consume living things, but he can't do it. mc is stupid, he acts with his emotions, his brain doesn't work.
My kind of humor and an interesting story. If you can handle minor grammar issues (there/their, your/you’re, lack of commas, ’a lot’ being one word instead of two…) then it is an amazing book worth reading.
A dragon that is so pathetically weak and always seek comfort in his inner monologue's despite having a system and a legacy which is both thrash in my opinion
Author here with a shameless review.... I love writing this story. This in a way is very therapeutic for me and is my momentary escape. I only hope that you find some enjoyment even among the misspelling and errors that im sure i missed. thank you for spending your time reading
I really love the concept of the story, the writer did a great job in the beginning and I am hooked, mc is a dragon meaning huge potential, I cant wait to see how he will interact with various aspects of the world, and how he deals with being a dragon.
if only there weren't so many mistakes with Grammer then maybe I could get myself to read more of this. sadly, Grammer is a major part for me and this story doesn't clear the bar.
That fact that the mc gets beaten for character development is amazing love it.__________________________________________________________•.•
Its honesty okay, and just that its okay. The paragraphs are a bIt too long so its a mouthful to read that big chunk of text. The character interactIons are a bIt rough. I’d say give it a try as it could be good but it was hard for me to read. Best of luck author!
the story already had me once I read those Godly lines, involving truck-lun ................................................................ yeah
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
So far so good I'm waiting on more chapters though I'll surely keep an eye on it[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have read the first 2/3 chapter and I liked it I hope there will be more chapter.😃 ......................................................
kekekekkekekekekekekekeke did u by any chance reincarnate as a slime mahahahhahahhahahahahah this time u got reincarnated as a slime that would be quite funny
It is a good story with some cliche parts, like every fantasy story, but it feels like there are many unnecessary parts and some conversations that are forced or unnecessary or dragged out. Overall I like the story and the slow development, but the conversations between characters doesn't feel smooth for me (don´t know how to describe it), but I will stick around and see how it turns out! Good luck!
Is the R18 tags for lemons or for gores? ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
drop all exceptions for dragon and reincarnation . also for system and gultony legacy . this MC Don't use any of this for as long as i have read .all you will get is useless family drama and depression from MC that you didn't even connected yet.he is dragon with system and gultony legacy .it just that he is little weaker than his siblings . now that little weakness will be all this story focus on. an older but physically weak man can easily win against teens , teens can win against children even if they run slower than children . why ...? because of experience . no intelligence , no planing just pure exp. but our reincarnated MC struggle against newborns . is the family drama a reason for reading such fantasy novel about reincarnation , dragon , system and magic ? with that childish cover photo and catchy title about dragon and reincarnation i didn't prepare my self for a emotional and drama. it was depressing Mr . author . that is the reason for long essay for short review . i hope you read the whole thing .