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This is a very character-driven book, whose main players are very well defined. The story also has many comedic elements and moments that give it life. It is very well written and is certainly well worth adding to the library! First thing I should note is that I am typically not a fan of protracted resolution. But I understand the reason why the technique is employed, and certainly appreciate when it is done well. This book does this very well. Those who enjoy this type of storytelling will most definitely love this book. There are a few word, grammar, and structural choices that are a little bit weird, but not so off as to take away from the overall story. Well done, author! I think I'll check out a couple of your other books as well and see how those play out as well.
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The concept is nice I must say. But, maybe it's just me, the pace of the novel seems slow. The paragraphs tend to get a bit too long and proofreading would help. However, the plot is promising so keep it up!
Quite a cute writer and artist dynamic ☺️ There is the feel of a slice-of-life theme on it, which is one of the things I enjoy in stories. Loving the simplicity as well as the compelling way of describing the mood and settings. Though the synopsis is a little too drawn out, it is hooking and interesting. Haven't read that far ahead yet but I would like to come back since this has such a relatable concept 😊
I've seen plenty of slice of life anime and read plenty of slice of life novels. But this one is something different. The concept is great, first of all - a light novel author and a mangaka? C'mon now. That's bound to be a good mix. Then there's the writing quality - pretty much flawless. Stability of updates? Not much to say there. Story development - the speed doesn't really suit me, but that's up to personal preference, so it doesn't really matter. Character design - awesome. Comedy was nicely done so we, as readers, could engage with the fictional characters. World background isn't all that important in slice of life novels like this one, but the author still did a good job describing it. Good job.
Wonderful story. It just pulls you in, each chapter makes the story better and better. You just get drawn into the story as you keep reading. The characters have so much depth and everything is so detailed that it's hard to lose focus for even a second. This looks to be a promising book so I'll keep reading it, if anyone else is wondering if they should do the same, I definitely recommend it, you won't be disappointed.
I really like this novel. Actually, I rarely read those novels with first POV and present tense, bht man, your novel was unique. I was hooked in the first chapter itself! Keep up the good work!
Definitely worth my time. I enjoyed the story all the way. You did a splendid job , author. You gifted us with the ability to imagine and play the scenes out in my head. Thats the main thing I look out for in a book. Kudos to you author👍👍👍
it get me immediately hooked by the plot. It feels like i'm seeing a real life story. Kudos to the author for a great story 😁 I myself will probably get annoyed if my work was made into manga without my consent
it's a very fluffy story I've ever read here on webnovel. aside from the slice of life feels, the writing style and plot was too unique and relatable! gonna read some more!
I don't usually reade this kind of genre, but this book it's well written. The author is talented and the characters are deep. Nice story though, immersive world 🌍
I love the cover as I love the manhua! The story of a writer and a mangaka resonate well with me because before I get serious in writing, I love drawing mangas but, it's all in the past The story is well-develop but, I have a suggestion for you. For a paragraph that seems too long, you could divide them to keep your readers' focus in check Keep it up!
Oooh I really, really love how the story's going so far. As a writer myself, Yuki is such a mood. I also love her relationship with Roxy. I think those characters have been really well made. The overall writing is very smooth and enjoyable to read. In all, it's really amazing and refreshing! Great job author!!!
I am intrigued. First of all, a romance on webnovel normally just turns me off, because it moves way to fast. But look, a first episode that doesn’t so fiercely, and one relateable to the authors on this site. Interesante. Like mc as well.
wow brilliant story so far from first few chapters, characters are brilliantly complex and interesting at the same time. Can't say much on the plot yet but definitely like the story's flow , hope your story does well author.
I loved the way the author described the scenes—very vivid, and the humor is on point! Characters are realistic albeit a little comedic, but it just adds more flavour to the story. A recommended read for sure!
You got a nice Synopsis in the beginning, though it stretched to half a cheaper... The writings and flow are brilliant with fine descriptions where most writers on WN sucks. Hats off to the author for the effort. it started with a nice premise, though I can't say about the idea being original. It nonetheless persisted with its originality. it's a good book to binge on if you're bored with you're vamps and Wolfs I love that there's no retard billionaire in the story.🤪🤪 wishing you success.
Hmmm... Just got a little confused as I wasn't used to reading first-person POV and the name Yuki as male... Gomen... But the story is cute and light. If you read light shoujo manga or light novel, you would love this. Good luck author~
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
This is not my usual genre of writing - which is why I'm all the more impressed that it could garner my attention! The drama is descriptive and well-paced, and I'm excited to follow along. Good job!
It made me smile while I was reading the chapter one until three, it is good. Specially when I saw manga topic , it got me hooked. It really is a lovely story for me. [img=recommend] Give this book a chance readers!
Writing a novel that contains themes very familiar to real life (like what this novel has to offer involving light novels and manga) while also at the same time still engaging can be a challenge for some people. The author here has successfully done that. Admittedly, readers will have to be patient for early chapters, as we get a detailed and extensive series of paragraphs painting the entire picture. Thankfully the main character has a recognizable voice and the narration does not make the writing dull, it makes the writing more clear in context. Good job author, keep up on the good work.
I love school romances . A story between a light novel author and a managaka too. I'm a sucker of this trope. The story is immersive and the writing style is elegant. A great book and possibly a new big in the romance genre!!! Great work!!!!!
Okay, review update! The progress of the story is going really well! As always, the writing style is eloquent and really enjoyable to read. I adore the main character, her fiery personality, but also how loving and kind she is. I know a lot of authors who struggle to create well balanced characters, but this one is very good! I am enjoying how everything is progressing, and love the style of narration. The only think I would comment on is that the tense changes from time to time, but other than that, very good! Lovely work author!
Nice story I really like reading it. Keep up the good work dear author. Looking forward for more drama and excitements! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
deserves a five star! I love the plotline, the first 3 chapters was exciting for me. I have fun with the chapters that I've read. I love the story narration and the development of the story. The story is really interesting and worth to read. BTW i love how you put yourself as the main character. COOL! Adding this to my library! Keep up the good work author.
This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.
I like Yuri. I mean Yuki. Yeah, I had a lot of fun with this concept and especially the characters. I especially adore the first couple of paragraphs and the relationship between Yuki and Roxy. I'm super down to see how the Romance plays out between Yuki and Nickson, we need more love stories between introverts. I'm down for the raw sexual tension, -I mean romantic chemistry.
If you like sangatsu no lion, then you will like this. If you read this novel thinking this is about writhing light novels or mangas, you will be disappointed. Because it is so much more. The novel is a character drama, exploring the relationship between the two protagonist and their surroundings. Highly recommended.
This is a very character-driven book, whose main players are very well defined. The story also has many comedic elements and moments that give it life. It is very well written and is certainly well worth adding to the library! First thing I should note is that I am typically not a fan of protracted resolution. But I understand the reason why the technique is employed, and certainly appreciate when it is done well. This book does this very well. Those who enjoy this type of storytelling will most definitely love this book. There are a few word, grammar, and structural choices that are a little bit weird, but not so off as to take away from the overall story. Well done, author! I think I'll check out a couple of your other books as well and see how those play out as well.
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The concept is nice I must say. But, maybe it's just me, the pace of the novel seems slow. The paragraphs tend to get a bit too long and proofreading would help. However, the plot is promising so keep it up!
Quite a cute writer and artist dynamic ☺️ There is the feel of a slice-of-life theme on it, which is one of the things I enjoy in stories. Loving the simplicity as well as the compelling way of describing the mood and settings. Though the synopsis is a little too drawn out, it is hooking and interesting. Haven't read that far ahead yet but I would like to come back since this has such a relatable concept 😊
I've seen plenty of slice of life anime and read plenty of slice of life novels. But this one is something different. The concept is great, first of all - a light novel author and a mangaka? C'mon now. That's bound to be a good mix. Then there's the writing quality - pretty much flawless. Stability of updates? Not much to say there. Story development - the speed doesn't really suit me, but that's up to personal preference, so it doesn't really matter. Character design - awesome. Comedy was nicely done so we, as readers, could engage with the fictional characters. World background isn't all that important in slice of life novels like this one, but the author still did a good job describing it. Good job.
Wonderful story. It just pulls you in, each chapter makes the story better and better. You just get drawn into the story as you keep reading. The characters have so much depth and everything is so detailed that it's hard to lose focus for even a second. This looks to be a promising book so I'll keep reading it, if anyone else is wondering if they should do the same, I definitely recommend it, you won't be disappointed.
I really like this novel. Actually, I rarely read those novels with first POV and present tense, bht man, your novel was unique. I was hooked in the first chapter itself! Keep up the good work!
Definitely worth my time. I enjoyed the story all the way. You did a splendid job , author. You gifted us with the ability to imagine and play the scenes out in my head. Thats the main thing I look out for in a book. Kudos to you author👍👍👍
it get me immediately hooked by the plot. It feels like i'm seeing a real life story. Kudos to the author for a great story 😁 I myself will probably get annoyed if my work was made into manga without my consent
it's a very fluffy story I've ever read here on webnovel. aside from the slice of life feels, the writing style and plot was too unique and relatable! gonna read some more!
I don't usually reade this kind of genre, but this book it's well written. The author is talented and the characters are deep. Nice story though, immersive world 🌍
I love the cover as I love the manhua! The story of a writer and a mangaka resonate well with me because before I get serious in writing, I love drawing mangas but, it's all in the past The story is well-develop but, I have a suggestion for you. For a paragraph that seems too long, you could divide them to keep your readers' focus in check Keep it up!
Oooh I really, really love how the story's going so far. As a writer myself, Yuki is such a mood. I also love her relationship with Roxy. I think those characters have been really well made. The overall writing is very smooth and enjoyable to read. In all, it's really amazing and refreshing! Great job author!!!
I am intrigued. First of all, a romance on webnovel normally just turns me off, because it moves way to fast. But look, a first episode that doesn’t so fiercely, and one relateable to the authors on this site. Interesante. Like mc as well.
wow brilliant story so far from first few chapters, characters are brilliantly complex and interesting at the same time. Can't say much on the plot yet but definitely like the story's flow , hope your story does well author.
I loved the way the author described the scenes—very vivid, and the humor is on point! Characters are realistic albeit a little comedic, but it just adds more flavour to the story. A recommended read for sure!
You got a nice Synopsis in the beginning, though it stretched to half a cheaper... The writings and flow are brilliant with fine descriptions where most writers on WN sucks. Hats off to the author for the effort. it started with a nice premise, though I can't say about the idea being original. It nonetheless persisted with its originality. it's a good book to binge on if you're bored with you're vamps and Wolfs I love that there's no retard billionaire in the story.🤪🤪 wishing you success.
Hmmm... Just got a little confused as I wasn't used to reading first-person POV and the name Yuki as male... Gomen... But the story is cute and light. If you read light shoujo manga or light novel, you would love this. Good luck author~
The book is so interesting... The plot is amazing, the style of writing is kinda interesting too. Not to mention the very attractive title. I love everything about this book so far 😍
This is not my usual genre of writing - which is why I'm all the more impressed that it could garner my attention! The drama is descriptive and well-paced, and I'm excited to follow along. Good job!
It made me smile while I was reading the chapter one until three, it is good. Specially when I saw manga topic , it got me hooked. It really is a lovely story for me. [img=recommend] Give this book a chance readers!
Writing a novel that contains themes very familiar to real life (like what this novel has to offer involving light novels and manga) while also at the same time still engaging can be a challenge for some people. The author here has successfully done that. Admittedly, readers will have to be patient for early chapters, as we get a detailed and extensive series of paragraphs painting the entire picture. Thankfully the main character has a recognizable voice and the narration does not make the writing dull, it makes the writing more clear in context. Good job author, keep up on the good work.
I love school romances . A story between a light novel author and a managaka too. I'm a sucker of this trope. The story is immersive and the writing style is elegant. A great book and possibly a new big in the romance genre!!! Great work!!!!!
Okay, review update! The progress of the story is going really well! As always, the writing style is eloquent and really enjoyable to read. I adore the main character, her fiery personality, but also how loving and kind she is. I know a lot of authors who struggle to create well balanced characters, but this one is very good! I am enjoying how everything is progressing, and love the style of narration. The only think I would comment on is that the tense changes from time to time, but other than that, very good! Lovely work author!
Nice story I really like reading it. Keep up the good work dear author. Looking forward for more drama and excitements! [img=recommend] [img=recommend] [img=recommend]
deserves a five star! I love the plotline, the first 3 chapters was exciting for me. I have fun with the chapters that I've read. I love the story narration and the development of the story. The story is really interesting and worth to read. BTW i love how you put yourself as the main character. COOL! Adding this to my library! Keep up the good work author.
This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.
I like Yuri. I mean Yuki. Yeah, I had a lot of fun with this concept and especially the characters. I especially adore the first couple of paragraphs and the relationship between Yuki and Roxy. I'm super down to see how the Romance plays out between Yuki and Nickson, we need more love stories between introverts. I'm down for the raw sexual tension, -I mean romantic chemistry.
If you like sangatsu no lion, then you will like this. If you read this novel thinking this is about writhing light novels or mangas, you will be disappointed. Because it is so much more. The novel is a character drama, exploring the relationship between the two protagonist and their surroundings. Highly recommended.